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Posted: 13 years ago
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heys guys..so here is d first chapter hope u lyk it.!!
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guys in purple is rey's voice in background..nt his thots jus voice ...u kno lyk narrating d story..
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CHAPER: 1

life is full of surprises...
it brings everyday a
new surprise 4 us..!!






d alarm rings an a person wakes up... luks outside frm d window an smiles...
P: new day new start !
an den gets up keeps everythin in order an goes 2 get ready...

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kria wait na...stop nw.come here ...wnt come near me...??
K: nahi rey cum an catch me...den nly ill cum !
R: acha den wait..
an strts running an finally catches her...
R: nw where will u go..?? an grips her by her waist...moves his hand over hers an interwines his fingers wid her...an goes forward 2 take her lips into his...she closes her eyes..rey smiles at her an he also closes his eyes an leans forward...bt2 her surprise his dosent find her lips..

he opens his eyes an 2 his surprise she was gone...an strted luking here an dere bt didnt find her..he was on d verge of crying..when he heard a familiar voice frmbehind calling his name...he turned an found kria standing behind him..eyes filled wid malice...hatred...
K: r u lukin 4 me rey..??
R: kria...yes where were u..??
K: far frm u..thts where i wnt 2 be..
R: kria y r u saying so..?
K: jus telin d truth rey...which u arent goin 2 blv...
smiling wickedly at him..
an den be4 he could utter a word she was out of sight...
suddenly a loud noise an rey woke up...
R: oh god dis was jus a dream..nt again
he lifts d call..
R: yes kri...i mean swayam bol..
S: kria ha..?? again a dream..??
R: yes...she keeps hauting me in my dreams nw...
S: nw stop thinking abt it...an get ready cum soon...meet u at college
R: k..bye
*cuts d call*
an goes 2 hv his shower...water falling over his body...an gets drowned in his thots...

ya i hv moved one..hv 2 u see..no other option left...sumtyms i jus wish if we were a movie..we would hv had a happie ending...bt reality u see...happie endings r nt in everyone's favour ! ... miss u lyk hell...bt no other option left...yet u cum evrynytt in my dreamz an haunt me...or 2 say...remind me mre abt u...

*college*
rey enters an was walking in d corridor when he recieves a msg frm swayam...
"dude cum soon...hv 2 introduce u 2 sum1..."
rey in his mind.:..nw who...?? must be sumone of his dance group..replacing kria...
in d mean tym he bumps into sum one an both move back...rey drops his fone down...he bends 2 lift it...an moves forward..apologies 2 d grl widout even turning back..she says ok..an strts walking..both walking in opposite direction...aftr few steps d grl turns back an gives him a smile an walks off..!
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HOPE U GUYS LYKED IT..DO COMMENT AN HIT D LYK BUTTON..!! an guys sorry abt d length...
~SHWETA~😊
Edited by senoritashweta - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
Nice update...
B/w Whose the girl??
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
not taani again plzz!!!!!!!!!!


arghhh!!!!!!!!!

mai mar jaungi...

and haa ...

i loved the update a lot...but i think u should update next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
nice update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Nyc update I like it 👍🏼,..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
nice start and thanks for the pm :D

Nikki <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Amazing update 👏

Luvd ittt 😃

Waiting for d next part 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
nyc update interesting start w8in 4 further story
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
amazing updte
bt me confused frgt it m always
who's dat grl ???
hope nt taani agn nor sumone else
updte soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40
Great update
Aww rey dreams about her
Thnx 4 da pm

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