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sidhu285

@sidhu285

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing..Loved it..

Hot ☺️ Hot ☺️ Hot...☺️

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Angel13

@Angel13

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Simply superb update

thanks for pm

really loved it

was really hot 😳☺️

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Hira

@hira_arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow amezing

thankz for the PM

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ShiningStar18

@ShiningStar18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hot OS!

Loved reading it ❤️

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Fleur_de_Lis

@Fleur_de_Lis

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tia.o
I am confused again in few places.

If Arnav took of his shirt when Khushi came out trying to tie the doris, what did he take off later?

If Khushi became unconscious, how is she responding?

Otherwise it's good...

good questions❓ tia👍🏼

Arnav took his wet shirt first and was wearing his trousers only

He opened his dress and was wearing his trousers only.

later Khushi said"get fresh and come downstairs".

then he got fresh and came down.

(it is very natural he will wear something...later I had mentioned he was wearing nightshirt and black tracks)

He opened his night shirt

He asked her to open his track-pants

lines in violet are directly copied from the text...

then coming to your second question...

She felt unconscious with this burning passion.

she felt she didn't become unconscious...

to be veryyy frank...it came out of my imagination and moresoever reading books...this line I read somewhere in a sidney sheldon novel...the line was something SHE FELT DYING IN HIS ARMS...MOMENTS WERE...BEAUTIFUL

i hope i could clear your doubts...if not please feel free to say...😊

Edited by Fleur_de_Lis - 12 years ago