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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mfcblue

Can u please PM me when you update. Thanks im really enjoying



Thank you to read my SS, i will update more soon and I will PM you soon when i update more 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you to read my SS, i will update more soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice beginning update... send.. PM
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

Jay Khanna House (Mumbai)

In Khushi's car, she looked at her watch and she shocked. She think Akshat going be late in school, she close her eyes and pray her god 'Hey Devi Mayian please save my son on time in school and i want the traffic go away'. Khushi opened her eyes and she heard the car go moving forward on the front. She feel happy and Khushi driving the car to go Akshat school. Akshat say 'Amma i'm going be late in school and ' My teacher will scold me if i'm going be late' Khushi say 'don't worry we going be drive fast', seat your belt on and 'sit back beta'. Then Khushi parked her car near Akshat's school. Akshat took his belt off and Khushi carried his bag and his pack lunch. Khushi and Akshat got off the car. They walked by hands in school by gate. Khushi and Akshat stopped by gate. There are on time and it is 9 o'clock. Khushi say 'be good boy' and i will drop you off soon'. Khushi gave Akshat his bag and his pack lunch. Akshat smiled his mummy, Khushi hug his son Akshat and kissed his forehead. Khushi smiled and Akshat say 'Bye Amma' to Khushi and Khushi smile and 'bye' to Akshat. Akshat left. Khushi turned forward to her car and Khushi felt something wrong and worried. She flashback from the breakfast table part. She forgotten the Jay files. Khushi phone Kashish say ' Hello' 'Kashish i forgot Jay files, can you passed me the file from Jay room please' Kashish say 'okay sis i will get the file and give to you when you come here' then Khushi smile. She put phone down and drive back to Jay house. She knock the door and Kashish opened the door then give the file. Kashish smile and 'bye' to Khushi and Khushi say 'thank you bye' to Kashish and she walked back to her car. She look at her watches and felt worried, then She drive her car to the office, she feel that she is late in office and it's15 minutes late .

Will Jay angry on Khushi? Will Jay be late his meeting in the meeting room? Find out soon 😊


Edited by Fahiz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you to read my SS.. I'm updated of Part 3 now 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#16

Part 3

Business Tycoon & Owner of AR Group of Industries

Arnav Singh Raizada walked in corridor to wears white shirt, black trouser and black waise coat with blue tie then came in his meeting room with the different part of business, He sit on his own chair in the meeting and talking about the important of the Fashion show. Then he heard his mobile phone ringtone and tell the people 'excuse me'. Arnav get up and walked by window, talk his sister Anjali on the mobile by private.

Phone conversion

Anjali say:- Chotte what time are you coming home?

Arnav say:- In the evening Di

Anjali say:- Okay chotte come home soon

Arnav say:- Okay Di i will talk to you after

Arnav put the phone down and turn around, tell everyone the meeting is cancelled now. Everyone left from the meeting room and Arnav is alone in the meeting room, Arnav looked at the window, lost his smile, felt sad since last 5 years and he missing Khushi a lot and He had flashback of Khushi which is bad memories from the past.

Arnav Singh Raizada House (Delhi)

Payal and Akash Singh Raizada had one daughter, Her named is Kanan and she is 8 years old.

Anjali and Shyam Manohar Jha had two twins one boy and one girl, the twins named is Rishi and Prerna. Rishi and Prerna is 7 years old, Rishi was born first, Rishi, Prerna and Kanan like to play together.

Arnav came home and looked everyone in the house. Anjali asked 'Chotte do you want to eat dinner now' Arnav say 'No Di i'm not that hungry' then Arnav walked away to his room. Anjali felt sad. Payal, Akash, Mami and Nani control by Anjali. Arnav opened his room door and went to his pool. He looked at the sky and feel sad by emotional from the past.

Owner of JK Group of Fashion Business

Khushi closed the door by car, she hold her bag and Jay's files. She looked worried and she think what should i tell him?. She feel that she will be dead and she walked into Jay Khanna Group of Business building. She asked Maya from the reception and Khushi asked Maya 'Hello' 'Maya is Jay is in the office'? Maya asked Khushi 'Yes Jay is in the office'. Khushi say 'Thank' to Maya and Khushi smiled at Maya then Khushi left. Khushi walked into Jay's office, she feel worried and she knock the door. Jay say 'Come in', Khushi opened the door and look at Jay. Jay looked at the file on the chair and Khushi walked to Jay table. Jay looked at Khushi and Jay looked at Khushi and feel angry face. Khushi face look down and Jay got up then walked to Khushi. Jay took the file from Khushi hand and Jay asked Khushi

Conversation

Jay say:- Why did you came late Khushi?

Khushi say:- I'm sorry Jay i was picked Akshat up from school and i was still stuck in traffic

Jay say:- You came in 15 minutes late and i'm going be late in meeting

Khushi say:- I'm sorry Jay again it will never happen again.

Jay say:- If you make mistake again, then i won't talk to you then Jay left. Khushi feel upset then walk to her office.Khushi sit on the chair, still thinking of Arnav from the past and she still missing him a lot.

I will update part 4 soon

Edited by Fahiz - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it's very nice but is very short ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: INGCIV

it's very nice but is very short ?



Yep SS mean short stories.. Did you like my SS? 😊 Do you want me to continues now?
Edited by Fahiz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you to read my SS, i will update soon amd i hope you liked it 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for the pm...

Okay..the story is good--I'm just kinda confused about the time-line...the ages of the kids and all...guess I'm dragging too much info from the series to your story...sorry.

Patiently waiting for more...

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