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Divjot_10

@Divjot_10

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Posted: 19 years ago

#161

Hey Mauli,
This an awesome ff, and I think I just finished reading it within half an hour😆😆 LOL. It's really great fan fic. I love ur story.U really got some talent there. Bechari kripa ka plan use khud ko hi bhari pad gaya.😉 Angad😡😡😡 why did he have to bring Simi at home. Poor Kripa. Seriously, it is an awesome story line👏 I realy enjoy reading this ff. Good job!! Good Luck👍🏼 and I can't wait to read further. Bye
Divjot 😊

Edited by Divjot_10 - 19 years ago

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Arra Dollie

@insia12

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Posted: 19 years ago

#162

hahahaha 😆 😆 😆 that was a nice part

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#163

the next part is going to make you all VERY shocked!!!!! Trust me!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 😉

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#164

thanks everyone! 😃 you're going to be knocked away by the next part!! 😆 😆

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#165

i might continue later this day! 😃

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#166

ok... i'll continue today... but later!!! 😃

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yasmin

@simply_thebest

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Posted: 19 years ago

#167

plz continue !!!!
i want to know wht they r doing in the room ( Angad nd simi)
poor Kripa 😭 😭

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Ruhee

@night girl

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Posted: 19 years ago

#168

realy good part i want to kill angad right now....looks like angad is geting jelouse and is trying to do the same with kripa

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Mauli

@mpatel97508

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Posted: 19 years ago

#169

Part 17:

Kripa is trying to devert her mind from thinking about Angad and Simi together but can't. She decides to call her boyfriend.

K- Hello...
BF- Hey!! Kripa!! I missed you!!
K- I missed you too!!
BF- So... what's up??
K- Nothing... just bored... and my stupid EX-HUSBAND is SO boring!!!!
BF- Oh...
K- So where are you?
BF- Me?? Well I'm in California RIGHT NOW!!
K- OMG really? Come over!! I want to spend the night with you after SOOO long!!!!!
BF- Ok... I'll be there soon!!

Kripa smile and goes to her room. She rests for a while.

AFTER 30 MIN.

Someone is ringing the doorbell. Angad is getting annoyed and so is Simi.

(IN THE ROOM)

Simi is lieing under a blanket. Angad is ontop of her and is kissing her. The door bell rings for like 10 min. No one answers.

S- Who is it Angad??
A- I don't know...
S- Why isn't that.. Kripa opening it??
A- I don't know... that's exactly what i am thinking....

The doorbell rings again..

A- I'll be back sweetheart... (kisses Simi on the lips)

Angad goes towards the door and sees a guy with ripped jeans and a short-sleaved t-shirt. Angad gives him a confused look.

A- May I help you??
G- Yeah... you must be Angad... Kripa's EX- HUSBAND!!
A- Yeah.. And who might YOU be??
G- Me?? I'm...
K- He's my Boyfriend!!

Angad turns around and sees Kripa in a strapless metallic black shirt and a very short black skirt with boots up to her knees. Her hair is curled. Angad has his mouth open. The guy is just smiling at her. Kripa is blushing. (because of the guy NOT angad!!) Angad snaps out of his world and goes toKripa.

K- YOu go... I'll be there...
G- Ok..

The guy leaves and sits in his car waiting for Kripa. Angad REALLY goes close to Kripa.

A (holds her close)- Where in the world are you going with this GUY in such SHORT CLOTHES??
K (pushes him away)- Lay off Angad... Why in the world do YOU care WHO I am with and WHAT I am doing and WHERE I am going!!! IT'S MY LIFE!!!!!! And for your information ANGAD, I GOT AN ABORTION!!!!!!!! Now I am in NO REALATION with YOU!!!!!! You can live with SIMI and I WILL live with SOHAM!! (played by Ejaz Khan)

Kripa starts walking off. Angad grabs her arm and pulls her to him.

A- YOU KILLED OUR KID?????
K (tries to get free but can't)- YES I DID!!!! I DON'T WANT ANY REALATION WITH YOU!!! (calm) That's why i am leaving!!

Kirpa breaks free and goes to her room and takes her bag. Angad is SHOCKED!