SWARON FF:Moving on together

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have seen romances right since the times when man's vocabulary consisted only guttural groans.I have seen romances in the medieval ages where a man's duty was to show his wife the right path.I have seen gangsters with their molls and the overly mushy, present day romances too.I am about to narrate an incident that happened in one of the many love stories that I am presently tracking.The story is about Sharon and Swayam and the reason why I'm about to narrate that incident is because it is so profound and symbolic and has a deep meaning.See it for yourself...
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Like every other Sharon-Swayam fight this one too had been high on intensity and emotions but it was different too.Swayam and Sharon had blatantly insulted and accused each other.After almost 15 mins of continuous insulting and blaming Sharon stormed out of the rehersal hall banging open the doors.Seconds later Swayam gave an almighty kick to the funky dice shaped chairs they have there and stormed out.Rey mouthed a shocked 'W*F' to Kriya and turned to his mates all of whom were gaping at the door.Rey's plans of a little chat in the fire exit with Kriya went up in smoke.Rey vaguely wondered if that was a pun.
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After ignoring Swayam for the rest of the day Sharon stumbled into her home sorry mansion completely drained.After fortifying herself with a sandwich and coffee Sharon decided to some soul searching.not that she wanted to,but Swayam would sure as hell be doing it and she wasn't one of those who chicken out.A soft voice in the back of her head reminded her that no one was actually challenging her,but as usual Sharon supressed it ruthlessly.She didn't want to think about why she was actually soul searching."Maybe I'm tired of hiding"she mumbled but quickly dismissed it.
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When Sharon had been young and arrogant and rude and a lot of other things,the teachers had always complained to her father.Her father did not have the heart to punish her and take away her privilages but he knew he had to do something.She was taking her wealth for granted.Deciding that a 13 year old Sharon was mature enough he had askeed her to close her eyes and try to imagine her world without the things she had taken for granted.At that time Sharon had just closed her eyes,visualized dance steps and had made appropriate contrite remark after her father had asked her to open her eyes.But today she sincerely tried to imagine her life without Swayam in it.She might supress her emotions but she wasn't dense .Swayam was the root cause of all emotional turmoil in her life and she wanted an answer.So she closed her eyes and tried to imagine.
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Nothing,nothing came in front of her eyes.She could imagine nothing at all.She tried again,but she failed.It was heavy and depressing.At that moment Sharon had an epiphany.Not an wild,excited epiphany but a quiet one which filled her with warmth.She got up in atrance and went to the mirror and shook her head"No" she whispered.But it was too late her heart had registered it.Sharon loved Swayam.
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AN-First of all the narrator is the god of love or rather cupid.And secondly I accidently deleted my mail so I wasn't able to reply to some of you.Read and review please.
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TO BE CONTINUED.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Beautiful..love the way u described Sharon's emotional turmoil. Update soon 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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First of all hats off to the intro. One of the best I ever read. Now coming to the FF. Loved the way Sharon's inner turmoil was presented. It was beautifully penned. But one question is this FF going to be on lighter side or super intense? First part swinged between both emotions. Waiting to read further.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Agree with the guy up there. ^^ One of the best introductions that I've ever read. This is quite a new and a highly imaginative concept of narrating it from the Cupid's POV. I like it. The story is intriguing so far and to witness Sharon's, um, epiphany in the first Chapter itself was quite an unusual experience. You write extremely well. To the point and refined. Please PM me when you update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome...loved the narration to the core...one of the best...
lovely start too...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Okay if this was just the introduction i can guess how the further parts will be👍🏼
you have got a different style of writing must say
Thank you for the PM and update the part soon. Eagerly waiting to see how you are going to unfold the story
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Posted: 13 years ago
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U describe sharon's emotional turmoil amazingly
Intro was really good
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome intro one of the best rally and coming to ff beautiful way to know someone or something's importance awesome rally update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow..this IS amazing.I loved the way you started with an intense SwaRon fight,and then went on to describe the melee of emotions within Sharon.
The title "Moving Together" really intrigues me.
You MUST update this ASAP and PM me!:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏superb...lyked d way u showed sharon's conflicting emotions n finally her heart gave d answer...thanks for d pm...update soon

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