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Daspayel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

The OS written beautifully
its like a counterpart of Khushi's dream(when Arnav was missing)

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nj.123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Gosh that was SO SAD! It made me tear up, brilliantly written.

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MKyara

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

WHY...OH WHY DID YOU MAKE IT A SAD ONE SHOT!!!...it hurts...:'(...however awesome it was...i don like tragedies...:'(

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soumee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

wow...i first thought dis ws a cute loey dovey one shot...but d last para just blew me away...i mea i dint expect dis...nt at all...dis ws sooo touching, full of heartfelt poignant emeotions...n jst sooo sad...but d ending line is killer one...its jst wow...plzz pm me wen u write more...n i myt nt b able to online much frequently as der is gonna b pressure frm college...bt still bear wid me...n plz plz plz pm me...😊😊😊😊😊

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--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Beautifully penned..

Awesome description.

Brilliant emotive descriptions.

Thanks for the PM..

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Maddy1270

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

thank you Zehra for that dedication... when you write such amazing stories it becomes very easy to comment!

a very touching story... especially loved the childhood reminiscences; for a change, arnav has some happy memories of his childhood! khushi getting arnav to play hide and seek with her was cute... so looks like she came back as a ghost to keep arnav company! arnav's relationship with his daughter is heart-warming

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Sharmila

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Pls...pls don't tell me khushi isn't there!

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srijaaa127

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Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Wow superb one zehra...
Loved it
Thanks a lot

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shonagudia

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Posted: 13 years ago

#149

this was amazingly beautiful n sad.

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Shifa Khan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#150

Originally posted by: afnariaz
👏 for your work but it is sad .😭 too. Romantic beautiful OS.But Khushi is no more she is only in his heart and their baby girl ...Please Zehra please don't write like this I can't imagine this.Please don't do this to us.Tragedy tragedy I hate it.
I have a doubt why every writers of IF thinks Arshi's baby must be girl???Remind me anothe OS of your's Khushi as a teacher and Arnav came to pick up his daughter.That day I thought I will WARN you don't do this type of stuffs.Arshi is fine ok they will happily live long together.Please don't make us cry yaar

But it is awesome yaar

yeah dear..pls no tragedy😭