The Memories of A Butterfly#2 Ch15-14/12 Updated!

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9424976

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Posted: 12 years ago

#281

Finally! It's been long and I've missed this FF and you! okay, so I really hope we get to know what Adi's ulterior motive is for why he kept Dia back and what the heck he's hiding. So Khushi is adopted? Should have caught that in the previous chapter. And I really do love how you made Arnav realize how Khushi really is the perfect one for him. How she completes him in so many ways. And didn't Khushi have a brother?? Loved Payal's point of view...hope she finds a friend in Khushi! Lovely update as always

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Harshitha Shankar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#282

Amazing! Just amazing, Garguu!
Arnav's thoughts and feelings, Khushi, on the whole, Payal's quiet, yet possessive nature, Dia's regret. Plain amazing!
I stalked this too! :D

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Posted: 12 years ago

#283

again i am happy that u updated this story too...i loved how u explained the gestures of Akash and how Payal fell for him and her situations...i could give her a hug...nicely written even khushi's role in arnav's social life was given with clear precision...whats this mystery about Adiya and dia, thats what i am confused..

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thebubblespop12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#284

Hey there stranger!! How you doin'??
So good to hear from you again. I was just about to reread some chapters when I saw your update. Needles to say I did a happy dance all over my room and sat down and read this sucker!! So seems like there is more to Khushi that meets the eye? Can't wait to read more about that.
Also I love the Akash/ Payal thig you have going on!! I really want to know more about Khushi's brother and Dia. They are such interesting characters!!
Thank you for a wonder update and a wonderful imagination!!

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#285

nice progress.. in all three angles... waiting for Arnav to know abt Khushi more.. that shuld soften him a bit..

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N0306

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Posted: 12 years ago

#286

wow.. you updated after a long time.. thank you for doing so.. i am glad.. i don't know if you have mentioned this earlier.. is khushi adopted? is that the implication of Niharika's words?

Dia is loved by the guy but he has some motives that is creepy.. i keep on thinking what he wants from her..

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#287

Great to have an update.

If this is what Arnav and Khushi are when they really aren't together imagine what they would be as a real couple here.

Enjoyed the fact that Payal here isn't a cardboard character. Interesting story with what is happening with her...angst, hope.

Aditya Singhania continues to be the unknown factor even as he has been the catalyst for the changes in the lives of the Gupta's and Raizada's recently. Waiting to learn more about him and his motivation.

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sugar_bag

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Posted: 12 years ago

#288

your writings are very impact full..

do update soon..

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saucechips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#289

un-resd.😃 So sorry for doing what I hate myself. Res-ing and running away. Couldn't help it..

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Vee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#290

G darling, when I saw that you had updated butterfly... I was like... ohemgeee!!! First I blinked. Then I rubbed my eyes. And then this slow euphoric grin slid into place... and with this heart sending you all the white roses and chocolates, I began to read.I will first comment on Arnav's view on Khushi. I felt sorry for him. Poor guy! I can empathise with his feeling of... inadequacy, if you will? And along with Arnav, I too am buckling up, to go with him... I cannot wait to see what will happen when Arnav realises that Khushi was adopted by the Gupta's. I know this will make Arnav very guilty... and I am... waiting... stilling my erratically beating heart. Now- I would like to comment on Payal-Akash relationship. It has obviously escalated beyond a boss-employee relationship. I felt for Payal. Heartbreaks still make you want to reach out for a tub of icecream, whether you are eighty or eighteen. And I can understand Payal and her predicament (somewhat... I lose my heart to men very easily... ahhh crushes <3) It is easy to fall for Akash. Who wouldn't. And I now feel sorry for Payal... to be living in such an adverse environment... I hope she gets her love story.Now, to comment upon the Dia-Aditya relationship. Im sorry, but I didn't really understand it? He loves her... but he fears that she doesn't love him... that's why he wants her bounded to him in an unbreakable way? Aditya's full plan and intentions haven't been revealed... so I am just going to keep mum.I was surprised to see that Dia Gupta wanted to rescue her titli... I had placed Dia Gupta as someone highly selfish... and very ruthless. And obviously I am wrong. so I will erase my opinions about Dia, and wait for the culmination to come.

Edited by V323 - 12 years ago