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KSG_luv

@KSG_luv

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+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#451

Wow this was an awesome update! The last part was just really beautiful! The way she falls and he rises..meaning her fainting and him waking up.. 👏 👏

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Farwa

@-Farwa_Ibrahim-

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#452

u know i held my breath till the end 😍and my eyes were moist i couldnt keep the fear out off my mind and praying just like Khushi Oh God let nothing happend to Arnav and on and on and on plus my fear was as Khushi was alone someone might try to attack her and she might get hurt but it never happend and at the end when Arnav opened his eyes on the one side of room while Khushi fainted on the other i was like oh ya oh ya oh ya ya ya ARNAV IS FINE HE IS SAFE🥳 😆now Khushi will b safe too but i dun know if i m right but one confusion is clear in my mind shyaam may not b fully involved in it now most of my suspects goes to only two persons Anjali and Natasha i might b wrong but mostly i suspect Anjali i dun know y but and i couldnt feel natasha out off charges as well... but overall it was an awesome update pls update the next chapter soon

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: PCdublin
OMG!!!!!!! wait...biting my nails...wiping off the sweat off my brow...steadying my errant heartAHHH...
U have the worst cliffhangers but the best story...absolutely thrilling, intriguing and super wow...TINA , please girl publish it ...its amazing👍🏼

glad u liked it, i personally wasn't too sure about this chapter😳! idk about publishing it..it would require a lot of editing😆

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: Farwa_Ibrahim
u know i held my breath till the end 😍and my eyes were moist i couldnt keep the fear out off my mind and praying just like Khushi Oh God let nothing happend to Arnav and on and on and on plus my fear was as Khushi was alone someone might try to attack her and she might get hurt but it never happend and at the end when Arnav opened his eyes on the one side of room while Khushi fainted on the other i was like oh ya oh ya oh ya ya ya ARNAV IS FINE HE IS SAFE🥳 😆now Khushi will b safe too but i dun know if i m right but one confusion is clear in my mind shyaam may not b fully involved in it now most of my suspects goes to only two persons Anjali and Natasha i might b wrong but mostly i suspect Anjali i dun know y but and i couldnt feel natasha out off charges as well... but overall it was an awesome update pls update the next chapter soon

im glad u liked the suspense. i loved that image too of arnav regaining consciousness on one side n khushi losing consciousness on the other..

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#455

fyi my next update will be Mind Games. Will update Shameless after that

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chicagogirl

@chicagogirl

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#456

This was an amazing update!!!!!! Please update soon, cause the suspense might kill me :)and please update mind games soon as well :)

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#457

Wow, Arnav is safe n back.. Hope khushi remembers her past few months.

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Mariam

@--Amy--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#458

Arnav is safe...thank God

this is getting more and more interesting..

do continue soon...thanks for the pm...

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Divya Bharathi S

@divyaarnavsr

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#459

God . .tat s**t shyam and roy. . 😡 dear it was awesum . . I felt d agony in me. . Poor khushi and arnav 😭 thank god he gained consciousness. . Though here she lost it m damn sure now there he is to take care of her. . 😳 crap . . From d beginning m suspecting Anjali. . Nd its becoming more stronger . . Continue soon dear. . Thanks for d pm 😊 Awesum update. . 👏 cant sit back and enjoy bt made to sit at edges n feel 😛