Train Station - Angad kripa FF part 4 pg 5 UPDATE

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Train station.

The winds are blowing while the train stops making a loud sound. You see a man along with a woman just got off the train.. He's 6'2, broad and muscular, very handsome. The woman with him is tall and thin, Tan complexion and long hair. The woman stops there and but he keeps on walking..

On the other side we see another woman, thin fair and very beautiful, wearing white looking gorgeous. She has long straightened hair, with two children boy and a girl very beautiful just like her. She's too busy with them to notice anything.

The Kids start running here and there, she keeps on calling them and going after them. That man comes in her distance now but still they don't notice one another. One of the kids holds the man from his legs as if playing hide and seek with that woman. The man's back is facing the woman. The kid holds his legs and that makes him turn around and look down. The woman is approaching them. The man bends down and starts talking to the baby whose 2 years old, she's a girl. He thought she was the most angel like baby he's ever seen, Chubby wearing a white fairy frock, with red cheeks and red lips. He can now hear the woman calling out the name " Diya" . The voice seemed so familiar and soothing.. and Diya in answer replied " mummma "

Then he looked up, saw what he desperately wanted to see yet not see at the same time. It was that same girl. Same girl who once had been everything in his life.. She suddenly looked so mature and even more beautiful. At first he was lost in his thoughts.. then reality hit him. These were her kids! She was a mother of the two most beautiful children he had ever seen.. the same eyes, same nose..He could feel a lump in his throat. He was shocked to the core, he never expected life to surprise him like this, but then again they say, Expect the unexpected. It'll hurt less. He had millions of questions in his mind. There he saw ' KRIPA.

The steps she approached towards him were like miles.. extremely long. That showed the distances between them now. How could she not recognize him? He was the same person she had met 3 years ago, But yet he was different. She could even recognize him with her eyes closed. Her beat was beating faster and faster and the distance between them decreased. The miles turned in kilometers and then cm. It was shocking to see him there. Her heart ached when she saw him, That's the kind of relation they had. She had gazillions of questions in her mind but she knew she had nothing to do with them. He was noone to her. ONLY A STRANGER. But why was he alone? Why was ANGAD alone?

Only when she was wondering why was he alone, the same woman who came with him approached. There kripa saw kannan. Angad's kannan. His love of life. She was far away from them but approaching him with their luggage.

Angad and kripa stood facing one another. Reading each other's faces intently. Kripa wanted numerous answers. She deserved them. But then the other side of her was disgusted by his sight.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Guys please read and let me know how is it? :) and please post replies. please :) :) thankyou :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start.So Ak meets after 3 years.Cant wait to know what had happened betwwen them ,Pls update soon
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hey!
thx for starting a new AK fic...
wil read and comment in a few days..
plz Pm me when u update next..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice start, Pl cont soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice concept & brilliant start
lvd it
thanks for pm

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Awesome start loved to read more
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Continue jaldii seee.. awesome start btw :D
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Thankyou Guys. I'll post the next part tonight InshALLAH :)
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Fantastic concept ..cant wait to read more ...keep it up

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