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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

So a little bit of sympathy is sneaking in for Arnav...but only a little. It could all blow away in the wind if he keeps up his ASR persona!! Brilliant update.

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Rabiah Samiullah

@Rabiah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

Superb update... Full of emotions .. Loved especially how you wrote Arnav's dilema... Can't wait to read more...

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Aparna Mohan

@zoyadarkrose

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

Brilliant update.. . 👏
'If only. . .' I could write like this 😍

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Sophia Khan

@Sophia21

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Awww I literally teared up... Arnav is goin thru such a difficult time... n so is Khushi.. She's pregnant but she aint even sure of her future.. bless her.. This is gettin more interesting.. great update.. Continue soon =)

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Congrats on the new thread!! Really nice update :)

I like the pace of the story!

Cant wait for the next update, Please do update soon :)

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pinkswan

@pinkswan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

intense! awesome update 👏

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--Nargis--

@--Nargis--

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

What a tremendously painful chapter, and you did full justice to it...so Kudos!!👏 So much turmoil for both of them, and you brought it through effortlessly!!

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polly_mk

@polly_mk

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Oh my... Arnav's inner battle is heart wrenching. I love your writing.

But one thing I am not able to fathom is how he is blaming all prostitutes for what happened to his sister. I don't understand. It is too much narrow minded and unrealistic thinking. Even after hearing Khushi's story of how she was forced into this business by her father, still he is "blaming" her indirectly for what happened to his sister. Why doesn't he put the full blame on Shyam? He is a today's man... what's with this regressive thinking?