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Posted: 13 years ago
What delightful update! Thank you!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Lovely update... yes, me too thinking, if Arnav went to drop Khushi, we could have got some more Arhi..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
I read the whole SS in one go...it was amazingly awesome...
Different from all other arhi ff and ss...plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
First off, I'd like to apologize for the late edit :/ I have already told you the reason for that in reply to your PM to me.

And now to your AMAZING SS!

Anyways, I am just absolutely loving every single thing you type out!!

I see your finally getting Arnav and Khushi somewhere ;) As you asked, I'd love to see them together and that too fast, but I'd also love to see you turn this SS into something more... Grr... Why does life put us in such situations ;) Haha.

And whew! Shyam isn't after Khushi... Well at least in one sense, he's still after Khushi by "wanting" her to get married to "someone worthy" of her but that's all just to irk Arnav and get him to realize/admit his feelings!

But then Lavanya... I don't think theres anything there a you ave established this is a very happy SS. I think Shyam I just helping her like he is helping Khushi and Arnav, but that's what I think. Who knows except you... And probably your sister ;)

And I'm loving the relationship between Shyam an Anjali in this SS!! It's so flirty and fun. As of they're still teenagers! Lol

And then everyone's side thoughts when they make a blooper in front of Arnav or Khushi. I just love them. Especially Dadi's and Anjali's when theyre practically hitting themselves for being so stupid or when the other is being stupid. Haha(:

Once again, glad the Arnav and Khushi love train has finally, slowly, but finally left the station! Lol.

Anyways thanks for the PM for your update as well as the PM for your reminder! Update soon!
Edited by Arina_R - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
It was superb... I am loving this story and don't want it to end soon...it's okay that u cannot update frequently as long as you make up for them by giving us long updates...

I am loving this relationship khushi has formed with everyone in the family, loved how she brings food for arnav and the way he analysis it...loved his conclusion...

Loved anjali's manipulation towards getting them together and last but not the least liking Shyam in this...

I am so enjoying this story, both you sisters are too talented... I am travelling for a week and may it be able to read and comment, but please continue to pm me with updates. I will the first chance I get. Thnks.
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
finally he kissed her
waiting for some more action and i loved the last part especially mamaji's😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww
amazinggg update
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazinggg update...u write soo welll...paas on d writting skills plsss to meer...it vl help me in writting essays in eng paper...lol

make it a ss...short and sweet...my opinion...thanksss fr d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesomeee

It was so hilarious, funny, witty, romantic, and cuteee

Waiting for the next update!

And as for the story, I think that you should proceed it however you are more comfortable with it. If you want to elongate the story, then yes, go ahead with the flashback of their meetings etc. But if you don't have time to write much or you think this story needs to end soon, then yes, you should do as needed.

Update soon!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great update as usual!
Love the way the whole family is trying to play matchmakers...

Loved the way he kissed her...very sweet...yet still hot.!!!

I prefer ss to ff...but its your call totally...

Cheers!

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