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Posted: 13 years ago
yes i understand the love she is feeling because i am a mother but i don't condone the actions she is taking she is very selfish in her think she gave him up it did not matter what she had to go through and it took her so many years to come now to up root him from family who loves him and has put him first not caring for his family his dad and his option she will hurt him more in the long run he loves his dad the man who was there from day one he was there when she gave him up he was adopted by parent who loved him and puts him first loved the update thanks for the pm


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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for the pm...

What an emotional moment for Khushi when got a chance to hold her son...

But felt sad for her son--being overwhelmed by Miss Teacher's emotions...

Really enjoying your writing...so sad that someone would take it...

Anxiously but patiently waiting for more of the story...
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Posted: 13 years ago
A beautiful update!!
Khushi's feelings towards Aryan was beautifully penned ...She being a mother should understand what is best for her child even if it means staying away from Aryan but it's never easy for a mother .
Does Arnav know that Aryan is not his son??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Omg the khushi- aryan moment was prfect!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Uff... I want to reach into my screen, hold Khushi, and shake some sense into her.
Go, she is so delusional.

I bet this is not going to go down well with Arnav and his reaction will not be fun to read when he finds out

Lovely update!
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Posted: 13 years ago
I want to put some sense into this khushi. WTH is wrong with her? Has she become so blind to even her own son's happiness. I don't agree with even one thought of hers. How can she just put aside, Arnav, his relation with Aryan is much more real than her motherly affection. She is a selfish, and a mother who cannot think beyond herself, does not deserve to be called a mother.

Aman, aww he is such a good friend, however i don't think, Arnav will stay away from khushi. His intentions are definitely growing when it concerns khushi. And the Aryan & Khushi moment, beautifully written :)Aww i could understand her need to hold him. But i really wish, she stops the storm, she is brewing. Its gonna end up destroying more than just herself!

And Priya & khirad. I am wondering, will priya at a moment have to choose?

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Posted: 13 years ago
i love the friendship bond..its so nice to see such amazing friendship!:D

i love my mom and cant think a life without her..and m not a mother yet..just got over with college..so i dont think i can relate to a mother feeling..but i know how essential it is to have a mother and i know how my mom loves me and my sibling and she cant even think of leaving us for a second..looking in that perspective kushi's feelings are not wrong but i still cant justify to her..and maybe its because of the bond or arnav and aryan..i really dont want a third person destroying it!:/

saying all this i still love your work..i dont write much of a long comment to any other ss..mainly coz m lazy:P..but when i start commenting in your ss i have a feeling i dont feel like stopping:P..its that beautiful..hats of to you!:)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reniji66

Please don't take this wrong. I just don't like this story. It is painting an ugly picture of everyone involved except Aryan and Arnav. Aman has his own agenda. If he hadn't given out the info Khushi wouldn't be desperate right now. Raj, deserves no discussion at all! If Khushi had been stronger, she would not have put a man above her child. If I were her, I would try to stay close to him, but not at the expense of taking him from Arnav. Aman trying to put someone else in the picture is stupid and presumptuous. And if Arnav is NOT falling for her, then why are you addressing that angle, as if he is? I just feel too strongly about motherhood and what constitutes a parent. Adoptions also are to be private, and Aman broke that privacy, for whatever reason. His hostility towards Khushi is not fair. And yes there is no greater bond between a parent and a child. And if that bond forms from blood or not, it forms, who can deny it? Khushi and this child have bonded, through no fault of her own. Why should she be treated like the bad guy here? I'm sorry, I hope you don't feel badly, but I will pass on reading any more here. I hope it goes well for you as many love this story. Maybe I will peek in much later on and see how things are going. All the best.



Okay, i guess i should explain myself, because i took off the previous note before many had the chance to read it. The story is based on a real story, and i know its hard to except a mother could be like this. But she was selfish, and made some choices, she went on to regret later on. We can condone and refuse all we want, but at the center of it all, we are just all humans. Basic, flawed humans. And a mother is no different. Khushi was a woman before becoming a mother. She had to choose, and she did, you can judge her. But always remember, our path is not the only right one, and we cannot judge until walking a mile in others shoes. I am not a mother, but i have a mother and to some extend i understand her connection to us.

Anyway, there was a part that did hurt me, that i was painting a bad picture of all except Arnav & Aryan. I have been trying to show right of path to khushi, through her conversations with Priya. I have been highlighting Aryan and Khushi, because i do believe in their bond. I cannot stay away from the truth, that they are mother and child. And Arnav and Khushi, you cannot expect both to just fall in love instantly, they just came out of a relation. The bond of love, isn't based on first looks...or is it? I have been focusing on them from an angle where Arnav is starting to take an interest in khushi. And Khushi has not been reciprocal. And if you think, Arnav is the perfect human, you are wrong, he is flawed just as much as khushi. Its just you have seen the fatherly side of him mostly. Lastly Aman, he is only protecting his friend, if thats wrong? Than i guess, anyone in this world who tries to help their loved ones, should be called one with an agenda.

Though i do agree on one point, Aman should not have revealed. But he felt sorry for her. He felt sorry for the mother inside of khushi, at this moment and four years ago when she was brought in to the hospital and he tended to her.

And this reply is not to force you to read this story, rather just explain my POV. At the end, you have your views i have mines :)
Edited by InvisibleSmile - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
I just need to say whenever I read your update I go through so many emotions because of the way you write..it's simply amazing!!! I feel bad for all the characters in the FF...and once Arnav finds about Khushi being Aryan's mother that will not go down well will it? Thank you for the PM!! I look forward to reading more this FF and reading about how everything progresses!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Can you please focus more on Arnav's side also ?

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