Kria SS - Tides and the Moon Chp 5 Pg 135

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Ankita di, its always a pleasure reading ur works. So damn pathetic yet heartbreakingly beautiful.

Kria, ahh the pain u portrayed through the letters, u moved me to tears di. I so hate u for making her cry so much.

Rey, I hate him to infinity now. He is all busy wid dis random chic. A sheer infatuation, an absolute state pf physical lust and he calls it love, huh.

Okay, so this is a dark love triangle. I m gonna scream out loud- CONTINUE, CONTINUE AND PLEASE CONTINUE.

Anki di, I never told u this, but I think I shud tell it now. You are an inspiration for me. Frankly speaking, u, Pria, Prerna and Tish are my favourite writers on the forum.😳

I promise, as soon as I land up in an awesome engineering college( which wud probably happen after 10 or 11 months), I wud definitely write something and that would be a small dedication to all four of u.

Update soon.

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sujana

@sujana9

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

anki dii 40 likes crossed ..update plzzz😳

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ASADsweetZOYA

@ASADsweetZOYA

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

👏👏awesome dear

loved it

thnx 4 the pm😳

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Ho gaye aapke likes...

aaj main din bhar issi OS ke baare mein soch rhi thi.,,... nd puri raat kl ki😳

pehle i was getting sad.. u know thinking ki sad end.. i know u like sad ends.. unka alag feel hota hai... plus i want kria to win lekin whenever i tried imagining her without rey... nahi huya ... gave up and hence i didn't wanted to think abt it lekin ghum fir ke i wud settle on this only...

then i took out n no. of possibilities that they end up together...

and voila i get so many ends happy wale... sab alag... i was so happy... ab soch rha hun ki aap kya karoge... i wann red ur take.. its always fun...

long stry short... aapke likes cross ho gaye... so u r writing it further...

aapko likhna hi hai 😎

Edited by kriyansh24 - 13 years ago

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Anky, I really loved this OS a lot.

It was beautifully penned and the way you expressed Kriya's point of view and the way she had been fighting everyday to push Rey out of the system but failing every time. The part you really penned that she just couldn't wipe away the image of her life, her Rey feeling happy with someone else though this was what she wanted all along, for him to move on.

It really brought tears to my eyes to see that even though it's been an year, but she still isn't over with him. On other hand, Rey is having a romantic time with his new girlfriend, totally unaware of his ex.

Now, destiny has brought them once again, face-to-face for the will be in the same B-School in Goa.

I really want you to continue this for I love the concept, please turn this into a SS.

Well penned!

update asap!

And Mi Amore too..! :)

thanks for the pm

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Misha

@Born2Dance

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

O M G ! ! !

Wat a beautiful start???

Loved d way u ported kriya's feelings...

Can totally feel it thru d write up...

But d endin...

R U S E R I O U S ? ? ?

Rey n dat $#^*%**}#@@&$...

No ways...

No freaking ways...

Ugh!!!

Trust me, me hating d end...

Please please pleaseee continue it...

Seriously can't wait for the next part...

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Wow wow wow amazing start:-):-):-)

Beautifully written anky:-):-)

Luvd it very much:-):-)

Rey and taani together:-(:-(:-(:-(

Pls do continue soon:-):-)

Waiting for d next part:-):-)