*ENTWINED* RTMC ff-chapter 13 pg 43 pg 43 - Page 27

Originally posted by: *mystic.moon*

Dishuuu!!!!!!!!!

I will first complain, you know how used to I am on commenting in this ff in your sasural? I mean seriously, you have to update in rtw just so that I can comment over here as much as I want! Also, that will mean you will be coming there more often. haha

But nyways, I know I missed the comment in 10 as I thought u might be uding it on rtw.

For 11 all I will say it, that was the sweetest update every. PriVi are so cute and finally they are together together. Well it actually happened in the last chappy but I love the continuation in this chapter. Both of their P.O.Vs nicely written as always.

Minor error - there are lots of grammatical errors in this ud. I am guessing u didn't edit it before posting.

Update soon. DONT get lazy again!

Originally posted by: tejjo

very very nice update disha

this part show true feelings of true lovers

loved it thoroughly

it shows how much they love each other

itne saalo se kahe nhi paye the 😃

abhi kaha na dono ne

happy confession to them

whole update was romantic

especially wo shaving wala

really rajat beard me hot lagta h???don't know meine kabhi usse beard me nhi dekha

han prc me dekha tha bt wo bhot badi wali thi

so no idea

but one thing i know

ki wo handsome to h hi...shayad beard me hot bhi lage

hope hum usse dekh paye only mugs ke saath😛

overall fultoo fatak update

n ur writing is superb

update soon

love u

Originally posted by: -Keerthi-

nice ff.. i didnt read fully.. just few parts.. bt i like it.. its cute..

Originally posted by: sparksfly

Omg...dis was wow...
I luvd it ...!!!
Ure awesome!!!d way uve written it superb!!!
Luvd their POVs!!!!
It was magical!!!
Finally!!!dey a 2gthr!!!
D kisses made me blush...
Yea rt does luk hotter in a subtle...
D way Dhra pulled him when he was abt 2 shave was verryyy niice...d possessiveness...
N d end was funny...when he removed his shirt n she thought...;-)
His reply was awww...<3
I luvd their 1st nght 2gthr ...n im w8ng 4 their "1st nght 2gthr" ;-) i noe thodi besharam hoon...;-)
I luv dis ff!!!n u...
Do upd8 soon!!!

Originally posted by: shruja

Thanks for update n pm
sorry for late reply
thanks beautiful new year gift
loved when he kissed her n proposed her!!!

Originally posted by: shona_muratfan

wowww...very good story disha

i have read all the parts in one go😉

please update soon...send me pm😊

Originally posted by: Arpimugfan

OWESOME UPDATE 👏

SOOO DIFFERENT , LOVELY 😳

You Described Their POV sooo Nicely ⭐️

Loved The Update 😳😳

do cont soon 😉

LOVE YOU 😃

NEXT part mein shave karwa dena plz 😉 😆

Originally posted by: ridzzi

awww...ahem ahem...😳...

that was too nice disha...finally confession and then kissy kissy...☺️...but what yaar what dhara was thinking at that moment in bed room...🤣

update soon...

luv u...😊

Originally posted by: shruja

thanks for update n pm
sorry for late comment
i don't like pov things
but beautiful update!!