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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: blah_blah

great part!!!!

emotional tho!!! 👏



thx alot 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Pooja922

omg....no way....make kripa be ok!!! continue soonn



thx for the comment 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73


PART 5
a- KRIPAAAAAAAAA 😭
the doctors came running in
angad mom came in
the doctor check kripaa
d- omgggg, can u plzz takee angad outside
a- naaa mom i want to stay with kripaaa
am- lets goo
a- naa(crying)
everyone in angad family came in
and dragged angad outt and wasn't going outt
a- KRIPAAAA(crying )
a- kripaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
they dragged angad outside and made him sit down and relex
angad was crying outt loudd , he couldn't stop cause somee where inside him, he was saying
kripa isn''t gonnaa survive
angad mom couldn't see angad in this conditon
she started crying
after 6 hours the doctors came outt
angad ran to the doctor
a- kripaa
the doctor looked down
angad got scared
a-mom wat is he doing tell him to tell mee iff kripa okiee
angad mom started too cry
a- doctorr plzz tell meee (broke down crying)
d- am sorriee butt
a- wat godd damn it tell meee plzzz
d- shee in a comaa and it might take year for he to commee back cause of the internal bleeding
angad was deadly shoockked
a- KRIPAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
angad couldn't take thiss pain in hiss heart
angad then had a heart attack
am- angaddddd
angad fell down holding him heart
they all grabbed him and admitted him in the hopital
the next morning
angad opened him eyes but was frozen, he didn't talk, he didn't movee, he just didn't want to live
angad mom couldn't see him in this condition
angad mom took good care off him but angad wasn't improving cause he just didn't want to live
😭
after 2 month passed
angad family prayed alot for angad and kripa
angad was still the same the doctor said they need kripa to comee infront of angad ti improve
krippa was still in comee
angad mom went to see kripa
she sat near kripaa
am- kripaaa if ur listening plzzz listen(crying)
am- angad is in bad shapee only u can help himm plzzzz kripa i begg u gett beetter kripaa plzzz(crying alot)
am- kripaa plzzzzz 😭
kripa hand moved abit
am- kripaaaa doctorrr
the doctor cam e
am- shee moved her hand
the doctor check kripa
d- omg that a mirical, she impoveing that good
am- when will she get finee
d- i can't say maybe tommoroe u never noo
am- omg (smileing)
angad mom went out and told everyone nad everyone was so ohappy and thx godd
they al went and spent the whole night taking to kripaa to make her impvoe and it did work
kripa suddenly came out of comaa
k- ang,aa.dd a.nn.gg.a.dd
saying that kripa had woke up
k- angaddd
angad mom came in
am- kripaaa
k- mummy jii
am- kripaa omg thx god ur okie
k- where angadd
am-........
k- mummy jii plzz tell meee
angad mom told kripa everything
kripa was shoocked
and ran to angadd
k- angaddd
kripa sat near angaddd
k- angadddd
she kissed angad in the cheek
kripa grabbed angad handd
k- angad am here am finee plzzz wakee upp noee angadddd
angad was still the samee
k- am ganna take care off u till u improve that a promise to mee
weeks went by
angad came homee but was still the same but imprived about cause kripa was with him
day night kripa took such good care off angad that in a month angad was fineeee

I HOPE U LIKED IT !!!!!!

Edited by kyph05 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
awww glad a-k are better 😆 awesum part like always 👏 cont soon
himani
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Sour Skittles

awww glad a-k are better 😆 awesum part like always 👏 cont soon
himani




thx alot 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
awww that was a touching part!!i luvd it
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

great part! Con t. soon!



thx alot 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: Mehandikhan

great plz cont soon. 👏



thx alot 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: me_iq

awww that was a touching part!!i luvd it



thx alot 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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ommmggg! kashish wonderful part. yay for AK they both are fine. continue soon 👏

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