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maazia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

😭 😭 Such a beautiful and tragic story.

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farah

@Endless-LOvE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Omg that was so sad..
Plz don't write those kind again..
Mujhe sad hi kar diya.
Why did u kill khushi aswas

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sanaroxx

@sanaroxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

That really made me cry Zehra :'( ..

Khushi no more ??? Gosh just couldnt bear that ...

You are such an Amazing Writer with lots of unique thoughts !!!

The questions the baby asked was lol .. but it hurted alot !!!

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incarnadine

@incarnadine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#154

👏 Great OS! but sad 😭

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trivedishraddha

@ShraddRajyaguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Awww,a touching start. . .
"You sitting quietly? That is
something new" Arnav
teased. . .😳

i could imagine the scene of Khushi instructing Arnav. . .i was imagining that Khushi was pointing her index finger to Arnav and instructing him.. .😆

and when you mentioned the Payal for more than two times,i thought some trick was used by Khushi. . .
😊

and then came the little girl!Awww Arnav is father,unbelievable . . .
my eyes popped out and my mouth went in a perfect 'o' too!
very touching. . .

His daughter's holding his coat and 'o' expression which you described,surely led me to the old ARSHI world. . .
amazing o.s.
thanks for sharing this beautiful and amazing o.s. with us. . .sincerely enjoyed. . .😊

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trivedishraddha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#156

although i was coming to this one,
i read it before going to your other o.s.,as,when i was starting to read your o.s.,Sleep,this one was recommend/mentioned in the beginning. . .😊
well,sooner or later,i was going to read this one anyways!
😳

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ragvir.fan

@ragvir.fan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#157

amazing piece...very very very emotional ...

i am crying literally...😭 😭

plz yaar never seperate them...

i cant bear it...

its so painful...

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sofiaroth

@sofiaroth

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Posted: 12 years ago

#158

o so thats why you didnt give a discription...hehe.

i always enjoy reading all of your work:)

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SunshineGirl6

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Posted: 12 years ago

#159

OMG Ive tears in my eyes..this was heart wrenching !!!

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FarighInsan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#160

I just read a few of ur one shots together tonight and this one was by far the saddest! I cant thinkv Arnav alone that way, its been too long that he's been, he has to hv his Khushi with him! Its heartbreaking! :( But then i did read d other Os that u wrote to cheer us up, Sleep! It was crazy funny, lol! The two of them are so hot and so innocent, lol! Luvd them both! And also Only On One Condition! Khushi really gave him a mental slap that time! He deserves to be told it how it is! He's never heard her side of it but u did her justice! Im sorry ive been away for so long, but hope i can be much more regular now! U knw i love ur work! :) <3

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