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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 39

Next Morning:

DK is in the front of the mirror getting ready for his meeting. Disha comes with his jacket and helps him put it on.

Disha: Mr Segail, you are looking nice!😉

DK: Mrs Segail, you are always looking nice!😉

Disha blushes and starts to walk away, when DK grabs her hand and pulls her back. 😛

Disha: DK, i was going to get you your coffee.

DK: i don't need coffee i need you.

DK starts to bite at her ear and neck. Then kisses her cheek.

DK: What time is it? (kissing her neck)

Disha: nearly 9, O'clock.

DK: I should go! (he kisses her again on the cheak) See you later, we can go out later if you want!

Disha: OK! (Smiles at DK)

DK leaves but then there is a knock! It's DK!!!!

Disha: DK tum?

Dk: I forgot something! (Smiling)

Disha: what?

DK: This! (Kisses her cheak and leaves) (DK laughs)😆

Disha: DK! (Disha closes the door and Smiles)

There is a knock at the door again!

Disha shouts: Go away DK!!

There is a knock at the door again!

Disha opens the door and shouts:

Disha: DK!!

But is shocked to see who it really is!!

stay tuned please reply!!

love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 40:

It's Raj!!!😡

Disha move back from the door and Raj invites himself in!

Disha: Dk is not here!

Raj: I have not come for DK but for you.

Disha: I will not go anywhere with you! (Scared)

Raj: You will have to go with me even if you don't like it Disha!

Raj moves towards Disha and covers here mouth with a hankichief, where disha goes unconsious and raj takes her from there and leaves a note!

Later:

Dk returns happy and says:

DK: Disha!

No reply!

DK: Disha! Disha! where are you?

DK checks the bathroom and the garden but still no sign of disha!

He goes towards the bed to find a note which has his name on. "DK Segail"

DK reads the note and is not happy and leaves the room and gets into his car and starts to drive off and while in the car starts to ring someone, but we don't know who yet!!

DK puts the phone down. And thinks to himself!

DK: Don't worry disha i'm coming! Raj will pay for this.

Stay tuned and please reply!!

Love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

great eran 👏

keep up the good work!

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Posted: 20 years ago

that was really good

write soon i really want to know what happens.

is dk gonna kill raj?😆

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Posted: 20 years ago

omg eran this is amazing! its sp much better than wt the guhas is doin at the mo! im hooked i need ur nxt part!

wt exams r u revising for? iv got my alevels in 2weeks but ill keep comin to check ur updates!

luv

minnie

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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 41:

DK gets out of his car and see's there is a building with nothing in it but broken glass, and pieces of materials all over the floor. Looks like a old factory! He looks around and see's Disha infront of him which Raj is holding on to. Disha is screaming and crying. She spots DK and starts to get away but Raj gets angry and gets a gun out!!!

Raj: Stop it are i'll shot DK!!

Disha stops moving but starts to cry!!

DK is walking towards them and says:

DK: Disha, are you all right?

Disha is still crying, Raj laughs!😡

DK: If you hurt my wife i will kill you Raj.

Raj: You kill me not if i kill the person you live for!!

Disha looks at Raj, shocked!

DK: Don't hurt Disha you can do what you want with me but please don't hurt my wife! (crying tone)

Disha: No DK, i don't care what he does to me but please don't get yourself hurt!! (crying)

Raj: what is this both of you will die for each other, then i should kill both of you.

DK looks at Disha and she looks at him.

DK: why are you doing this? What have i done to you.

Raj: what have you done to me! You have taken everything from me!!! The one person i loved you even took her from me!

DK: what are you talking about? who?

Raj: Preeti! Thats who i'm talking about!😡

DK: What does she have to do with this?

Raj: I loved her and she loved you!

DK is shocked and so is Disha!

DK: She didn't tell me that! And she went missing, knowbody knew where she was!

Raj: (Laughs) Knowbody knew because i didn't let them!

DK: What?

Raj: I killed Preeti!! She was my love and i can't let her be with anyone else!

DK: You killed her, Look Raj nothing happened between us i didn't even know she liked me!

Raj: I know because the day she went to confess her love i killed her! 3 bullets in the back! (Laughs evil) I hate you Mr DK Segail, you have everything and you still manage to get all these women who will die for you. Why? because you have money, i have money too why don't they love me!! 😡 You have always had it your way but not now, you darling wife will stay with me!!

DK: Raj, please i am not that DK Segail anymore i have changed and i reallly love Disha i don't need any other women in my wife!!

Raj:No Dk!!

Stay tuned

Love eran!!!

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Posted: 20 years ago

omg that is soo cool

plez update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!

later

Goldi2

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Posted: 20 years ago
eran
it's perfect i just read all of them again
i wish that the serial's writer reads this and puts it in the serial😉
keep on writing u r doing great👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
hi eran

keep up the good workand write the next part soooooonnnnn👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
hey man i am loving every min.. keep going!

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