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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Inked
This is turning into such a poignant story. Almost wistful, in a good way. Chapter 2 was effective, as it filled in those question marks. I look forward to receiving Khushi's thoughts about their marriage (when your pace allows it). I can almost imagine this happening--that is an arrangement spurred because both have respect for Ammaji's wishes. I hope in time there is a bedroom scene--I long to know what is going on there. His thoughts and hers as they do-the-deed. The bed is pretty safe barometer for what is happening between a couple outside the bedroom. [Okay that was a Maya-ism!]
Maya

Yes Maya, this story is something I hope you will like...you are correct there is a saying in my part of the world, it goes a husband and wife fight only till the sleep, once the bed comes into the equation most things are forgotten.

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Kalyaani B Rao

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Anamika100
I have not read anything you have written before but found this post while surfing IF. It definitely caught my attention because of the sophisticated and mature emotional content. By mature, I am not referring to explicit sex (not that I have anything against that😉) but more the mature relationship between a married couple and the mind games that appear to be taking place.

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Thanks a bunch... it was my first attempt at writing something out of my comfort zone, to be honest have not written much, the little I have you can read and share your views, I do value it. The index is in my signature.

Let me warn you the content is going to be mature and though not over the top, sex will be there. They are a married couple after all.

Thanks for reading and keep the comments coming.