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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooja922

omg....poor kripa waat a dilemma shes in...ocntinue soon



thx for the comment 😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
aww that was a wonderful short part. bichara unborn.. aur kripa then therez selfish angad 😆 but i see wht he means... anyways it was wonderful
continue soon
luv,
Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
that was a mindblowing part!!i think kripa shoulnt b aborting the kid!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i thnk she shud keep da baby n hw can angad be sooo selfish
gr8 part
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: ruby89

aww that was a wonderful short part. bichara unborn.. aur kripa then therez selfish angad 😆 but i see wht he means... anyways it was wonderful
continue soon
luv,
Ruby



thx alot for the comment
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: me_iq

that was a mindblowing part!!i think kripa shoulnt b aborting the kid!!!



thx for the coomment 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: girlie18

i thnk she shud keep da baby n hw can angad be sooo selfish
gr8 part
cont soon



thx for the comment 😃😃😃
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Posted: 19 years ago


PART 8

IN THE MORNING
kripa was sleeping when angad came in the room
angad went in the closit
k- angad
angad ignored her and grabbed him clothes and went in the other room kripa got up and went down starts to make breakfast
angad came down and was about to leave
k- angad eat before u goo
a- am not hungray byee
angad lft
k- angaddd
kripa was sit alone in the house
kripa the called angad
a- helloo
k- heyy
a- kripa am very bussy at work i'l see u in the night byee
k- wait
before that angad shut the phone
kripa was crying

IN the night kripa was waiting for angad but angad didn't comee
kripa called angad
k- hello
a- ........
k- angad come home plzz
a- am buzzy am still at work bye
k- i noe ur lieing
a-... bye kripaa
angad shut the phone
angad was sitting at the beach
kripa still waited for angad and fell asleep
angad had fallen in his car

IN THE MORNING
angad came homee
kripa was on the couch sleeping
angad walked up to her and stared at he inoccent face
then he touch kripa stomach
and closed him eyes,
he felt the baby brezze which made him happy but something in him was stopping him from staying away from the baby
angad then took his hand off the walked away, angad was in hiss room thinking
a- why don't i want this baby??
angad serious didn't noe why hw did wan't this baby
a- the bay will bring happyness in our lifee
am happy but not happy
angad then fell asleep
kripa woke up and went up stair and saw angad sleeping
kripa couldn't take angad madness kripa then got ready and went to the hospital
k- doctor i want an abortion
d- wat month
k- 4th
d- that a risk anything can happen ur life can goo
k- i dun care but plzz doo something to abort it plzz
d- i need ur husband to sign it
k- he agree but i b=need it done noee
d- kk thenn
kripa got set
they were in the operation room
angad then woke up yelling
a- KRIPAAA
angad then closed his eyes and felt the same way as he touched kripa stomach
angad then went downstairs and didn't see kripa
angad looked everywhere
angad then called kripa cell phone and the doctor picked up
a- helo kripa
d- this is the doctor
a- doctor???
d- yaa kripa here for an abortion
a- watt
d- she'd on her4 month and it's hard to abort the kid and he life could goo too, it's not safe but she's isisting so were doing itt
angad was shohcked and his phone fell out of hiss handsss
angad drove fastly to the hopsital and reached there
angad went in front
a- where kripa khanna
s- he's in the operation theri
a- angad was schhoocked
angad walked slowly toward the room and cryed soo much h
angad broke
a- it's all my falut only if i understood the feel before it all my falut am sorriee kripaaa(Crying)
the doctor came out
angad looked at the doctor
angad eyes were full with tears
behind the doctor stood kripaaa crying in tears
angad and kripa stared in each other eyes which were fll with tearss

I HOPE U LIKE IT???
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwww omg poor kripa....angad should've realized earlier lol...that was a very emotional but fantastic part....continue soon! 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
pooja i agreee Anagad should have realized before. anyways kashish aww tht was a good part, emotion though. but its all good. I loved it 👏
continue soon
luv ya,
Ruby

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