KR OS...| Second Chance |...chappy 1 pg7 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

51

Views

8.5k

Users

34

Likes

141

Frequent Posters

Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Di. . . .. . .
Not fair. . . .
Ek toh aapne ne kr ki sad endng di. . . .
Abb jab hume happy endng chahiye toh u r nt updatng. . . . . .
Plz di update karo na. . .
Kr ki sad ending kisse chahiye?? . . . .
Plz happy endng do na. . .
Update karo na. . . .
Plz. . . . . .
Radiance. thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#22
UPdate kritz..
Or else...
* evil smile *
4 get my long cmmnts with colours...
Grey-licious thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Guyz My Pre- Boards got postponed so thought to write this one...Hope u all like this update
sorry for the short one
need idead for further updates...



Rey is crying bitterly in the BB court.he's alone,no one is here to sooth him'his friend is gone away after breaking friendship with him'and his love his kriya..is also gone away coz of his mistakes'He's praying to god to give him a second chance a second chance to rectify his mistakes'to get his kriya his baat cutter back in his life'.and he's also cursing himself for his mistake.

When he's busy in cursing and praying at a same tym,a ahand touch his shoulder ,he wipe his tears'and stand on his feet'to look at the person..and got shocked to see smriti here.

He turns to leave but stop at his track when he hear

"I will give u a Second Chance"

Rey look at her confused

Sm :yes main tumhe ek second chance dungi'tumhare liye nhi apni beti beti k liye'coz main jaanti hoon'meri beti sirf tumhare khush reh sakti hai'bar main apni beti ki khushi k liye use barbaad hota nhi dekh sakti'aur'is rey ka saath uska koi future nhi'.par rey k bina bhi uska koi future nhi hai'that's why I'm giving u a second chance to prove urself. Tell me kyat um is second chance k liye tyaar ho.

Rey :main taar hoon aunty'mujhse bas is second chance ki zaroorat thi'main kriya k liye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon'.

Sm :toh theek hai'tuhare paas 5 saal ka tym apne aapko prove karne k liye'ek kaabil insaan banne k liye'.par tum apne aapko prove sirf Reyansh banker karoge'Reyansh SINGHANIA nhi'tumhe jo karma hoga'apne bal pe karma hoga'apne dad ki power ki help se nhi'aur in 5 saalo main tum kriya se milne tak ki koshish nhi karoge'.bola manjoor hai.

Rey :manjoor hai'main apne aapko prove karke rahunga'aapko bhi aur world ko bhi.

Sm :I wish aisa hi ho




need ideas for further updates


and do press like and leave ur comment'


kriti

Edited by Kriti_rox - 12 years ago
Roxxy47 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Finally u updated ...
Amazing start 😃...
Rey got a 'Second chance' , that's great 👍🏼...
Hope Rey proves himself this time ...
Loving the story ❤️...
Waiting to know what happens next...
Continue soon 😊.
Roxxy47 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Almost forgot , I'm the first one to comment .
GoldenLuna thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#26
awesome...
rey got second chance...
eagerly waiting for next part...
update soon n thnx for pm...
Madhu_ArSha thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Omg . . . . .
Aaj diwali ke din mujhe itne saare supris mille. . . . ,.
M so haappy di,
mom dad ne mujhe scooty gift ki,
and wen i opend IF,
I got to knw tat i became goldie frm senior membr. . . .
And abb aap ke 3 ff k updates. . . . ..
Wow. . . .
I love dis diwaali. . . .
Cuming to update,
it was awsome. . . .
Smiriti rey ko second chance de rahi h,
*m like shockd*
bt,she justifd her statement. . . .
5 saal. . .
Dnt u thnk kuch zada ho gaya,
bt,it vl be intersting to see ki rey aapne aap ko kaise prove krta hai. . .
M egarly waiting 4 the nxt update. . . .
Update soon di. . . . . .
..-Chabhilal-.. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Great update
Very exciting wonder wat rey does...
Thnx 4 da pm
Jyo_Ksg thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Hey nice and cute one..😃 Thanks for sharing..😃
Happy diwali..🤗
bluelashes thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago
#30
here i am 😛
shocked comment or main 😲
ajj mera mood hey 😆
scoha chlo comment kar deti hoo 😳
but ho kya rha hey kuj samz nahi aya
beti chali uski mom a gyi ⭐️
jab sab saath they to samriti mama apni beti ko lekar chali gyi 😕
or ab baki gye to wo a gyi matlab
jab sab they wo nahi thi 🥺
ab koi nahi hey to wo hey 😒
wo se matlab kriya ki mom 😔
kriya ki mom samriti 😳
i mean rlb 🤣
rlb whi rani lakshmi bai 🤓
arey wahi jo usmey b hey barey achey lagtey hey 😳
arey samz na main samriti ghai kriya ki mom 😡
rlb😭 hitler ki baat kar rhi hoo 😭
ab samzi 😡
nahi samzi to kabhi nahi samze gi
but secon chane j degi rey ko
second chance ki to isey jroorat hey
rey ko second chance dena hi nahi chahiye tha
kitni jaldi maan gye
5 years nahi
acha hua 5 years araam sey cut jayegey
leap 5 year
phir rey wapis ayega
ek tycoon ki trha
but superb update
bus
chotu c update thi itna lamba hi comment kar sakti hoo
main thak gyi
bi 😊😛😉😆😃
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 12 years ago

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".