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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
i loved ur update... Gr8 start... Keep going dear.. Realy waiting for d nxt chapter... Nd awesome edit samy... Saw it on fb too.. Realy amazing
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Posted: 13 years ago
#42
no taani please yaar its hurt
nd nice update
keep it up
length short thi
lama update please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
loved d update!!!! it was amazing...

gr8 starting...

waiting for d nxt update.!!!!!

update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
Awesome start
Now who's dis new girl 😕
Hope nt dat taani again
Update next part soon and long
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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
loved the chapter...

so it is from where d3 left???
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46
nice updatee...
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
He was dreaming 😒
she haunts him in dreamz . . . . Too bad 😔
& realizing him the dreadful day of their breakup 😭
truly said . . . . Even some movies also have sad endings . . . . . But this reality is bitter 😡
I so wish that kriya would have come back & swayam could be talking abt her only 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

loved the chapter...

so it is from where d3 left???


nt cmpletely bt a little...!!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#49
Amazing start 👏...
Rey dreaming about Kria 😍...
Hope that girl is not Taani 🤢...
Continue soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
hey guys so here is d 2nd chapter..

an guys again reminding u..in purple is reys voice in d background n telin d story types...hope u got it..
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CHAPTER 2:

" People walk in an out of our lives..
But leave deir foot prints an go..."
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rey reaches d reharsal halll an finds d whole gang over dere..
SW: hey rey ...gotta introduce u 2 our new dance team member...
R: oh...
N: ya...rey hv 2 meet d new grl..
V: ya she is gud..
R: guys nw.jus introduce me 2 her...
SW: so here she is...taani cum out plzz

an taani cums out...as usual falling...
R: she is replacing kria..??
SW: yup..sort off...nt replacing...bt nw kria is nt dere na...an rey plzz no one cn ever replce my bestie's place...aftr all its kria..wnt compare her wid anyone...
rey gives him a warm smile...
SH: so guys nw if d teams r ready lets strt practising...
V: bt guys 1st we gotta celebrate ...taani is one of us nw..
all: yes cum one...(except rey)
R: guys..u ppl carry on..ill join u later...
an walks out frm dere...

kyu kria..couldnt u be here wid me..i feel incomplete widout u..u complete me...hw is it possible tht i should celebrate 4 sumone who is cumin in yr place...y kria...y.??...i try 2 accept tht fact tht u left me...bt still ..i cnt...my heart dosent permit me...wheneva i try 2 do sumthin lyk tht...i feel sumone punching me..d pain is unbearable...plzz cum back...

crying he rushes into d fire exit..an sits dere crying..letting out his pain...
rey sits dere crying god knos for hw lng...at tht tym a grl was rushing 2wards d washroom...when she heard sum one crying in d fire exit...she enters dere..an finds rey stiing on d steps an crying...
G: hey...y r u crying..??
R: listen..plzz i need 2 be alone 4 sumtym...so plz go..
G: ok..ill go bt u see...fone girne se itna nahi rona chaiye...
R:wht..?? an turns back
G: ha u see..sumtym back..u bumped into me..an our heads crashed an see my head is also swollen...an den yr fone fell down...
she was showing so cutely..lyk a kid..tht rey could nt stop by smiling at her cuteness...
R: oh..so u were d one whom i bumped into...
G:yes..so lemme introduce myself...m mitchell
R: m rey..nyc 2 meet u..
M: so nw we kno each other na..so temme y were u crying...
R: nthn..jus was remembering sumone...
M: who..??
R: jus sumone...
M: wahi toh..whos tht sumone..??
R: i told na sumone...
M: arey..so whos tht sumone...??
Rey was getin irritated nw...
R: i told na sumone..cnt undrstnd...nw leave it an me also plz !
M: kk..fine...sum ppl na jus dnt kno hw 2 talk 2 new ppl...
R: ya ya..nw plzz go...
M: fine !
an mitchell walks out frm dere...
aftr sumtym..rey gets drowned in his memories...

kria i still remember hw close we got during tht collage trip...

**flashback**

we all were heading 2wards sumo ld castle..4 sum project thing...though it was boring..bt i was cumin nly 4 u...
all d way we both kept stealing glances..sumtyms u blushed...i jus cnt describe hw adorable u luk at such tyms...u used 2 tempt me lyk hell..sumtyms i used 2 chuckle at my own thots i got abt u...if i would hv told u...u would blush more...

we reached d castle...entered... an our maam was describing abt all d old paintings an inscriptions...bt i was all intrested nly in admiring u...we reached on d next floor or 2nd as far i remember...we were seeing d various rooms of d castle...when suddenly i pulled u into one of d rooms...u ddint scream not were angry at me...infact u smiled at me...seeing yr smile i was on cloud nine...when i told tht i missed u...u smiled an said even u did...i pulled u into a warm hug an u to responded... we were lyk tht 4 a lng tym..i pulled back an luked into yr eyes...asking 4 an approval..an u jus closed yr eyes...i pulled u closer by yr waist...u rested yr hands on my chest...making me go mre mad...i locked my lips wid yrs...we kissed passionately...i pushed u 2 d wall..trapping u between me...i pulled back...an strted kissing on yr neck...u were playing wid my hair...we were loosing our senses...i lifted u..u circled yr legs aroung my waist... hugged me...i went on kissing u..dnt kno hw much...or hw lng we were lyk tht...an den u slept in my arms...i sat by d window..wid u sleeping in my arms...aftr a lng tym i realised tht we came wid d college an heard swayam an sharon shouting out our names...i woke u up..an headed 2wards d group..all were angry on us..we made all of dem late...an we directly had 2 go back 2 college..an couldnt visit d other places...


*****

cum back my baatcutter...i need u nw...

aftr a lng tym rey gets up an walks out towards d washroom...2 wash his face an fresh up...
R( in his mind): i shouldnt hv spoke 2 mitchell lyk tht..she was jus trying 2 console me..i removed out my sadnees an frustration on her...i need 2 apologise...
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so guys here ends d 2nd chapter..hope u guys lyked it...comment an lyk plzz..!!
~shweta~ 😊

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