SS: Chotey Ki Ayegi Barat Ch:10 pg 29*COMPLETED* - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Gr8 update!!! Please continue soon and pm me with an update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Firstly, sorry for the superlate comment but have been so busy that i have way too many pm's to go through!
And i loved the update,
Cant wait to see how it all unfolds!
Thanks for the pm x
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
Reading the 2nd chapter
To start off...
I love the "Ms. Sundar and Susheel" 🤣 It's so hilarious and cute at the same time!
Babies exchange 🤣
Poor Arnav..thinks everyone's getting on his last nerve and he's the only sane soul around 😆
Hi Chotey 🤣LOL LOL LOL!
I CRACKED up 🤣
And Woahhh..Khushi is NOT Ms. Sundar and Susheel..talk about twists Iqraaa :P
She's the wedding planner, like wow..surprising that is!
OH yeah, Khushi's got style..minimal jewelry and make up is the way to be! 😎
Awww, a girl who isn't a fashion disaster, how sweet!
Continue soon 😆
Edited by OnlyHope - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
Chapter 1:whoa...loved it!!!!the best part about it is this chotey is soo sarcastic and is not always caring about his sister...i laughed soo much at all his sarcastic comments on his impending marraige...lol..!!!
Ms.Susheel...batting eyelids...she was shy...of what???hahahaha
Arnav Singh Raizada is getting married...its sounds weird to me too!!!;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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I mean look at me and then look at the unique collection.

ROFL!!!so true!!!loved the chapter...im totally loving this Arnav POV and Khushi POV...its so funny...!!
He called anjali mother india...lol!!
Ooohhh...khushi the wedding planner...and did see some tiny sparks fly which were then smothered by their super big attitude??😆
The intoduction was super awesome...hi chotey,...🤣This would be a treat to watch!!!i could almost imagine arnav saying What the- to that!!!😆
You know what...i might just start liking anjali if arnav keeps on making such awesome comments about her!!😆

Im all excited for the wedding prep to start...get your laptop fixed quick woman!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW IS ALL I CAN SAY SO SOMEONE MADE AN SS ON BAARAT SERIES
PLEASE SAIMA CH. KO LEY AAO KISI TARHA YAHAN PE 😆 CHOTE KA DIMAAG KHANE KE LIYE OR PLEASE ARNAV KI SHADI KHUSHI SE HI KARWANA AND UPDATE SOON.DON'T FORGET ABOUT THE PM PROMISE:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome story.i'm loving it..do continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi Guys!

So my laptop is still not fixed but im using it until I can, but that's not the main issue now. Im busy with some stuff these days also its Ramadan so I don't get time to work on the updates a lot.

I did receive PMs for your works and stuff but I don't have time to read each and every update true I have read some but I didn't finish reading all of them, but will read them surely J

I really don't think this chapter is any good so my apologies for a late update and that too a crappy one.

Also ignore the mistakes as I have only proof read it once.

Despite being a dull update I dedicate this update to Fari (OnlyHope) because you know why Fari ;)

PMs Later

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Chapter 3

So it's been a week since my alliance got fixed and the pandits from both sides are gathered here to fix the dates and Miss Sundar and Susheel I mean Lavanya's dad is here too.

I like him, I see myself in him of course an older version of me. Too bad his daughter is nothing like him, he's all business minded and she…well she is an emotional freak like Di wasn't enough and now her too.

The lord of business tycoons save me from this black hole they call marriage. I can already feel each and every atom of my being dying.

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Phew, the pandits must be gone by and I can finally get out of room , otherwise those crazy men would have started with their gibberish which would have flown over my head like always.

I could feel the fume coming out of my ears. What are these circus lovers up to now?

From my view I can see that Di is instructing and NK and Akaash are dancing

What the?

When did Akaash get into dancing? Its all because of Di and NK's company.

Merey bhai ko apne jaisa bana diya!

Damn it! Di just saw me and now she ..she is approaching me!

She turned on the music player and …and

Di..dont dance..dont dance I will faint

And what does she do? She dances!

-_-

chotey chotey bhaiyon ke bade bhaiya!

Oh god! She's patting NK and Akaash and the fools seem to enjoy it!

What the hell.

Aaj bannenge kisi ke saiyaan

And this song? What is this? Sounds older than Nani and what the hell is saiyan? Di and her latin songs! I tell u.

Dhol bajayen jab shenaiyaan

Jhoom ke aayin mangal ghadiyaan

Ew. This song is so shit. Why can't she listen to Enrique Iglasias or Elvis?

Whats wrong with her taste.

With each passing second in this house they confirm my doubt more and more of being exchanged or maybe even adopted. Who knows!

Bhabhi ke sang holi mein

Rang gulaal udayein ge

Why are they doing the weird frog hopping dance and hi fiving each other for no damn reason? I feel sorry for the frogs they must have been embarrassed.

Holi? Bhabhi? Rang? EW

Holi, don't even remind me of that crap! who the hell even invented such a pointless event?

And bhabhi? Will they actually call her bhabhi? yuck!

It will seem like some stupid starplus immortal soap opera

Bhabhi? Bhaiya? Ew. Kill me now before I hear the next word.

Ayegi jab jab deewali

Milkar deep jalayenge

Deewali? Akaash you did not create a safe front for yourself by reminding me of deewali!

Thanks to his so called "safe" fireworks last year my very expensive Armaani suit got ruined and its not just about the money I had sentimental attachment with it!

Jhilmil hogayi hain ankhiyaan

Yaad ayi bachpan ki ghadiyaan

Why are all these people getting emotional? No wonder Di picked Lavyanya

Please spare me the group hug, you guys make it impossible for me to breathe and all you people are so unhygienic!

Naye safar mein lag jayegi

Pyar ki inko hath kadiyaan

Why are they point at me now?

Jesus Christ! This is SO embarrassing!

I feel dizzy now, I think im going to faint

Three.two.on-

*Click*

"Arrey Khushi tum?" Di yelled again, and I could feel my eardrums nearly exploding.

And Khushi, yes inhi ki kami thi.

After all she just adds to the glamour of this circus.

Sometimes I feel that Di is paying her extra to get on my nerves. Yes im sure that's it, otherwise why would she seem so excited to come here all the time? Her job is so boring, basically its her contribution in the form of making other's life a mess. In this case that very other victim is me.

Now since she is here im just deciding which wall to bang my head on.

Before she could come near me and start with her "oh im so cool" nonsense I literally ran to my room for the sake of my sanity.

Knock Knock

God! Who is it now.

Why do these people make it seem like they will have to pay a huge price to let me have some peace?

Anyhow, I opened the door, and there you go.

If I ran away from her she came to me. Chipkoo hmphh.

Does she not get a hint im not interested in any sort of conversation? Jeez woman!

"Hi!"

"what?"

"rude much?"

"very much"

She needs to know, I can be worse this is just the beginning.

"why are you so angry?"

"because I saw you"

There. I said it, go cry rivers now.

"kiya hua? Apne hone waali se ladai hogai?"

what the hell? She has the nerve to nudge me on the shoulder? Why is she acting like my best friend?

And why isn't she mad? I just insulted her.

Damn it, mission failed.

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"Hi!"

"what?"

"rude much?"

"very much"

"why are you so angry?"

oh so you think you are so smart?

Hum bhi kam nahi hain

"because I saw you"

"kiya hua? Apne hone waali se ladai hogai?"

what did you think I would cry rivers?

Pshh who did you think I was? Arnav Singh Raizada female version?

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"khair, I just brought this catalogue, so you can pick your outfit for the engagement"

"what the?"

"kuch kaha ?"

she loves acting smart doesn't she.

"listen you-"

"I know this is not my responsibility, neither im excited but your beloved Di told me to arrange your outfits to chup chaap decide karo, tumhari bakwaas sunne ke paise nahi milte mujhe"

what the hell? Did she just insult me?

Chodonga nahi!

"you don't know who you are talking to!"

I said trying to keep my voice as calm as possible. But this chick doesn't seem affected!

Urghh why!!!

Its like she doesn't care, god! Khushi react!

You are not supposed to be chill about it.

"jaanti hoon jaanti hoon, main AR groups ka malik hoon wagerah wagerah!'

She said rolling her eyes as she mimicked me.

Aww. She looks so cute when she mimic's a manly voice.

Wait…what? Did I just call her cute?

Darn! Im losing it.

"humari kia aukaat aapke saamne, aik choti si company hai, bas do waqt ki roti to mil hi jaati hai"

Look at her! Sarcasm is blended to the core.

"acha ab ziyada ghoorne ki zaroorat nahi hai jaldi se outfit select karo shaam tak order dena hai mujhe"

She said as she was scolding a five year old and left like a wind.

Samajhti kia hai apne aapko?

On second thoughts, ghusse mein kaafi hot lagti hai ;)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reading RIGHT NOW
This is utterly CUTE.
I've no other words but these to say the least!
The entire song sequence and Arnav's frustration was adorable and hilarious
And then the way he finds Khushi unbelievable..like she doesn't get ticked 😆
How awesome is that..he gets a piece of his mind..and omg
First he finds her cute..
Then hot ;)
Ahm ahm
Waiting to read more SOON <3
The song's stuck in my head, btw..and that's not good :P
Edited by OnlyHope - 12 years ago

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