Do Deewane-( rajeev aamna)-PART18-PG63

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#341

Originally posted by: 143786
yah b'coz it was RA ff😃

😆haan RA ke liye poori raat bhi jaagna parre tho bhi no problem!!!😳

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zaira

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Posted: 17 years ago

#342

just read all the part of your story 😊!!!.....it's really interesting 😊 😉 😊, coz it's about rajeev n aamna in real life 😊.....not abt their character.......it's a really interesting concecpt 😉 😛 😉!!!! .........love the way your story is going 😉! ......awesome work 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next part 😊 😭 😊 😭 😊, waitting eagerly 😉! continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Fatima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#343

wow di the parts were hilarious,fantastic....i luved them 😛
Di im little confuse kya yeh Rajeev sach mein Aamna ko dinner pe laikar gaya tha ??😳 😳

plz di continue soon...im eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

#344

My cutipie 😳 ...1st of all bht sara shhhhorry u knw na me always late latif 2 comment 😭 ...shorry dear u knw na i'm bzy wid cllg nd other stuffs 😉 ...cuming 2 ur story OMG u wrote such a beautiful story dear m mean SK pe toh bht perhi hain but it is 1st time k RA pe hai its just brilliant,fantastic,toooooooo gud 👏 ..take a bow my dear...trust me i just love it...its awosme 👏..me promise from now i'll give regular comments schii...keep up the gud work..Lubb you nd Lubbb RA 😉 😳

Edited by sidiiii - 17 years ago

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#345

Originally posted by: le_me_star

just read all the part of your story 😊!!!.....it's really interesting 😊 😉 😊, coz it's about rajeev n aamna in real life 😊.....not abt their character.......it's a really interesting concecpt 😉 😛 😉!!!! .........love the way your story is going 😉! ......awesome work 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next part 😊 😭 😊 😭 😊, waitting eagerly 😉! continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!

awww hw sweet of u!!! thak u sooo much 4 liking my FF!!!! ure comments mean a lot 2 me!!!...yh i knw u see many ppl write fictional stories on sujal and kashish but i wanted 2 write bout there real life, bcoz 4 me there real life is not less romantic ans sweet!!!!😆 im gla dure liking my story and will post the next part soon inshallah!!!!😳thanx once agen 4 ure comments!!!

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: crazyfanar
wow di the parts were hilarious,fantastic....i luved them 😛
Di im little confuse kya yeh Rajeev sach mein Aamna ko dinner pe laikar gaya tha ??😳 😳

plz di continue soon...im eagerly waiting for the next part 😊

hey sweetheart!!! now thats the first time i heard hilarious as a comment!!!😆....arre jaan pata nahin dono saath kitnay dinners pe gaye honge lekin im not sure ke aisa hua hai, u see this story is about there real life and i have written about sum real life incidents lekin itni detial tho mujhe bhi nahin pata na, isliye i sed ke this is a fictional based story on there real life!!!!...i'll send the next part soon sweety!!1 dnt worry😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: sidiiii
My cutipie 😳 ...1st of all bht sara shhhhorry u knw na me always late latif 2 comment 😭 ...shorry dear u knw na i'm bzy wid cllg nd other stuffs 😉 ...cuming 2 ur story OMG u wrote such a beautiful story dear m mean SK pe toh bht perhi hain but it is 1st time k RA pe hai its just brilliant,fantastic,toooooooo gud 👏 ..take a bow my dear...trust me i just love it...its awosme 👏..me promise from now i'll give regular comments schii...keep up the gud work..Lubb you nd Lubbb RA 😉 😳

hey siddi jaanu!!!!!! sabse pehle sorry waapi lo!!! hum dono ke beech mein se yeh sorry kahan se aagaya!!!!...its ok der aaye darust aaye!!!!😆..i knw dear tum bzy ho isliye even ure comments now mean a lot 2 me kyunki after being so bzy u still took time out to read my FF!!!!.....😆tum tho jaanthi ho na mujhe, mein humesha kuch alag hi karti hoon tho isliye maine socha lets choose a different concept and rather than writing a fiction on there characters, lets write a fiction based on there real life!!....awww luv u jaanu 4 ure lovely comments seriously!! soo sweet of u!!mwwah !!!....awww soo sweet i will be looking 4ward 2 ure comments frm nw on!!! luv u 2 and RA obviously!!!!😳😉

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#348

Recap:

Rajeev gets worried when he hears Aamna sighing in pain. This brings tears to Aamna's eyes. Rajeev meets Aamn's mum for the first time and instantly both of them connected. Rajeev carries Aamna into her house as she can't walk and takes her into her room. Rajeev applies balm on Aamna's foot and both are lost into each other again. Aamna's mum walks in with coffee for Rajeev and he drinks it and leaves. Both are lost in each others thoughts and can't go to sleep but then later fall asleep thinking of each other.

Do Deewane-Part 11

Rajeev wakes up early in the morning and can's stop smiling. Woh tayaar hone jaatha hai aur saath mein woh gunguna raha hota hai, he's very happy, he looks in the mirror whilst fastening his shirt buttons, he looks down to close the bottom button and then looks up in the mirror, he is shocked to see Aamna there, he looks back in disbelief and sees Aamna coming towards him, she comes close to him and fastens his buttons for him, Rajeev just looks at her smiling

Background Song:

Ji yeh chahe yeh lamhe bas yahin pe ruk jaen,

Saamne tum raho aur hum tumhe dekhe jaaen.

Dil mein hone laggi hai, meethi meethi si hulchul,

Tum raho saath jaise meri aankhon ka kajal

Saath din raat rahe, ho oooo,

Pyar ki baat rahe,

Aur Rahe kuch na baaki....

he is about to hold her from her waist but Aamna disappears. He starts looking around for her but realises that he was just imaginging this. He taps his head and begins to fasten his buttons jo abhi thak khulle hote hain. Achanak usse phone ke bajne ki awaaz aati hai aur woh bhaagtha hua jaatha hai, screen ko dekh ke uske chehre pe aik barri si smile aajathi hai kyunki Aamna ki call hoti hai. Woh phone uthatha hai

Rajeev: Hi Aamna kaisi ho tum?

Aamna: Mein theek hoon Rajeev, tum kaise ho?

Rajeev: Tumhara phone aane ke baad mein theek hoon

Aamna smiles

Rajeev: acha batao tumhara paon kaisa hai, ab dard tho nahin horaha na?

Aamna: Woh darasall isiliye maine phone kiya tha, actually abhi thori si pain hai, shayad mein shooting na karpaun, isliye maine studio mein phone kardiya aur aaj aik din ki chutti le li hai

Rajeev is upset because he knows Aamna won't be on the sets today. Woh dheere se kehta hai

Rajeev: oh...ok tho phir.....emmm kal milte hain sets pe....haan agar tum theek hui tho....actually...ermmm main aaj shaam ko aaunga tumse milne theek hai

Aamna notices Rajeev's change of voice

Aamna: Kya baat hai Rajeev, tum achanak chup se kyun hogaye

Rajeev: Nahin Aamna kuch bhi tho nahin.

Aamna: I know tum isliye aise bol rahe ho kyunki aaj mein sets pe nahin aarahi, dont worry mein kal zaroor aaungi...aur haan Rajeev....mein shaam ko tumhara intezaar karungi

Rajeev smiles and cheers up

Rajeev: Mein tumhe bohat miss karunga, apna khayal rakhna ok, shaam ko milte hain...bye

Aamna: Bye Rajeev.

Both Rajeev and Aamna smile and Rajeev sets of for the studio. Wahan studio mein Rajeev pohanchtha hai and is smiling. He says Hi to evrybody. Sab log chaunk jaathay hain as there not used to seeing him smiling

Shabbir: Isse kya hogaya aaj..pehli baar muskura raha hai yeh

Madhvi (Veena) aunty smiles..

Madhvi aunty: Jo bhi hai, yeh muskurate huay kitna acha lagta hai na, bhagwaan kare yeh humesha aisa hi muskuraata rahe, aur isse duniya ki har khushi mille, chahe woh jaise bhi kyun na paish aaye, mein jaanthi hoon ke yeh dil ka bohat acha hai

Shabbir: hmmm sahi kaha....chalen aunty shooting ka waqt hogaya

Both leave for the shoot and are shooting there scenes. Rajeev wahan apne scene ka intezaar kar raha hota hai.Woh apne khayalon mein khoya hota hai ke achanak usse gaari ki awaaz aati hai, woh peechay dekhta hai tho wahan Aamna ki gaari hoti hai. Woh khush hojaatha hai ke aamna wahan pe aagayi. Woh dekhta hai ke gaari se baahar Aamna nikal rahi hoti hai gaari ka sahara lete huay aur woh achanak bhaagtha hai wahan Aamna ke paas

Rajeev: Aamna....tum....tum yahan!!!!

Rajeev was so happy to see her, and couldnt hide his happiness and Aamna noticed this and smiled

Aamna: Haan woh ab mujhe zyada takleef nahin horahi thi tho maine socha sets par aajaun, ghar pe mein bore horahi thi na..

Rajeev: lekin Aamna aik din tho araam karleti, kamsekam tumhe rest tho miljaathi

Aamna looks at him with admiration

Aamna: aik aur baat bhi hai....mein tumhe bohat miss kar rahi thi...tho socha aajaun.

Rajeev smiles at her and just keeps looking at her, wahan Aamna is also lost in Rajeev....Rajeev holds Aamna's hand and she just looks down at her hand,

Rajeev: sach bataun tho...mein bhi tumhe bohat miss kar raha tha, tumhe yahan dekh ke mujhe jitni khushi horahi hai mein nahin bata sakta.

Aamna smiles at him

Aamna: jaanthi hoon, mein subah hi samajh gayi thi jab tumse baat kar rahi thi..

Rajeev:Itni achi tarah se pehchaanthi ho mujhe.

Aamna: Haan... aakhir aik dost hi doosre dost ko samajh paatha hai...aur aik baat kahun rajeev, woh kehte haina ke chehra dil ka aaina hota hai, jo dil mein ho woh chehre pe dikhayi deta hai, aur is waqt tumhare chehre pe khushi nazar aarahi hai, jisse mujhe pata chal gaya ke tum bohat khush ho...aur tumhari aankhen....woh...tumhari aankhein bohat expressive hain, mein jab tumhari aankhon mein dekhti hoon tho samajh jaathi hoon ke tum kya mehsoos kar rahe ho..

Rajeev: jaanthi ho Aamna tum woh pehla insaan ho jo meri aankhein par sakta hai...

They are both lost in each other and smiling, both looking in each others eyes.

Background song:

Aankhein bhi, hoti hai dil ki zubaan,

Bin bole..kardeti hai,

Haalath yeh pal mein bayaan,

Aankhein bhi hoti hai dil ki zubaan.

Rajeev was still holding Aamna's hand and without thinking held her from her shoulder helping her to walk forward. Wahan se shabbir aur madhvi (veena) aunty shot khatam karke aarahe hote hain and they notice the scene. Both are shocked!!!

Shabbir: yeh in dono ko kya hogaya!!!! yeh dono...aik saath...aise...yeh tho aik doosre se baat nahin karte thay, humesha jhagra hi

Madhvi aunty: (smiles) Najaane kya hua hai lekin jo bhi hua hai acha hua hai, dono aik saath kitnay achay lagte haina...ab mein samjhi ke aaj Rajeev itna khush kyun lag raha tha subah se...mujhe lagta hai ke yeh dono aik doosre ko pasand karte hain

Shabbir: kya lekin kal thak tho yeh dono aik doosre se jhagarthay thay

Madhvi aunty: woh kehte haina ke pyar kabhi kabhi takraar se shuru hota hai, inke saath shayad yahin hua hai...dekh lena, inka saath tho pakka hai.

Aamna and Rajeev tak there focus of each other and look forwards and see that shabbir and Madhvi aunty are staring at them and smiling.

Rajeev: woh....aunty...ermm... Aamna ko chot aayi haina...isliye mein uski help kar raha tha...

Madhvi aunty: wah....Aamna...beta tum tho Kashish bulate thay na isse?

Aamna: Woh aunty hum dono ke beech dosti hogayi hai

Madhvi aunty: Yeh chamathkaar kaise hogaya!!!...acha jaane do jo bhi hua acha hua, tum dono itnay achay ho, jhagra karna dono pe suit nahin karta, mujh yakeen hai ke tum dono ki yeh dosti kaafi door thak jaayegi.

Both Rajeev and Aamna blush. Rajeev then runs to get a pillow for Aamna and places on a chair, he tells Aamna to sit down on the chair and helps her to sit down

Rajeev: Aamna tum baitho mein tumhare liye coffee leke aata hoon....waise mere haath ki banni coffee itni achi nahin hain kitni achi mumma banati hai lekin itni burri bhi nahin hain.

He smiles and then leaves to make coffee for Aamna. Aamna apne aap mein soch rahi thi ke Rajeev kitna caring hai, woh uska kitna khayal rakhta hai...itnay mein Rajeev coffee leke aajatha hai.

Rajeev: madam coffee tayaar hai...yeh lijiye

He passes Aamna the coffee with a smile on his face and sits down in front of her with his cup....Aamna takes a sip.

Aamna: wow Rajeev!! tum itni achi coffee banate ho Rajeev, mujhe nahin pata tha...Mumma jitni achi hai yeh

Rajeev: Tumhe pasand aayi, bas mere liye yahin kaafi hai

He smiles at her and both start drinking the coffee, Aamna takes another sip and Rajeev notices she has some froth on the top of her lips. He looks at her smiling

Rajeev: woh...Aamna tumhare honton pe....

Aamna's heart begins to beat faster

Rajeev: woh thora sa froth lagga hua hai

Aamna: oh....ermmm..kahan

Aamna tries to clean it..

Aamna: kahan hai Rajeev...yahan hai kya(pointing on her lip)...

Rajeev: Nahin aamna..woh..thora sa..haan thora sa upar.

Aamna:hogaya kya?

Rajeev: nahin Aamna...rukko

He goes up towards Aamna and bends down next to her seat. He lifts his hands towards Aamna's lips and wipes the froth. When Rajeev touched Aamna's lips she began to breathe heavily and her heart skipped a beat, Rajeev kept staring at her..his hands still on her lips

Background song:

Is pal mein hoon, ya tum bhi ho,

Ya dono hoke bhi na hain.

Kyun ho kya ho, hoke bhi na ho,

Ya kehna sunna manna hai.

Wahan pe Anil Kumar (kahin to hoga ka director) aata hai

Anil: Arre Rajeev!!!!!!

Rajeev jumps when he hears Anil's voice and gets up immediately. Aamna blushes and looks the other way.Rajeev also turns the other way and turns all red with embarassment

Rajeev: ermmm....Aamna tum....errr coffee khatam karo...mein abhi shot deke aata hoon... apna...apna khayal rakhna..kuch chahiye ho tho kissi ko boldena ok...mein aata hoon

Rajeev leaves from there without making eye contact with Aamna. Aamna just looks at him leave and continues blushing, she thinks of the moment when Rajeev was touching her lips and blushed at the thought...she could still feel his touch and it felt like he was there with her, still looking at her. After a while she came out of her thoughts and drank the coffee. Rajeev came back after the shot and it was lunch time..he tries to act normal with her as if nothng had happened

Rajeev: Aamna coffee pee li tumne..

Aamna: (still blushing) haan..pee li.

Rajeev: acha chalo lunch karte hain. Rajeev helps Aamna get up and holds her hand with one hand and has his arm around her shoulder taking her to the car. He helps her sit in the car and drives off.

Ok guys hpe u njoyed this part 2!! i'll eagerly be waiting 4 ure comments!!!!!😳

Edited by kashishdabest - 17 years ago

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Fatima

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Posted: 17 years ago

#349

🤗 🥳 No thanx di for the part 😳 😳 😳 .....

Di👍🏼 the part was seriously fabulous,hilarious[ 😆 😆 ]and romantic too[very romantic] 😍 😍 😍
😳
Hye 😍 Rajeev kitni care kar raha hai Aamna ki 😳 ....God inki jodi salamat rakhay 😳 ...

Di i just loved ur part as i always do.. 😛 ....plz post the next part soon 😊 ...
Luvya
Futtoh 😃

Edited by crazyfanar - 17 years ago

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kashishdabest

@kashishdabest

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Posted: 17 years ago

#350

Originally posted by: crazyfanar
🤗 🥳 No thanx di for the part 😳 😳 😳 .....

Di👍🏼 the part was seriously fabulous,hilarious[ 😆 😆 ]and romantic too[very romantic] 😍 😍 😍
😳
Hye 😍 Rajeev kitni care kar raha hai Aamna ki 😳 ....God inki jodi salamat rakhay 😳 ...

Di i just loved ur part as i always do.. 😛 ....plz post the next part soon 😊 ...
Luvya
Futtoh 😃

hey futtoh!!!! luv ya jaan 4 ure comments!!!!....hmm fabulous hilarious and romantic!!! woh kya haina, romance i cant help, jodi hai hi itni romantic, ke romance uchal uchal ke baahar aata hai😆😆😆aur maine socha sabko bohat tadpa liya,abhi kuch romantic scenes daalthay hain!!!😆😆😆

Rajeev tho humesha care karta hai aamna ki and vice versa, waakay mein khuda unki jodi humesha salaamth rakhay, kissi ki nazar na lagge unhe😳

inshallah i'll post the next part soon dnt worry!! luv u 4 ure comments mwah xxxx