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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

Awesome updates...
loved it..
thanx 4 the pm...😊

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Nirjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

wow awesm yar, brilient update

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

yayyy!!!! yipieee!!! I'm no more a newbie... 🥳
Hmmm... 28 likes not bad i am happy...👏 but abhi bhi sirf 2 pages hue hai comments ke umm... guys if possible i will try 2 update next chapter by tomorrow midnight so apne kaam par lag jao sabh... atleast ek-do page toh aage badao...
if i get happy den may b i hav a SURPRISE fr u guyzz toh huryy up ur time starts now... 😃
nd make guesses fr my surprise wat it cud be...

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago

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pallavi.14

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Hmmm...yeh toh galat hai maine note bhi diya fir kuch nahi kiya kisi ne main katti hun sabki...😔

par thanku 2 every1 who commented nd liked aur unhe bhi jo silent readers hai...😊 I am updating after a week nd i do hav surprise fr u guys so pehle padho fir surprise milega...😉
so here u go guyzzz...

Chapter-11

PRESENT

she is standing outside Mumbai Airport waiting fr him 2 pick her up,she did'nt told her family abt her arrival as she wanna surprise dem but here she is waiting for kunwar & he is as usual late... She regretted fr not informing her family now, at least dey wud hav come 2 pick her... tired frm d long journey she pouted nd sat on a bench nearby..😔

After sum time she gave up... she had been waiting fr half hour but no sign of kunwar, she called him up but he is also not answering d phone... frustratedly😡 she got up 2 call a cab, suddenly from nowhere his car stopped in front of her d way he applied breaks cud tell her dat he had been driving on high speed, he immediately came running 2 her & shouting..." SORRY!! SORRY!! I AM REALLY SORRY.. actually woh shoot stretch hogaya tha aur fir u knw na Mumbai ka traffic." 😕

she said.."Its Okay!! Kunwar don't b stressed, main aate hi tujhse fight karna nahi shurru karungi. I can understand baby!!"

wid dat she hugged🤗 him tightly inhaling his muscular scent & making sure he was here in reality...

he also engulfed her in big bear bear hug, compensating for all those days he missed her, nuzzling into her hairs, he even give her a little peck on d right side of her nape❤️ but ven he felt sumthing wet on his shirt he slightly shifted nd saw her crying, he wiped her tears & asked "wats d matter shaks, y r u crying?" 😭she just meakly said..."Nothing. I just missed u a lot kunwar "

He chuckled nd give her a quick side hug nd teased her..." Waise shak's jab se tu NY gayi hai cry baby bann gayi hai, itna rone lag gayi hai yarr.." 😛

he got a punch on his chest... he shouted in pain but she chose 2 ignore it nd quietly sat in d car leaving him outside wid her heavy luggage 2 help himself...😡
he wid a lot of difficulty loaded everything in d back of his car nd left d airport...

they ver driving fr 30 minutes, both r silent as she is taking in all d surroundings roads, traffic, sea, beaches all those thing she missed a lot, although she was in NY d best city in d world but India toh India hi hai she was enjoying her view & he was just staring at her through side glances watching her each nd every expression..
she found sumthing weird so she asked him.." Kunwar dis is not d way 2 my home nor dis road goes towards ur house, i think u took a wrong a route."😕

he sighed..." yes madam hum na apke ghar jaa rahe hai, na mere, v r going sumwhere else i thought ven u r here widout informing ur family nd any1; so y not i take advantage of situation nd kidnap u so dat v can spend sum time 2gether baad mein toh tujhe koi bhi chodne wala nahi hai teri aisi khatir dari hogi jaisi bechari bachi Dance academy se nahi kisi border se jung lad kar ayi hai...😈(he winked at 😉her nd she gave him a murderous look to which he replied as he is very scared by moving back nd den dey both laughed) so now its a surprise fr u, b a good gal nd keep finger on ur lips...

she replied "Okay!!" nd did as she was said by him like a innocent, obedient school gal she kept fingers on her lips & sat quietly fr rest of d ride, which ended in few minutes.
They reached near a building, he kissed on her finger nd asked her 2 remove it from her lips nd den blindfolded her, made her come out of d car...

she asked.."Kunwar wat's all dis, where r v going? y hav u blindfolded me, say na something..." (she asked him all these questions in one breathe)

he shouted..." WOAH!!! Miss shakti agar aap chup rahengi tabhi toh main kuch bolunga.. nd answer 2 al ur questions u vil get in few minutes so just SHHH...& give me ur hand sweetheart plzz mere saath chalo..."
To which she replied wid a swt smile.." main humesha tumahre saath chalungi..."❤️

After walking for some steps nd climbing a small staircase, kunwar opened a door let shakti in & removed d blindfold...
she opened her eyes, trying 2 adjust her eyes wid d flash of lights...ven she finally became comfortable she took a glance on where she is, it was no party, nothing noisy & no flashy lights neither any crowd was der, it was just a beautiful house, yes a home giving all d warmth nd coziness which one can feel in one's own house,
the interiors ver done beautifully nd wid all of her favorite colors. she twirled her self in a round wid a big smile on her face😃 nd saw a table at d corner wid candles & flowers, even food was ready der...

Now she wondered where kunwar is?? nd den she found him beside d table leaning on d wall smiling...😊
He asked, "so u like dis??"
Excitedly ..." Like!!! I love dis...but kunwar whose house dis? aur tum mujhe yahan kyun laye ho??"😕

He came forward towards her took sumthing out from his pockets nd placed it in her hands,
She saw he kept a set of keys in her hands, she raised her eyebrows...

he answered..." Na tumhara, na mera, yeh humara ghar hai shakti, hum dono ka apna ghar..."

😭Tears of joy are flowing frm her eyes, she is smiling😃 ear 2 ear... she ran around here nd der watching each nd every corner of der house which is exactly as per wat she wanted plus wid kunwar's own modifications... Its is a 3BHK apartment wid two balconies attached 2 every room plus its ground floor so dey hav a open front porch...

After completing her tour of d house, she very happily came 2 him nd jumped on him while hugging... 🤗

she yelled..." OHHH!!! Kunwar I love u, I love u alot, u a gaurdian angel in my life..."❤️

Kunwar: i love u too baby... Hey!!! u hav not seen d main door yet so cum let me show u...

they walked towards d entrance hand in hand, but ven she reached 2 main door & saw d name plate of der home, she was awestruck by seeing it... it was beautifully inscribed on a wooden plate wid golden letters..."DANCING SOULS!!!"
she became speechless😲, words are not cuming out frm her mouth she just embraced him tightly... he kissed her forhead nd she placed her head on his chest hearing 2 his musical rhythmic heartbeat which only sings her name...☺️

After 5 minutes he make demselves straight nd bent down on his knees took her hand in his, looked into her eyes & said...

"Shakti I have already given u d ring but today I am giving u dis house, vil u make dis house our home wid me? our dancing souls nest, tumhare saath zindagi ek buhat hi interesting suffer (hindi wala😉) hoga jo main iss ghar mein shuru karna chahta hun toh kya tum tumhari zindagi ke har pal chahe ache ho ya bure ho, chahe khatte ho ya meethe ho mere saath bitaogi?
WILL YOU MARRY ME shakti mohan sharma, will you become Mrs. shakti amarjeet singh??"❤️
...( so now wat vil b her answer stay tuned fr dat)

so kaisa tha?? I am not quiet happy wid d outcome... hope u guyzz like it...

Precap:shakti's answer

I knw short tha but kya karun all thanx 2 my hectic schedule itna hi likh payi hun... so sorry nd
next update vil b either by dis weekend nd if not den it vil b in next week agar usse pehle chahte ho toh compel me, force me 2 update it nd u wat u guys hav 2 do fr it... nd I promise dat next part vil b a long a update as it is last part nd after dat u vil get an epilogue...

plzzz give ur suggestions, do comment nd hit d like button...

nd finally here is d SURPRISE dis my new ff on kriyaansh as dis ff is near 2 its end so i thought of starting a new one on our lovely couple kriyaansh hope u like it...

FF: SACRED LOVE!!!!

Edited by pallavi.14 - 13 years ago

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raina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#135

yayy 1st tym i m 1st to comment...
awsome update...
Kunwar proposed shakti that was 2 gud...
Nd i lyk their house name ''Dancing Souls''
thankx 4 d pm
update soon

Edited by kitttu1309. - 13 years ago

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Gayatri Jethani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#136

Awesome update...
Loved it dear
beautifully written
Kunwar gifted her the house...THERE home
the name plate was nice ****superlyk***
and the way propose shakti was mind blowing...
Update soon
thnx for pm

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@Black_Stone

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

Amazing updte 👏

luvd it to the core ❤️

awiie kunwar gifted her "THEIR HOUSE"😊

so sweet nd name plate dance souls😃

awiie soo cuute 😳

kunwar propsed her yayie

witing fr da nxt updte soon

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shaffy_arsha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

omg!!!!!! i love dis update
aww he gifted her house
n da name plate goshhh!!!!! i loved it...n da way he propose her i m dead plzzz update nxt part soon