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Posted: 12 years ago
I missedthis...
Wonderful story...
I lost this story... Happy to find this again
Good job yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fleurs

Fantastic updates & thanks for the PM 😊


Part 1

Arnav smartly putting forth his questions without arising any suspicion & further when Khushi interrogates as to why he's to nosy regarding she having a brother or not but he instantly changing the topic without arousing any suspicion was brilliant 👍🏼


I was waiting for the much awaited part where Arnav will be breaking the news of his engagement with La & Khushi's reaction to it. But alas! Her father fell sick 😭


She absent mindedly seeking his comfort forgetting about her family members presence & Arnav comforting her in the hospital & asking her to take leave but keep him posted ' their love & care for each other was well framed 🤗


Shashi & Payal aware of the happenings between the couple but acting as if not noticed by them & Babuji asking about the man in the hospital the other day, Khushi pretending to not know him, finally Shashi acting to fix Arnav & Payal up & Khushi blurting out the truth was lovely 😃


"He did a lot to me more than my own'"

Looking at her statement, I guess this is not her real family'''''''''. So does Shyam happen to be her real brother?


Khushi naughtily telling Arnav about her attire 😉 & he going mad on hearing her description & frustrated by the meeting was nice to read

Part 2

Arnav waiting for Khushi, Anji turning up, he giving her an excuse on seeing Khushi & Anji planning to be patient till her brother breaks the news regarding this mysterious girl was framed in an awesome manner


Phew! La turned up at the wrong moment😲 Anjali deciding to tell him about La immediately on seeing her come & shaking some sense into his head that there is no right or wrong time to break the news of his engagement to the girl he likes '''''.. I like Anjali being portrayed as a sensible woman & acting wisely according to the situation 👏


Felt sad on seeing Khushi being heart-broken. The heated argument was well written. Hope Arnav is able to understand the importance of Khushi in his life & realizes that the feelings that he has for her is true love


IT TOOK ME 15 YEARS TO TRUST A MAN AGAIN IN MY LIFE. I didn't feel this shattered when my parents...

Terribly confused after reading this line. Curious to know what happened 15 years back, who's the man she's referring to, what role he had in her life''''is he by any way Shyam & what happened to her parents???...eager to read the next chapter


Thank You so much for taking time to let us know your opinion on the chapter. It might take lot more chapters before I reveal her past :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
just awesome
i guess shyam is khushis' brother whom she lost with her parents(biological)
poor khushi...hope they will meet up all their misunderstandings!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey awesome FF just found out and you won't believe...I finished reading all 20 chapters in one go❤️⭐️...soo please please pleaseee PM me for updates...I promise u I won't be a silent reader I know how much effort you put into this...soo plss plss PM me for updates..take are nd update soon..!!!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i love part 2 mare
man she slaped arr great
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update..

Thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh God that high confrontation actually happened...
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! read all in one go!!

and loved it ...

a different and an interesting story ...

lets see how it progresses!!

~Leena
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: smdosi

Poor khushi...what happened with her in past??... why she said 15yrs to trust n all??...hope lavanya doesn't cum btwn arshi or else I'll hate her...


Khushi's past will be revealed along with the story line, little bit at a time in each chapter.

Rest you will come to know as the story builds up.

Thank you for liking the chapter :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Teaser
She furiously threw the pocket square, that she held onto for five years, onto the floor landing at Babuji's feet. Why did she keep his belonging with her, when she barely met him before then?

Did she think he will come for her to sweep her off of her feet? NO WAY.. too filmy for Khushi Kumari Gupta or may be not. Somewhere deep down, she knew she was going to see him one day. And for that one day to come, she made sure she never parted from it, no matter where she was and what she was doing.

She looked at the piece of cloth lying on the floor, which is now picked up by her babuji.

She grounded her eyes, seeing Babuji staring at her questioningly.

When Amma came to check on her, Babuji calmly requested his wife, Aap jayiye, thodi dher mein hum aate hain, I wanna talk to Khushi.

Amma left the two alone closing the door behind her.
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He leaned back to the lounge chair and closed his eyes thinking how everything that was going so smooth turned into catastrophe in secs. Whose mistake was it? Its fact that I didnt tell her first hand but I never intended to hurt her. He closed his eyes in pain remembering her fading out in his arms.

How will I make her believe me that it never ever crossed my mind, because I never thought about anything or anyone when she is around. You got to believe me Khushi, I am leaving you no option. He promised to himself mentally.

Arnav Singh Raizada is rude to the outside world and can disdain anyone who go against his way but he gives his 200% to the ones he eyes on, be it his own people or his enemies. And Khushi is no exception. She better brace herself, he thought.

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Alright guys, I don't do well with teasers but I had to do it this time to hit the 150 page mark, so that I could start the second thread (yayyy, all credit goes to you for this achievement of mine).
So, this means you all know what to do, fill up the pages with the comments. I will not be able to post the next chapter until we fill up these pages, as I dont want to post a chapter and allow the thread to be closed before my loyal readers could comment.
Sooner the better...
Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago

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