Arhi SS: A Crack in the Mirror Chp 8 Updated

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ah!! a fun part!!! this guy is defo Arnav and the scar gives me another proof.
He seems cool types.. I like him... did he just say ' not even a goodbye... how rude??" 😆

Ok.. so these r going to same university? loved the your car, my care argument.

See you after next chapter..

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

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As the story progresses my interest over Khushi's past is increasing . Clearly, something big would have happened with her otherwise she wouldnt be so much submissive with meeting ppl, hugging people.

Finally Arnav knows her name! I loved when he said, Are you paid to get angry or you do it for free 😆

Now I gues with newer environment.. Khushi with help of Arnav break the shell and come out 😊

See you after part 5

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Hahah love this Arnav.. and before I get distracted describing him I should add this one.. this Kellie is really weird.

Ok back to Arnav.. happy, flirty and a good dressed one. I really like guys who are well dresses you know.. But sadly most guys I see r the worst dressed people. Now I know you have not progressed with their feelings but I can clearly say this guy is smitten with her. So she's stuck for 4 years with him? Hope it turns 400 [;-)]

Will see you after Chap 6

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#274

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Have loads of questions

Is Arnav following her?
Does Arnav know her from before?
What was he drawing?
What is Khushi's past???

OMG!!! ts a bloody questionnaire... You have to answer them all do you get that!

Though we finally know Arnav has something to do with Khushi!!!

See you after chapter 7
p.s. the story is interesting!

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#275

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This chap was through Arnav's POV right? Correct me if I'm wrong. He was also a disturbed child I guess and Khushi's mom and his mom were best friends.. So he is there to help her out to break her shell right? So in coming chaps we'll get to read both of them healing each other of their pain right?

Waiting for more of your updates.

See you after Chap 8

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#276

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Love Khushi's dress..

So finally Khushi is mingling with ppl./ thats a good news... and Arnav isnt speaking much yet affecting her with his presence! cool!!!

Now I am more interested to read abt the christmas Party!!!! I am sure there will be flames [;-)]

Post it soon...

Huff!!!!! Finally I commented on all the chaps... I feel so relieved 😊

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: munam_13
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Love Khushi's dress..

So finally Khushi is mingling with ppl./ thats a good news... and Arnav isnt speaking much yet affecting her with his presence! cool!!!

Now I am more interested to read abt the christmas Party!!!! I am sure there will be flames [;-)]

Post it soon...

Huff!!!!! Finally I commented on all the chaps... I feel so relieved 😊

I absolutely loved how you commented for each chapter! Thank you! :)

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soppy

@soppy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#278

oh my god i just found this ss and read it in one go!...u are a brilliant writer!...please update soon...and could you please pm me when you do?

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Dalmuthuya

@Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: soppy
oh my god i just found this ss and read it in one go!...u are a brilliant writer!...please update soon...and could you please pm me when you do?

Welcome aboard, and indeed I will :) Thank you very much!

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cupcake-

@cupcake-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#280

I read this story in one go and I am entrapped by your writing style. It just flows and you have expressed fear and angst in a very voluble manner. The first chapter managed to spook me a bit. I thought it was a horror fic but as it went on.. wow. Khushi and Arnav's pasts are so deeply intertwined and flawlessly sketched out. Phenomenal, Dal!( if I can call you that)

I am so glad I caught up with this fic at this stage. I don't think I could have waited for you to update each chapter. Its mind blowing. Your fic deserves a lot more comments but don't forget that there are many readers who want you to update. And I am a new addition to that list. Waiting eagerly ;)