A NIGHT TO REMEMBER - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
awesome OS


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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
how romantic
i just can't wriite stuff like this
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
that was gud... actually decently hot!! ☺️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Brilliant!! That waz hot hot hot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis



good questions❓ tia👍🏼

Arnav took his wet shirt first and was wearing his trousers only
<font color="#660066">He opened his dress and was wearing his trousers only.</font>
<font size="2">later Khushi said</font><font color="#660066">"get fresh and come downstairs".</font>
then he got fresh and came down.

<font size="2">(it is very natural he will wear something...later I had mentioned he was wearing nightshirt and black tracks)</font>
<font color="#660066">He opened his night shirt</font>
<font color="#660066">He asked her to open his track-pants</font>

<font size="3">lines in <font color="#660066">violet</font> are directly copied from the text...</font>


<font size="3">then coming to your second question...</font>
She felt unconscious with this burning passion.

<font size="2">she felt she didn't become unconscious...</font>

<font size="2">to be veryyy frank...it came out of my imagination and moresoever reading books...this line I read somewhere in a sidney sheldon novel...the line was something SHE FELT DYING IN HIS ARMS...MOMENTS WERE...BEAUTIFUL</font>


<font size="2">i hope i could clear your doubts...if not please feel free to say...😊</font>



Okay got it. About the "She felt unconscious", grammatically it can be falling unconscious, but there is no feeling unconscious which you have used. That's why I got confused. It could be "she felt faint" instead. Just a suggestion.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
That was so beautiful Only thing that botherd me, they were not married as per Kushi. So... he is only thinking of himself.
But still, we know he has true intentions.
tfs😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
That was Very hot..
I really need cold shower
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
😳Wow...amazingly hot OS...thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tia.o



Okay got it. About the "She felt unconscious", grammatically it can be falling unconscious, but there is no feeling unconscious which you have used. That's why I got confused. It could be "she felt faint" instead. Just a suggestion.




corrected...is it ok now???


if there is more please feel free to tell
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Posted: 12 years ago
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a hot, passionate one n really well written. Thank u dear for pming me ur index. I would absolutely love to read ur works :-)

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