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WAHOOO
UPDATE
Now we're talking.
I like Arnav and his introspections. Even though he seems to berate himslef a little too much. I love how he notice little things about Khushi. So..caring. He thinks she wont last with him. Thats sad. Plus, the one thing that ticks me off is his...lack of vigor concerning cementing their marriage. It seems almost unlike him. Odd.
Payal. Aww, it must be so hard to cope with what she's trying to do. Being made to become someone far older than yourself, and that too so early, can be heart breaking. And in this case it was made worse becuase she has no mother. So she has fallen in love. Only if she and Akaash would notice this change in each other. But when were love stories ever simple?
Dia. Interesting. I'll wait to see where this goes.
Overall, very well done update! After so long that too! And of course, brilliant job with Shades of Grey.
Oh wait.
I just remembered. Is Aditya Arnav's half brother or something of that sort? Random thought, but just entered my mind.
AND
One more thing.
Why do I feel that Khushi was adopted?
Avi
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MOTHER OF f**k. IM FIRST. HOLY.GOLLY.
*Tries to get over the immense amount of shock*
Ye Hai Mohabbatein
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