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Hey guys im finally updating my FF for you all but this one is a special dedication to a special reader and friend which is zee (farislove) as today its her birthday so i hope she will like this part which is a gift from my side....will be waiting for all your comments...and happy birthday Zee sweetehart!! this one's 4 u!!!
Do Deewane-Part 14

Rajeev walks off towards his car with a smile on his face and before sitting in his car he looks back and sees Aamna standing there at the door watching him leave...He looks at her and smiles and Aamna smiles back, both lost in one another...After sometime Rajeev waves at Aamna and she waves back, and he sits in his car and drives off...
Aamna sighs and then closes the door and walks inside, she tells her mum that she is going to sleep as she's very tired, and her mum wishes her goodnight...She is about to leave for her bedroom when she sees the roses Rajeev had brought for her lying on the table...She walks inside and picks them up, taking them into her room...She picks up the roses and leaves for her room with a smile...She walks into her room and looks at the roses lovingly, holding them close to her heart against her chest with her eyes closed thinking of the time he hasd walked up to her to give her those roses..She opens her eyes after a few moments and looks at the roses once again...She walks up towards her bedroom window and picks up the flower vase, she takes out the old flowers replacing them with the roses he had gifted her...She places them inside the vase lovingly and then after a few minutes leaves to get changed...She then lays on her bed thinking of all the beautiful moments she had spent with Rajeev on this day, it was probably one of the most memorable days of her life, she goes towards her window and sits watching the moon....
On the other hand Rajeev reaches home and is in a very happy mood, he opens his door whistling happily and humming a tune, and walks inside his house. He locks the door and walks into his room with a smile on his face, he goes into the washroom to freshen up and get changed, as he is about to wash his hands he notices his finger which he had burnt, he looks at his finger and remembers the moment Aamna had held his hand and how his pain was visible on aamna's face.He was so touched to see her concern for him...He smiled and ruffled his hair and then began to wash his hands and face and came out of the washroom after he had got changed.He went to his room and was thinkin about what had happened today.He was feelin so happy at the thought that he spent almost the whole day with Aamna.He hadn't felt so happy in a long time...He then walked upto the window and was looking at the moon,trying to search for something,something even he wasn't aware of.He closed his eyes and opened them again,this time seeing Aamna's face reflecting in the moon.This brought a smile to his face and he was jus staring at the moon...On the other hand Aamna was also searching for a face in the moon.The cool breeze woz touching her face and her hair was flyin across her face.She was about to move her hair when all off a sudden she felt 2 fingers running slowly across her face movin the hair.She was surprised to see rajeev infront of her,smilin at her.He slowly moved her hair behind her ears and she looked at him with a sweet smile on her face,she was just looking into his eyes and both were so lost in each others eyes...All of a sudden the window closed and aamna looked at it suddenly,when she looked back rajeev had disappeared and she realised it was just an imagination.She smiled to herself and looked back at the moon where she saw a reflection of rajeev.Both rajeev aamna could see each other in the moon.They couldn't make out what was happening to them.The feeling was different and unique.They just couldn't think about anything else.After some time both went 2 sleep
In the morning Rajeev woke up with the sound of his alarm.He closed the alarm still half asleep and fell asleep.Afta 5 minutes he opend his eyes and realised he has to pick up Aamna too.He got up in excitement and went to the washroom to get ready!...

Aamna is still in bed when her mum calls her...

Aamna's mum:Aamna!Jaldi utho beta...Rajeev aata hi hoga tumhe lene...

Aamna gets up all off a sudden and realises Rajeev would be picking her up today.She smiles and goes to the washroom

Rajeev comes out from the washroom and searches his cupboard for some clothes.He gets changed and picks up his car keys and leaves for Aamna's house...

Aamna comes out of the washroom and finds something to wear.She is lookin in her cupboard and comes across a black dress.She touches it and smiled as its Rajeev's favourite colour...
She decided to wear that dress and goes to get changed...After a few minutes she comes into the lounge where her mum is sitting and kisses her mum on the cheek

Aamna: good morning mumma,kaise ho aap?

Aamna's mum: good morning beta,mein tho theek hoon lekin tumhe kya hua?

Aamna:kya hua matlab?Mujhe kya hua hai?

Aamna's mum: nahin woh aaj tumhara chehra khil raha haina tabhi poocha maine...

Aamna blushd and looked down in embarassment..

Aamna:nahin mumma aisi koi baat nahin hai mein tho bas aise...

When suddenly the door bell rings and Aamna runs to open the door without finishing what she was saying...She opened the door and sees that its the milkman...Her smile fades all off a sudden and she takes the milk and walks back inside.She goes to put the milk in the kitchen and comes back into the lounge...
Aamna's mum notices that she is looking upset..

Aamna's mum:kya hua beta?Tumhara chehra kyun utar gaya?Kaun tha darwaze pe?

Aamna:woh..mumma dood waala tha,maine dood fridge mein rakhdiya hai.

Aamna's mum:acha chalo breakfast karlete hain phir tumhe jaana hoga na.

Aamna:ji..chaliye.

They are about to go into the dining area when the door bell rings again..Aamna goes to open the door with a straight face.When she opened the door she saw Rajeev stood there.Her face lit up all off a sudden and she smiled..Rajeev smiled back when he saw her smile..

Rajeev:hi Aamna..kaisi ho tum?

Aamna:mein bilkul theek hoon,tum aao na andar..aao

They both walk in together and Rajeev asks

Rajeev:tumhare pair ka dard ab kaisa hai Aamna?Ab takleef tho nahin hoti na?

Aamna:nahin ab bilkul theek hoon.

Rajeev:thankgod sab normal hogaya ab..

They both walk into the dining area where Aamna's mum is sat..

Aamna's mum:arre Rajeev beta tum agaye?

Rajeev:ji mumma agaya...

Rajeev touches her feet and takes her blessings..

Aamna's mum:jeethay raho beta..

Rajeev:aap kaisi hain mumma?

Aamna's mum:mein bilkul theek hoon.Waise acha hua tum agaye,aamna kabse tumhari rah dekh rahi thi..

Rajeev looks at Aamna who looks away blushing.Seeing this he smiled.

Aamna:nahin...aisi tho koi baat nahin thi,mein tho..

Aamna's mum:tum tho kabse darwaze ko dekh rahi thi haina?Aur Rajeev k aate hi chehra phir se khil utha...Khair rajeev yeh batao tumne nashta kiya?

Rajeev:nahin mumma woh mann nahin tha.

Aamna's mum:hmm lagta hai yahan aane ki excitement mein tumne bhi breakfast nahin kiya kyun?

Rajeev just smiled and looked down.

Aamna's mum:acha ab sharmana band karo aur tum nashta karlo.

Rajeev:nahin mumma rehne dijiye,mein kha lunga lunch time ko.

Aamna's mum:nahin bilkul nahin beta,mein tho aamna ko bhi binna khaye jaane nahin deti kabhi,chalo ab tum bhi kha lo..

Rajeev:ji ab aap ko kaise manna karsakta hoon.

All three of them sit down to have breakfast and Aamna serves both Rajeev and her Mum,and then eats herself.All hav a funfilled time at breakfast and then Rajeev Aamna leave for the sets of Kahin To Hoga...They reach the sets after some time and Aamna is about to get out of the car.She opens the door and gets out.She's about to walk forward but she couldn't,her dupatta was being pulled.Aamna's heart skipped a beat as she thought it was Rajeev holding her dupatta,she just stood there without moving.Rajeev saw her stood there and asked

Rajeev:kya hua Aamna,tum achanak ruk kyun gayi?

Aamna gathered her courage and said.

Aamna:woh...rajeev,mera dupatta...tumne mera dupatta kyun pakra hai?

Rajeev is suprised at 1st and then looks to see that Aamna's dupatta is stuck in the door handle.He smiles.

Rajeev:Aamna,zarra peechay tho dekho..

Aamna slowly turns around,still looking down and feeling embarassd.She lifts her eyes slowly and sees that her dupatta is stuck in the door handle!She feels so embarassd!How did she think it was Rajeev holding onto her dupatta.

She couldn't believe she actually asked Rajeev if he was holding onto her dupatta..She was still blushing and Rajeev was sat there still staring at her and smiling.She moved her hand to take the dupatta of the handle.As she was taking it off she felt Rajeev's hand on hers.She lifted her eyes to see him and he was still looking at her.She couldn't move her eyes off him,his hand was still on Aamna's and both were completely lost in each other...After a few minutes poonam joshi (mehak) drove into the car park. She parked her car and noticed Aamna stood out.She called out to her..

Poonam:hey Aamna,tum wahan kyun kharri ho

Aamna and Rajeev come back to reality and Rajeev lifts his hand,Aamna quickly removes her dupatta and both look away feelin embarassed.Aamna leaves with a smile and walks towards Poonam whilst Rajeev gets out and locks the car and follows Aamna..
Rajeev:Hi poonam, kaisi ho tum?How was your holiday?
Poonam was shocked, she couldn't believe that Rajeev was actually talking to her..
Poonam:Yeah..I'm fine Rajeev, and my holiday was great thahnx for asking..
Rajeev:Great well i'll see you inside ok...(towards Aamna)...Aamna mein zarra andar jaaraha hoon, tum aajana baat karke ok...
Aamna:Ok Rajeev, see you inside, mein bas abhi aati hoon
Rajeev:Ok Aamna,
He left with a smile and Aamna smiled back...After he had gone inside, Poonam asked Aamna..
Poonam:Arre Aamna yeh aik hafthay mein isse kya hogaya, yeh tho bilkul hi badal gaya hai..Yeh tho kissi se baat bhi nahin karta tha
Aamna:Jaanthi hoon, magar jo Rajeev humne tab dekha tha, woh koi aur tha, asli Rajeev tho yeh hai, aur yeh Rajeev dil ka bohat acha hai
Poonam:Mujhe yakeen nahin aaraha ke tum yeh keh rahi ho, tum dono ki bilkul nahin banti thi aur aaj...waise tum Rajeev ke saath sets pe, kya baat hai?kahin tum dono...
Aamna:Arre nahin...aisi koi baat nahin, hum dono tho sirf dost hain, aur mein tumhe samjhathi hoon ke Rajeev ke saath mein kyun aayi...
Aamna explains the entire situtation to Poonam, on how she hurt her foot and Rajeev said he would pick her up and bring her to the sets..
Poonam:oh tho yeh baat hai....hmmm
Aamna:Haan, acha chalo andar chalen, Rajeev mera intzaar...
She realises what she just sed and just stops...
Aamna:Woh...sab log..intezaar kar rahe honge na, chalo...
Aamna walks off without looking at Poonam, and Poonam just smiles and walks in after her...They both walked inside the sets and Aamna just stopped when she saw Rajeev,he was stood there talking and laughing with shabbir...She just stood there looking at him and admiring him when Poonam clicked her fingers infront of her...

Poonam:kya hua Aamna,kahan khogayi tum?

Aamna:woh...kahin bhi tho nahin...actualy mein dekh rahi thi ke kitna badal gaya na Rajeev,ab dekho kal ki baat hai jab woh kissi se baat thak nahin karta,aur aaj dekho kaise has k sabse baat kar raha hai...

Poonam:waakay mein,sahi kaha tumne,aur yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua hai,tumne jo dosti ka haath aage bharaya..

Aamna:aisa karke maine kuch barra kaam nahin kiya,infact i feel lucky,ke meri life mein Rajeev jaisa aik dost hai,woh dil ka bohat acha hai...

Poonam:aik baat poochun Aamna..

Aamna:haan poocho?

Poonam:kya tum Rajeev se pyar karti ho?
Aamna:kya!Rajeev se pyar?...Nahin poonam,aisi koi baat nahin...hum tho sirf...sirf achay dost hain...

Poonam:aamna maine tumhari ankhon mein uske liye pyar aur apnapan dekha hai,khair abhi tho shuruaat hai,aage aage dekhna,khud pata lag jayega tumhe...acha mein abhi aati hoon...

Aamna is in deep thoughts thinkin over what Poonam was saying,she was confused as to how she feels.She was just stood there when she felt a hand on her shoulder...She turns around and sees its Rajeev..

Rajeev:kya hua Aamna?Tum kya soch rahi ho,sab theek haina?

Aamna: haan sab theek hai Rajeev...Woh mein...Mein yeh soch rahi thi ke...Haan aaj ki script abhi nahi milli

Rajeev smiles at her...

Rajeev:haan ussi ke liye bulane aya tha tumhe,chalo Anil bula raha hai,aaj ke scene parlete hain...

Aamna:haan chalo...

Both leave for Anil's office...Both walk into the office together smiling where Anil was waiting for them to give them the scripts...Shabbir,Poonam,Madhvi (veena), Deepak (cg), Madhuri (vasu), and Lalit (sorry don't know his real name) had already got there scripts which they were looking through...When Anil saw them walk in together,he was surprised.For the first time they had come into the office together,that too smiling,otherwise they would always be arguing.He sees this and smiles...

Anil:aao tum dono baitho,mein scene samjhata hoon tum dono ka...Yeh lo tum dono ki script,pehle scene parlo phir mein bata hoon ke isse kaise karna hai...

Both Aamna and Rajeev are looking at the script and are shocked.They look up at Anil,who notices there reaction.

Anil:kya hua,koi problem?

Both feel embarassd and without looking at each other,nod there heads in a no.
Anil:ok great,ab jaisa ke tum logon ne abhi parra,is scene mein tum dono office mein ho,aur Kashish wahan se ghussay se jaane lagti hai,magar uska dupatta atak jaatha hai chair mein.. Kashish ko lagta hai Sujal ne uska dupatta pakra hai aur woh usse dupatta chorne ko kehti hai aur Sujal peechay kharra muskurata hai...Aur phir do minute baad tum office se bahar chale jaoge aur Kashish aage bharegi magar ab bhi woh nahin ja pati.Phir woh peechay dekhti hai ke woh tho chair mein atka hai..Theek haina?

During the whole explanation,they were blushing and thinking about what had happened this morning in the car.Then Anil asks them to read over there dialogues and said the scene would be shot after lunch...They leave the office and go into the makeup vans to get changed and ready and also to go over there dialogues whilst getting ready..It is then lunch time and Aamna hears Rajeev from outside..Aamna comes out of her makeup van on hearing his voice...

Aamna:kya hua Rajeev?

Rajeev:Aamna lunch time hogaya hai,kuch kha lo phir humara shot hai.Aur bahar tumhara driver bhi aya hai...

Aamna:oh!Khaana dene aya hoga,chalo chalte hain..

Aamna leaves the van and goes with Rajeev towards her car...She takes the food from him.

Driver:madam,aapki mumma ne kaha tha ke yeh aapke liye aur Rajeev sahab ke liye khaana hai,aur yaad se kha lijiyega..

Aamna:ok...thanx

The driver leaves and Aamna looks at Rajeev.

Aamna:aao khaana khaate hain,mumma ne tumhare liye bhi bheja hai...

Rajeev:arre iski kya zaroorat thi,unhe khamakha takleef hui hogi..

Aamna looks at him with admiration and smiles.

Aamna:aisa nahin hai,mumma humesha hi extra bhejti hain,ab chalo khana thanda hojayega..

Rajeev: chalo!

Both go to eat..They go inside the room where everybody was having lunch and Aamna comes up to the rest of them.

Madhvi:aao Aamna beta,baitho aur kha lo.

Aamna:ji

Aamna looks back and sees Rajeev still stood behind.She walks upto him

Aamna:kya hua Rajeev,tum yahan kyun kharre ho,chalo khana khaate hain.

Rajeev:woh thora sa ajeeb lag raha hai,maine humesha akele jo khaya hai jabke unhone kahin baar mujhe offer kiya hai aur mein...

Aamna:Rajeev kuch nahin hoga,sab log khush honge dekhna..

Rajeev:par Aamna..

Before he said anything further,Aamna held his hand and started walking.He just looked at his hand and followed her without saying anything.

Deepak:aao Rajeev beta baitho.

Rajeev:ji

Both Rajeev and Aamna sat down next to each other on the chairs and they both began eating.They were all sharing food and having a great time together..Then after some time Rajeev and Aamna began talking to each other only and were laughing and joking.All were observing this and smiling.Slowly they all left one by one and Rajeev Aamna were still sitting there unaware that the others had left.Both just continued eating and talking and the rest just looked at them from a distance..Madhvi was stood next 2 Madhuri

Madhvi:yeh dono saath mein kitne achay lagte haina Madhuri.

Madhuri:haan they look made for each other.God bless them.

Madhvi:haan waakay mein,mein bohat khush hoon ke dono ab dost bangaye hain,Rajeev ko pehli baar aaj itna khush dekha hai aur sabke saath aaj khulke baat ki hai usne.

Madhuri:haan sahi kaha tumne...Acha ab andar chalo humari shot hai.

They leave from the room and Rajeev Aamna have almost ate.Aamna notices Rajeev has some rice next to his lips.
Aamna:Rajeev woh dekho wahan chawal lagge hain.

Rajeev:kahan?

Aamna:woh tumhare gaal pe

Rajeev:kya?Gaal pe...

He touches his cheek trying 2 find where they are..

Rajeev:Aamna gaal pe tho nahin hai.Kahan lagge hain.

Aamna:woh...woh tumhare..tumhare honton ke paas...

Aamna looks away in embarassment and Rajeev just smiles at her and rubs off the rice.She looks up at him and both jus sit there lost in each other...Then Anil calls out and they come out of there dream world and go to give there shot..When they are shooting for the scene,they had to do 4 retakes as Aamna couldn't bring the angry expression on her face.Everytime she would be carrying out the shot,the morning incident would come to her mind.Then the 5th time she managed to do the scene perfectly well and that was it for the day..
Rajeev:Aamna,are you ready?

Aamna:yes i'm ready Rajeev.

Rajeev:tho chalo lets leave..

Both are about to leave when Poonam calls out to them.

Poonam:aik minute rukko tum dono...Woh actualy kal mera birthday hai tho shaam ko 8 baje maine party rakhi hai.Tum dono invited ho,zaroor aana,mujhe acha lagega..

Aamna:oh happy birthday in advance Poonam.Tumhari birthday mein kaise miss karsakti hoon.I'll definetly come.

Rajeev:thanx for the invitation,mein bhi zaroor aunga.See you tomorrow at the party then.Bye

Both Rajeev Aamna leave and so does Poonam.They sit in the car and Rajeev drives off..There is silence at first.Then Aamna breaks the silence..

Aamna:Rajeev kal tum party pe shooting ke baad jaoge ya phir pehle ghar jaoge?

Rajeev:mera ghar paas mein hi hai tho wahan tayaar hojaunga after shooting..

Aamna:oh!Ok no problem

Rajeev:kyun Aamna koi problem hai kya?

Aamna:nahin woh actualy mera driver aik hafthay ke liye ghar ja raha hai kal subah tho isliye maine socha agar tum yahan se jaoge tho mein yahan tayaar hoke tumhare saath chali jaungi,but its ok mein taxi se chali jaungi,you don't have to worry..

Rajeev:nahin Aamna tum taxi se kyun jaogi,mein tumhe pick karlunga tayaar hone ke baad.

Aamna:nahin Rajeev ab tum mere liye wapis aaoge jab ke hotel tumhare ghar ke kareeb hai.Mein nahin chahti tum mere liye wapis aao.Its ok..

Rajeev:aik kaam hosakta hai,tum mere saath mere ghar chali jaana aur wahan tum tayaar ho lena,phir wahan se nikal jaenge saath..

Aamna:kya!Tumhare ghar se?Lekin Rajeev tumhe bhi tho tayaar hona hoga na..

Rajeev:haan tho i have 2 rooms na,tum araam se change karlena..

Aamna:ok..thanx Rajeev.

Rajeev:the pleasure's mine

Rajeev:lo,baaton baaton mein tumhara ghar bhi agaya..

Rajeev parked the car outside her house..

Aamna:Rajeev tum andar nahin aaoge kya?

Rajeev:nahin Aamna kaafi der hogayi hai,ab mujhe chalna chahiye,mein tumhe kal subaah lene ajaunga,agle aik hafthay ke liye tumhe lene aur chorne ki zimmedaari meri.Mere hote huay tum taxi mein jao mujhe acha nahin lagega.

Aamna smiled at him sweetly.

Aamna:thats so sweet of you Rajeev..Thankyou so much..

Rajeev:acha ab thanx math kaho,humare beech thanx ki koi jagah nahin..

Aamna:ok ab mein thanx wapis le leti hoon...Acha ab mein chalti hoon.You take care bye

Rajeev:bye Aamna,aur haan mumma ko meri taraf se thanx kehdena lunch ke liye,aur unse kehna ke mujhe bohat pasand aya tha khana!

Aamna:ok mein batadungi,don't worry.Bye

Rajeev: bye Aamna..

Aamna got out of the car and walked of and Rajeev was watching her go.As she went further she turned around to see Rajeev and waved at him with a smile.Rajeev smiled and then waved back at her.When she walked inside her house,Rajeev left for his home.Aamna came into the lounge where her mum was sat.

Aamna's mum:agayi tum beta..Rajeev nahin aya,kahan gaya?

Aamna:woh mumma Rajeev ghar chala gaya,woh subah ayega mujhe lene.Woh actualy driver ghar ja raha hai aik hafthay ke liye tho Rajeev ne kaha woh mujhe lene aur chorne ayega.Aur haan usne aapko thanx kaha uske liye lunch bhejne ke liye.

Aamna's mum:acha,kal ayega woh.Tho kal mil lungi.

Aamna:acha mumma,mein bohat thak gayi hoon,subah milti hoon aapse.Aur haan kal mujhe shayad der hojaye,kal poonam ki birthday hai tho usne party mein bulaya hai.Rajeev mujhe chordega party ke baad.

Aamna's mum:acha theek hai beta,abhi tum so jao.Kal subah milenge.

Aamna leaves for her room and after getting changed lies down on her bed and falls asleep with a sweet smile,thinking of the day's events..

Rajeev also reaches home and went to bed after gettin changed as he was also very tired..

So guys hope u enjoyed this, wil be waiting 4 all ure comments!!!! and once again Happy birthday Zee...😳



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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome job with the story so far! keep it up!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
WOWWWWWWW, thanks a lots Summi!!!!!!!!!! 🤗
A wonderful gift, I like it very much!!!!!!!! 🤗
Plz, next part jaldi post karna INSHALLAH!!!!!!! 😳
Mujhe to ek part intizaar hai, aur woh hai Rajeev ke ghar!!!!!!!! 😆 ☺️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl

awesome job with the story so far! keep it up!😃

hey dear!!!! welcome 2 my FF!!! thank u soo much 4 ure sweet comments!! means a lot 2 me!!! and im glad ure liking it!!!!! do keep reading!!!😳
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Originally posted by: farislove

WOWWWWWWW, thanks a lots Summi!!!!!!!!!! 🤗

A wonderful gift, I like it very much!!!!!!!! 🤗
Plz, next part jaldi post karna INSHALLAH!!!!!!! 😳
Mujhe to ek part intizaar hai, aur woh hai Rajeev ke ghar!!!!!!!! 😆 ☺️

hey zee sweetheart!!!!! im glad u liked this gift of ures from me!!!! and i hpe u had a fabulous bday 2!!!!!.....yhh i will update soon😆and i knew u wud be waiting 4 that scene!! dnt worry will try n update asap jaan!!!😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update dee..!! written relli well.. luvved it all.. the dupatta scene was relli cute.. 😳😳..nd aamna ne to rajeev ko poora driver bana dia..😆😆..but m sure rajeev doesn't mind..😉😉..newayz a luvvly part indeed.!!👏👏..plzz continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey read ur FF today only.......all d parts n liked it a lot...............hey must say u write so gud...................waiting 2 read more..................very nice................cont soon.........n pls pm me.............bye dear........
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Originally posted by: kuhu98pihu

great update dee..!! written relli well.. luvved it all.. the dupatta scene was relli cute.. 😳😳..nd aamna ne to rajeev ko poora driver bana dia..😆😆..but m sure rajeev doesn't mind..😉😉..newayz a luvvly part indeed.!!👏👏..plzz continue soon..

hey pihu sweetehart thanx soo much 4 ure comments!!!!😳i'm glad u liked this part....soo u liked the dupatta part😆😆😆i was smiling 2 wen writing it...😆jaan driver woh khud banna hai, usne khud hi aamna ko bola ke woh usse lene aayega, aur haan inverted commas waali dosti mein driver tho banna parta haina!!!! and yhhh me sure he definetly doesnt mind😆....thanx once agen jaan, will continue soon!!!!!😳
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Originally posted by: nainasharma_me

hey read ur FF today only.......all d parts n liked it a lot...............hey must say u write so gud...................waiting 2 read more..................very nice................cont soon.........n pls pm me.............bye dear........

hey dear!!! welcome 2 my FF!!!! am soo glad that u liked my FF, means a lot 2 me 2 see ure comments!! thats very sweet of u 2 comment!!!😳 and thanx 4 thinking i write well, but i think there are much better writers out there compared 2 me...will update soon and will surely pm u wen i update it!!!!😳thanx once agen
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Posted: 16 years ago

Very nice summi dear....will be waiting for the next part sweety pls update soon....😊

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