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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#171

Wow this was truly a beautiful update..nd the way each chapter of your story rePresents the title it's just beautiful!! 😃

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daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#172

wow.it was so touching masam.my eyes wer moist reading it.

u knw frnd,i read ur update aftr knwing the horrible truth of arnav's intention,with fear.but this update drenched my heart a bit.

i mean he is suffering wen he is doing the sin.he shud not let his child go thro what made him like this.

anjali took a wise step.nani wont be able to handle this.i hope she can get it out from arnav n stop him from doing this sin.i really really hope so.

i hope,even if arnav leaves her,payal comes to her rescue.she cudnt help her sister last time.i hope akash wud let her knw in time n help her rescue her little sister.

thank God tht kushi is not daydreaming.but poor thing.

ur title is really appropriate

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AnnieCheli1997

@AnnieCheli1997

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Posted: 13 years ago

#173

Heyy,
This update was so emotional!! I mean, all the ups and downs of this pregnancy, this marriage, are being shown now!!
Khushi's happy but worried emotions, portraying her mother like nature, but who is afraid that she is goin to be declined of that very nature.
Arnav's inner argument, his fighting, his despair. He is pushing himself to depths of unknown desires. He's regretting all the decisions he's made, wanting to redo everything, and make it right.
Both of them really are starting to understan the importance in this relationship, and starting to love each other! Hopefully everything will be alright by the time 6 years are up!! But for that you need to keep updating!! So please continue soon!! :) xxx

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afsha

@-afsha-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#174

He can stop the coming wrath

He jus have to let go the past

I wish Anji speaks to Arnav then only he can clear his mind i feel

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

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Posted: 13 years ago

#175

An amazing update...the dilemma they both are in...its js awesome

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tehzeeb25

@tehzeeb25

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Posted: 13 years ago

#176

awwsum prts...both12 n 13...updt soon

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Water

@Water.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#177

IF ONLY - the last update...chapter 13 was not so heart wrenching...

Just the thoughts he is going through in his head...the turmoil...is enough to cause a clench in my gut multiple times...

Lovely...

U r an amazing writer.

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@LumosMaxima

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Posted: 13 years ago

#178

WAooo.

LOved it.Congratulations on the Second thread. 😊

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#179

Omg!!!!! the best chp so far!!! loved it! every feeling beautifully conveyed!!!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#180

Brilliant!

Fab writing..the conveying of Arnavs emotions..the flow of thoughts..Were excellently done!

It sgetting so so gripping..intense,my eyes were al misty..!
👏Superb Update.

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