Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai? RTMC FF Prt 15-Page 82 - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Bells.E.cullen

by god kitna attitude hai iss bnde mein...
seriously smjhta kya hai khud ko...
fyn company ka malik hai dat doesn't mean humari sweet mahi ko itna attitude show kre...
but agr krega bhi to no use mahi ko koi frk nhi pdta... she is damn cool n mast bndi...
really luved all dialogues...
bechari aarav sir se milne pe faint hi ho gyi...
u r not intrested in mahi...
koi nhi dekhtee hain kb tk intrested nhi ho...
n rape,,, shrm nhi aati apni gf k baare mein aisa bolte hue...
but yaar i luv him... u know mujhe attitude wale ldke psnd nhi but phir bhi ldko mein attitude bht psnd hai... confused...??? dont worry m also confused...
i guess RT mujhe hr role mein psnd hai... just luv him...
AND LOVE UR FF ALSO...
u r an amazing writer...
thnx 4 d pm... update soon...
luv
bells...

thanks dear ...ur comment is very appreciable
u know mujhe bhi attitude wale log bilkul pasand nhi h but i like rt in attitue he is just awesome
luv ur comment😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: prahelika

nice part dear😊...

waiting for next...
thanks for the pm😊...
luv u...

thank u dear
im glad that u like it
love u too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: glossyglassy

another great part!!

Mahi and aarav parts with their mothers was very sweet.

I wonder from where Mahi got all that money coz last part mein u dint mention anything about advance...ya maybe i dint notice

I don't really like Mahek...she sounded a bit selfish while asking for money

Yeh line mujhe bohot funny lagi

''yeh le or tera lunch bhi yaad se khaa lena jyada kaam mat karna or jaldi aa jaana

Ekdum typical mom ke tarah orders...but mahi ka boss usse zyaada kaam karwayega and jaldi ghar bhi nahi jaane dega...

Mahi crashed into him...matlab humare liye full on entertainment

Last time toh dhakka hote hote reh gaya tha...iss baar toh finally ho hi gaya...

She actually told him that ki woh aarav sir ko complain karegi

I was ROFL at that time

Abhi toh pehli nazar dekhte hi flat ho gaya...guess future mein woh aarav ko jealous karne mein kaam aayega

She fainted...haha...mast tha uska reaction

Aarav ne extra kaam karwaya...sadist...

And the part in her cubicle...bechari kitna darr gayi thi

But that part was great

Sorry for late reply

Waiting to see more of their antics

Lov u...😃

thank u ritu for ur lovely shovely comment😃
kinna sona commet h
im lovin it
its ok dear wil wait for ur next comment also
love u too
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

gosh...

wat a hitler aarav is...

poor mahi...

loved the update..

simply amazing n awsum one...

thnx for the pm...

thank u dear for ur comment😃
ur welcome
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Posted: 13 years ago
He acts like Arnav but his name is cute.
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Posted: 13 years ago
please dear update soon i really love your update and add me in your pm lists also😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
What a banner di 👏 ye bhi shruja di ne banai ha? Haye serf rtmc hi nehi unke saare fans bhi kamaal k ha including me akher itni mehnaat se apne ff ka 1st update dia ha itni si tareef to meri bhi banti ha na di? Anyway cont soon di
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Posted: 13 years ago
will update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago




part 3



mahi came into her room n flattened on bed when her mother came with her dinner-''mahi le khana kha le ...itni der kaise ho gyi ''

mahi-''der to honi thi wo hitler jo baitha tha meri aakhon ke saamne huh''while eating quickly-''subah se kuch nhi khaya meine''

seema her mother-''kaun hitler''she bite her toungue -''koi nhi maa ''seema pat her head-''sudhar ja ab toh''she smiled when her mother looked at her puzzled-''mahi tere pass paise kahan se aye tune mahek ko paise kaha se diye or ab juth mat bolna mujhse''

mahi stopped n lowered her eyes-''maa wo mere scholarship ke paise the but its ok na jb di ka selection ho jayega to hum log kitna proud feel karenge or fir paiso ki koi kami nhi rahegi''

seema shocked with her answer-''puri duniya se lad sakti h par apni behan se nhi agar uska selection ho bhi gya na to bhi wo tujhe kuch nhi dene wali samjhi kyunki wo teri tarah nhi h''


she hugged her mother-''chodo na aap bhi na bas mujhe neend aa rhi h kal subah jaldi jaana h gudnt''she laid on bed n closed her eyes

seema cover her with bed sheet n kissed her forehead-''kab samjhegi yeh ladki''n left the room

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------next morning

he was on the way when he saw her standing on a bus stand...she struggled for a bus since last 15 minute but her all efforts were in vain...so she looked for a auto...he saw her from another side of the road...he turned his car n took it on another side...

as he approached her the another car came in front of his car...he was confused n surprised to saw abhi there-''bhai...''

he turned his car n left from there

abhi came out from the car-''excuse me''she turned n smiled-''arey sir aap yahan''

abhi also smiled back-''yeah can i help u''she looked at other side-''no its ok''

abhi-''pls waise bhi bhot ho gya''she looked at her watch n shocked-''haye sach me kitna time ho gya''she nodded n sat into car''


there was silence in the car...he glanced at her she felt his gaze n looked at him...he quickly turned his face..she also turned her face on window side

after sometime abhi started the conversation-''so aap roj bus se aati ho''

she nodded ..abhi waited for her answer but she just nodded

he looked at her-''aab bhot acchi lag rhi h red color me''she looked at him then turn ed his face-''ek yeh h or ek wo hitler h kitna farq h dono bhaiyo me''

he looked at her face-''aapne kuch kaha''she stopped n looked at him -''he is ur real brother''

abhi giggled-''yeah thoda strict h bas''

she widened her eyes-''thoda ...nhi bhot strict h wo aisa lagta h ki smile naam suna hi nhi h unhone''

ahi chuckled-''actually aarav bachpan se hi aisa h or usme uska koi kasoor nhi h humara h''

she shocked again-''kya ap to itne acche ho to aap ka kya kasoor ho sakta''he gazed at her n smiled-''thank u but aarav bhi bhot accha h''

she made her face-''huh!''

abhi-''actually aarav 7 yrs ka tha jb dada ji ne usse boarding school bhej diya tha wo chahte the ki aarav bhi unki tarah ek successful bussiness man bane..mom dad aarav ko apne pass hi rakhna chahte the but dadaji ne kisi ki baat nhi mani or use boardng bhej diya jab aarav ne apni studies completes ki to usse abroad bhej diya higher studies ke liye..is sab ke bich uski smile bhi humse dur ho gyi''

she just can't believed on his words... he continued-''aarav ko sirf 2 mahine hue wapas aaye hue usne sab kuch sambhal liya...mujhe to yaad bhi nhi ki usne last time kab smile kiya tha''

he sigh...she looked at his sad face-''sir koi baat nhi ab to wo aapke pass aa gye h ab sab thik ho jayega''

abhi smiled -''hope so''

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she rush towards the her cabin n looked at her watch-''oh god kal 5 min late thi to 2 hrs kaam karaya tha aaj to me 15 min late hun''

she sat on chair n started her work when he looked at her through window ...he closed the curtains n engaged in his work

abhi reached at office-''hi aarav ''

aarav without looking at him-''u r late bhai''abhi raised his brows-''sorry bro''aarav looked at him -''so thoda kaam kar le''

abhi nodded n checked his files of next project-''waise agar is project ko tum handle karo to accha rahega a don't want to go singapore mujhe yahin accha lagne laga h ab''

aarav staring at him-''really aisa kya h yaha''abhi looked at her cabin-''h kuch tu jao aarav pls''

aarav-''ok fine''

at night

she was nervous n came to his cabin..he was busy on laptop..she placed the files on table-''i have completed my work.''he stared at her...she became more nervous-''sir''

he saw the files n said-''u can leave now''she surprised n staring at him...he glanced at her-''i said leave or u want to stay here''she gasp-''no no im leaving''she hastily left the cabin

she put her bag-''wiase itna bura bhi nhi h yeh hitler chal mahi aaj to ghar jaldi phoch jayegi tu''there was silence on road...so she decided to walk


she walked on the road when 4 bikers rushed towards her...she walked unknowingly on the sides of road when one of them pulled her dupatta..she got a jerk n fell on road ..all 4 bikers laughed at her condition n stopped their bikes

she scared n screamed-''help koi h pls help me''they all laughed again-''oh swthrt yahan koi nhi ayega hum h na will help u ok''

they all were drunk n had bottles in their hands...one of them staring at her n throw her dupatta in bushes

she stammered with fear-''pls leave me pls''they all moved towards her with a wicked gladness-''ok will leave u darling now go''

she compose herself n stood up from the ground...as she moved one of them grasped her hand n pulled her towards him-''pehle hmara kaam to karne do''

she writhed to freed herself but his grip was more tighter...he wricked her arms which caused her pain she cried -''chodo mujhe jane do pls''she cried out loudly but no one was there to listen her

she bite his hand n with pain he pushed her on ground...she stood up quickly n rushed towards the other side when another bot held her hand n slapped her tightly...

he compel her restrain on her...she tried to freed herself from his grip but no use...she cried -''chodo mujhe ''he tore his suit from behind ..she whimpered n knelt down on ground...she was in pain but no one here to listen her cry n pain...she wailing like a baby...they all laughed n clutched her hairs...she screamed again-''someone help me pls''he pulled her more closer n she hit him with his hand...he came adjacent to her face when he shocked with a glimmering light he closed his eyes with dazzling light of car's headlight...they all looked at the car which stopped just few feets away from them

she felt relax when she saw him..she cried n looked at him hopefully...aarav came closer to her she hugged him n whimpered ...he looked at them with a gloomy face...

they all move backward when he throw bottle on their legs one by one...she cowered herself with fear

he gripped his collar n hit his head on bike...they all scared to saw his friend condition n rushed when he clutched them n hit their head to one another

they all fell on ground...he looked at them with with red rage in his eyes.he knelt down h punched them on their faces...they all red with blood ...he stood up n hit them with his foot

she closed her eyes...she just looking at him n sobbing with pain...he continuously beating them when they joined hand-''sorry sorry fir aisa kabhi nhi karenge hun sab''

he stopped-''get lost''they all stood up n hastily left that place..he came closer to her-''are u ok''she looked at hi with teary eyes n embraced him-''thank u ''

she cried loudly-''agar aap nhi aate to wo sab''n burst into cry...his hands still on his side..he wanted to console her but how...he fist his palm n she clutched his shirt tightly

he placed his hand on her head n pulled her-''rona band karo ahi rone wale lag mujhe bilkul pasand nhi h''she looked at him n wiped her tears but fresh tears came on her cheek...as she wiped he grasped her arm n wiped her tears with his thumb...she placed her head on his chest while his hand on her back...he felt her warm breath on his chest n on neck...he closed his eyes n placed his hand on her back..n felt the strip of her inner..he quickly removed his hand ...she came to reality n pulled herself from his body...he turned his face n looked at her bag scattered on road..he put her bag n gave it to her but her dupatta was not there


they didn't looked at each other...he removed his coat n gave it to her without looking at her...she wore it n lowered her eyes

he moved towards his car-''baitho me chod deta hun''

she sat silently into the car n squeezing her fist against her bag...he looked at her weary face n said-''so ab kal se tum nhi aaogi''

she shocked -''kyun??''he raised his eyes-''itna sab ho gya tumhare saath fir bhi job karogi mujhe lagta h tumhe ghar par baithna chahiye tumse nhi hoga''

she wiped her rest of the tears-''aap samajhte kyan h apne aap ko yeh job mere liye bhot important h mein jarur ayungi kal''

he looked at her-''thank god normal to hui''he started the car while she made her face-''pata nhi log apne aap ko samjhte kya h''

aarav-''u said something''

mahi-''nhi aap ko kya lagta h aap sab kar sakte h mein bhi sab kar sakti hun''

he looked at her-''really tum sab kuch kar sakti ho''she nodded-''han''

he gave her a stern look-''to thodi der pehle baccho ki tarah kyun ro rhi thi apni help khud nhi kar sakti''

her mouth opened-''han kar leti mein apni help aapko kisi ne bulaya nhi tha wahan jyada hero bnane ki jrurat nhi h''

he frowned-''just shut up''she annoyed him -''kyun shut up aap samjhte kya ho apne aap ko aap mujhe nhi nikal sakte aap mein apna kaam acche se kar rhi hun fir bhi''

he stopped the car n opened the doors-''bahar aao''

she came out from the car-''kya h mein job nhi chodungi chahe kuch bhi ho jaye''

he folded his hand against his chest-''ab mein aisa kaam dunga jo tum nhi kar paogi fir to job chodna hi padega tumhe''

she put her hands on waist-''chahe koi nhi kaam de dijiye me jarur karungi par job nhi chodungi'' n moved towards her the road...as he opened the doors of car she came again-''mein job nhi chodungi mein sab kar sakti hun jo aap kar sakte h''

he frowned-''ye baat kehne ke liye tum wapas aayi ho''she nodded-''han ''

he grasped her hand-''ok fine''he tightly hold her waist n kissed her lips..she shocked with wide opened eyes

he pulled her -''yeh kar sakti ho''she was numb n stunned-''yeh...yeh ''

he raised his brow-''u have 24 hrs mujhe kal yeh karke dikhana ok''n he left leaving her numb n shocked


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