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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyooo...ppl...kaise ho sab ache hi honge...😉..so here agn i m wid a surprise fr u...aaj kal na D3 ne bahut paka rakha hai isiliye FF se kaam chalana pad rha ha😛 acha btw...sabse important baat..ye sirf ek hi update hai and ha...credits fr dis goes 2 my 2 besties... shwetz..senoritashweta on IF and samyu..samyuktha...devilish11 on IF...

and 1 more thing an FF written by bth of dem...hope u guyz wud like it..


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3053782/innocently-in-love-kriyaansh-short-story-done😊


DESTINY

dehradun...

kria lying on her bed..crying bitterly..holding sumthing tightly in her hand...as if never want to get seperated from it...

k(kria looking at the thing and talkin to it..):app kaise ho??...theek toh ho na...mujhe miss toh nhi karre??...aapka to pata nhi but mein aapko bahut miss kar rahi...sayin dis she started crying more bitterly..holding d pic close to her heart evn more tightly...

smriti's entry..carryin food in a tray...

s:arre beta..kya kar rhi ho?...tabse aawaz de rhi hu tumhe...chalo aao khana khalo...

sayin dis she walks towards her...

s:so gyi kya...chalo utho..khana khalo fir so jana...sayin dis she pats her back..

she sees a pillow wet...

s(speakin sternly):kria ye kya tum abhi bhi uss baat ko lekar ro rhi ho..chalo utho abhi...ek saal ho chuka..aur tum abhi bhi---

k(cutting her in between...yelling):ha maa shi keh rhe ho aap...1 saal ho gya..1 saal se door hu mein apne doston se...dance se...rey se...ab aur kya chahte ho mujhse ...sab kuch to cheen liya mujhse...ab kya mein ro bhi nhi sakti..!!????saying dis kria walks off..banging d door in anger...leaving a dumbstruck smriti...

smriti breaks down into tears...remembering how she got seperated frm her husband...n how much she still misses him!Now she realises her mistake seeing her daughter's misery...!!!..nw she decides 2 reveal everything 2 her daughter...smriti goes out near kria..who is sitting on d couch..lost in her thoughts..

s: kria...mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..

.k: mom mujhe aapse kuch baat nhi karni...

s: beta plzz ek bar meri baat sunlo...isse tumhe pata chalegea ki maine tumhe tumhare DIL DOSTI aur DANCE se kyu door rakha...

kria gives a luk 4 her mom 2 go on..

s: kria..tum apne dad ke bare mei hamesha puchti thi na...toh suno...tumhare dad ka naam hai GAUTAM RAIPRAKASH...jo ek bohot bade dancer hai..aur dance hi hamare alag hone ki wajah hai...kria was shocked listening 2 dis..

s: aur tum kria ghai nai kria raiprakash ho..aur tumhari ek behen bhi hai...jiska naam SHARAON RAIPRAKASH hai...listening to dis kria froze..!!!

s: kria i am sorry...mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas ho gya hai..i am extremely sorry..to keep u away frm yr dreams an yr rey..

k: mom abhi ye sab bolne ka kya faida hai...sab kuch toh kho chuki hu...an she goes of into her room...at nytt..

s(enters kria's room):kria...ye lo...and forwards her hand holding sumthin...

kria looks at it an den takes it and opens it.

kria luks at her wid a confused expression

s: ye lo beta..go an follow yr dreamz...

k: aap ye sab kyu kar rahe ho..??

s: beta i dnt want u 2 hate me...so jus go an follow yr dreamz...!! :)

kria hugs her mom tightly...

s: keeping her hand on her cheek...go pack yr bags now..

MUMBAI..

NEXT MORNING AT ST.LOUIS COLLEGE..

st.louis as usual rocking an rolling..all d students..enjoying demselves..chatting wid each other..kria enters d college an alll d memories flash into her mind...something catches her eye...she goes towards it...an is shocked 2 see..on d notice board she sees many pictures of weaklings holding d trophy of d footloose competetion..an she stares at something..she luks at tht girl...an den she thinks tht she might be d sixth dancer...luking at it she gives a cold smile an walks away..towards d canteen..hoping 2 see rey..an tht new GRL..!!

CANTEEN

kria enters..

she sees neha,vishakha.swayam,amar,bharat,vicky,nilesh,rinni,simmi n the new girl but nt rey..!!The group is so busy dat they dont evn notice kriya...kria..luks at dem smiling...an goes away thinking sumthin...

k(in her mind): mujhe ek taraf se kushi ho rahi hai ki un logo ne..6th dancer dhoond liya..par ek taraf se dukh ho raha hai ki..maine apni position kho di...and bumps into sumone..an both of dem fall down

xyz: cnt u see an walk..!!

k: oh i am so sorry..she luks at the grl..an den she recognises her..SHARON aap??

s: KRIA..!! tum yaha..wapas agyi?? kab ayi?? what a surprise...!!

k: wo..wo..actually...chodo na sharon ab mei wapas agyi hu na...

s: but..where did u go?? kaha gayab ho gyi thi tum??

k: woh bohot badi story hai..phir kabhi sunaugi...

s: whtever...!...anyways i g2g an welcum back..!!!

she says it smiling an walks off...

k: sharon wait..can u do me a favor??

s: wht??

k: plzz dnt tell anyone tht iam here..i jus want it 2 be a surprise..an cn u jus tell me where is rey..??

s(smilingly): ya sure..an i guess he is in the reharsal hall...

k: thnx..!!:)

an sharon walks off..kria on her way 2 d reharsal hall..meanwhile d new girl taani...goes 2 d reharsal hall..where rey is sitting lost in his thoughts..

REHARSAL HALL

t: hey rey...!!

r: hi taani..

t: aap itne kohye kohye se kyu ho??

r: kuch nahi..bas aise hi soch raha tha..

t: toh aapka mood thik karna padega abhi..kya aap mere sath dance karoge??

r: no taani..nt in a mood..

t: rey..plzz..plzzz sirf ek dance..plzz

r(unwillingly): ok...

taani goes 2wards d music player an plays TUJHE BHULA DIYA..

REY forwards his hand to taani 2 start dancing..taani holds it..an dey both start dancing..all dis was being seen by KRIA..who was behind d door..

kria's heart is flooded by various emotions...she is happy,shocked an sad at d same tym..tears start flowing down her eyes...she couldnt take it an runs off frm dere..rey lost in his thoughts..while dancing..remembering kria

R(in his mind): baatcutter..tumhe bohot miss kar raha hu..aaj tumahra b"day hai..kaha ho tum??..kya mei tumhe yaad hu..i wish taani ki jagah tum hoti aaj mere sath dance...an tears strt forming in his eyes..he stopped dancing

r: taani..i g2g..mei..thodi der ke baad ata hu..byee..ill see u later..an walks of frm dere in a hurry..

t: kya hua rey ko..??

FIRE EXIT

k(...crying): rey aaj meine appko itne dino badh dekha...mein bata nahi sakti ki mein kitni kush hu...mujhe laga ki aap mujhe miss karr rahe honge...par...aisa lagtha tho nahi hai...do u remember me??...meine aapko bohot hurt kiya hai...aap ka dil toda...a-m...a-m re-all-y so-rry...n starts crying more bitterly...aapko hurt karne ki wajah kash mein aapko samjah paati...am so so-rry... :'( n there is no end of her tears...

in d meanwhile..rey was walking in d corridor..remembering all his memories wid kria...an he reaches d fire exit...he stands dere staring at it...

* FLASHBACK*

rey an kria run into d fire exit..

k: rey aap mere frnd se zada ho...(blushing)

r: smiling..an starts jumping in joy..

kria runs out of dere...blushing 2 d core..

FLASHBACK ENDS...

R: STARTS CRYING..enters d fire exit..looking down...closes d door...an bangs his fist hardly..on d door...teling...kyu kria..k-yu...k-yu... :'(

kria..listening 2 d bang..at an instant turns back...n cant believe wat she saw...both together

r: kria.!?

k: rey..!?

r(in his mind): kya sach mei kria mere samne hai..ya phir i am just imagining it...?

k: r-ey...r-ey a-ap...yaha peh??

r: kr-iya tu-m yaha peh?? sach me??

k: ha rey...mein...

rey turns back in anger..!!

k: rey...am so sorry...aap plz mujhe maaf karo...(she moves foward)

r: ab phir kyu aayi ho...huh?? mera dil phir se todhna chahti ho kya????

k: nahi rey...mein aapka dil todhne nahi aayi hu...mein aapse maafi maangne aayi hu...n rey us din pre valentine pe...meine ne aapse joh kuch kaha...meri majhburi thi...i didnt meant it...!

r: may i kno d reason???

kria tells everything 2 him..

reys eyes r filled wid tears...he cnt blv tht atlast his kria is back..he cnt resist an pulls his baatcutter in a tight hug..kria also responds by hugging him back..as even she wanted him badly...she was nt able 2 stay away anymore frm him...rey felt as if he got his lyf back...it was quiet a long hug..an den dey broke it...

k: rey toh kya aapne mujhe maaf kardiya???

r: offcourse my baatcutter...

k: sach me??an she again hugs him..!!

r: wishpers in her ears..i luv u my baatcutter..

k: kria..is jus shocked...an den she says " i luv u 2 rey" an den runs away..blushing..but rey catches her wrist an pulls her close 2 him...such tht her back was facing him...he caught her by her waist..an slowly tightens his grip..sending shivers down her spine...kria was shocked by his action...but didnt stop him..coz even she wanted him badly...he slowly moved her hair aside an kissed her at her nape...she was loosing her senses...she shivered a little at at d touch of his soft lips...her actions.. drove him more crazy...an his passion grew stronger..he couldnt resist himself..so he turned her..such tht both were facing each other..an crushed his lips against hers...kria's eyes widened suddenly..but den she slowly closed her eyes..and allowed him 2 do so...their kiss grew more stronger an stronger...as dey both couldnt control demselves...d kiss started sending electric shocks 2 kria...an fire crackers were bursting in reys heart...dey both kissed each other 2 d earnest...as both were getting crazy 4 each other...reys hands were around her waist...pulling her more towards him..an kria's hands were around his neck...aftr a long tym..kria broke d kiss...an dey both stood der looking at each other's {LLHH}...sparkling eyes...!! rey saw tears in kria's eyes...

r: kria kya hua??? did i hurt u or something??

k: nahi rey..u didnt...iam afraid tht i may loose---

rey places his fingers on her lips an says

r: kria dnt u ever tell tht..nw nothing can tear us apart..u were always mine..an will be forever...my sweet baatcutter..

k: i promise...!

an dey both again hug each other...bt dey break it very soon...

k: rey maine kisi ko bataya nahi ki mein ayi hu.

r: cholo den lets go...m sure..everybody..will want 2 meet u..

k: ha rey chalo lets go..

r: smiling lyk he never smiled before...said..happy b'day...my love...

kria's eyes sparkle wid happiness...

k: rey aap ko mera b'day yaad hai?? thnk you so much...

r: kya mei tumahra b'day kabhi bhul sakta hu...?

kria smiled an both left 4 d canteen..holding hands...

CANTEEN

sw: guys tum logo ne rey ko dekha...subha se maine use nahi dekha??

vi: nahi yaar..maine toh nahi dekha..

all: hum logo ne bhi nahi dekha..

t: woh guys..woh reharsal hall se kahi chale gaye the...bohot sad sad dikh rehe the..

sw(in his mind): zaroor kria ko yaad kar raha hoga...

sw: ill go an get him...as soon as swayam gets up frm d table 2 leave..he was shocked..2 see...an was lyk..."guys...rey..aur KRIA...aur who bhi sath mein?!!

all: WHT??!!

rey an kria enter looking at each other smiling...holding hands

n: kria..u back??? how an when??

v: dude...kaha chale gayi thi??

a: woh bi bila bataye??

b: aur ab tum rey ke sath??

vi:sath me..??

sim: kahi ye sapna toh nahi??

rin: pinching simmi..stupid ye koi dream nahi..

sh: smiles...

nil: kuch toh gadbad hai..

rin: tum kria ki copy toh nahi ho na??

all hit their heads...shouting"rinni"

t: ye kaun hai??(in her mind..ye rey ke itne karib kyu khadi hai??)

sw: kria..welcum back..an will u try 2 explain us everything??

sh: ya..where did u disappear??

k: wo..actually bohot lambi kahani hai..ill tell u guys later..

r: ab chodo na sab...nw atleast she is back na..wid us

v: btw..whts goin on between u 2??

kria strts blushing hard an luks down...

r: wo..w..na..an even he strts blushing...

all strtd laughing an taani rushes out of dere...

all settle down..an when kria goes 2 sit..rey holds her hand an pulls her...an goes on his knees..holding kria's right hand...everyones eyes widened...all were staring at dem widout blinking..

r: kria...kya tumhe yaad hai ki hum phele dheradun me mile the...new year's eve pe..aur ek sath new yr celebrate kiya jail me...woh meri sabse beautiful nyt thi...maine ye suna ha ki agar new yr acha jaye toh fir pura saal acha jaata hai..i guess thts tru..coz mera pura saal acha gaya hai..jus becoz i met u...kya tum har new yr mere sath celebrate karogi...??...kya tum mere sath dance karogi ...tumhare bina..mera dance incomplete hai...kya tum meri dance partner banoji??...will u fill my lyf wid beautiful memories...will u be mine forever??...kya tum hamesha is krishna ki radha banogi??..kya tum is chabilal ki romaira banogi??? kya tum is linecutter ki baatcutter banogi?? kya tum is rey ki kria banogi??...an winks.!! ;) ;)

all r dumbstruck..!!!

k: wid tears in her eyes...rey app kitne sawal puchte ho..ki mei bohot confuse ho jati hu..par aapke har sawal ka ek hi jawab hai...YES YES YES..!!!

all girls: awww..!!

all were smiling...

rey was soo happy tht he lifted kria in his arms...an twirled her...an den he brought her down an kissed her on her forehead..!!

everyone hooted..!!! an strtd jumping..around...an congradulated dem..!!

den sharon announced...guys 2day is my b'day..so m inviting all of u..2 my farm house...4 a party..all should cum 4 sure...

v: hey dude aaj toh kria ka bhi b'day hai na??

sw: yes...

vi: toh phir double party...aur woh kya tha jail mei new yr manana?? dehradun mei milna??

r: woh na bohot lambi story hai..phir kabhi bolunga..luks at kria an winks..!

alll go back 2 their places..2 get ready 4 d party...

all got ready.

HEYS GUYS THE LINKS FOR THE DRESSES,CAKE ETC HAS BEEN POSTED ON THE WALL PLZ CHECK THEM OUT! :) .neha wears

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vishaka wears

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simmi wears

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rinni wears

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sharon wears

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kria wears

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and dis is d farmhouse...

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everything was set..it was nly a matter of tym..4 d party 2 begin...all of dem were gona cum 2gether in their car..an swayam was driving...rey an kria sat behind..cuddling wid each other...so close tht..no one could seperate dem...dey reached d place..an were mesmerized by its beauty...dey entered d place..an greeted sharon an everyone else...d party strted...an everyone were enjoying lik hell...aftr sum tyn d cake wass bought...

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everyone were lyk "wow"...vicky an nil couldnt control demselves...sharon was gonna cut it..bt sumone stopped her..it was swayam..

sw:here take dis first..he gifts her sumthin..wrapped in red gift paper...

sh: bt i didnt cut d cake still...

sw: bt 1st take it..

sh: she opened an saw..


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she could nly utter..."aww...cho cute...!! just lyk u"...^-^

all gv their gifts...bt kria didnt...

sw: kria arent gonna gift anything to sharon??

k: sharon...i hav the biggest gift 4 u...i want to tell u sumthin but plzz dont faint..:P

sh: wht do u mean..??

k: sharon...um...we both r sisters..!!

sh: wht??

k: yes...

all: ???

kria narrets d whole story 2 sharon..sharon was shocked...she didnt tell anythin..jus ran upto her room...cryingswayam gets tensed n follows her...

SHARON'S ROOM

sw: sharon...kya hua...roh kyo rahi ho?? r u angry wid kriya..?? didnt u like d gift??

sh: no dumbo...i absoluetly loved it...u dunno swayam ki mein kaisa feel karr rahi hu...i feel like i hv got my complete family back..! :')

sw: just smiles..!

sh: thnx swayam..4 always being dere 4 me...!!! an giveshim a peck on his cheeks..

swayam felt as if he was floating in d sky...wid a wide smile on his face...an den he hugs her..after breaking d hug..

sw: chalo ab niche chalo..all r waiting...or else dey will think tht u r angry or sumthin...

sharon smiled an went down..all were waiting 4 her..as soon as she came down..she hugged kria...an dey both cut d cake 2gether...

all enjoyed an den d party came 2 an end..as it was too late..dey decided 2 stay dere nly...rey suddenly pulled kria...

k: arey rey...kya kar rake ho??

r: mujhe tumhe ek romantic moonlight walk pe leke jana hai...

k: kya abhi??

r: yes

k: aap mujhe kaha leke ja rahe ho..??

dey both go on a romantic walk..nearby dere was a beach an dey reachd der...


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k: ek minute rey..she takes his support...an removes her sandels..as her legs were paining a lot...

r: r yr legs still paining..??..

k: ..um..yes

rey at an instant lifts her in his arm an strts walking..

k: rey mujhe niche utaro...

r: instead of putting her down...swirls round..an den in d mud dey loose balance an fall down..

kria down on d sand an rey over her...an reys hand under her head 2 protect her frm getin hurt...she slowly opened her eyes...an saw rey admiring her..

r: kria..dis is 4 u...

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k: she was shocked by looking at it...rey ye gift?? mujhe toh koi gift nahi chaiye??..aap hi mere liye gift ho...

r: smiled..ok so dnt take is as a gift..take it as a promise...a promise..tht u will never leave me an go...an dis also says tht iam always wid u..no matter wht happens..

kria was touched by his words...she kissed him...wid all her love...an he 2 responded...aftr sumtym dey broke d kiss..an lay down side by side..watchin d stars..holding each others hands...!!


ok guyz to i hope all of u liked it..and cumin 2 d pics..i noe dey arent opening..but will post dem 2morrow..till den do hit d like button and post ua comments !

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome

Thanks for the pm
Edited by Himaniahir - 13 years ago
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yeee me second
muje nahi pta tha ki ja FB pey b hey
but woow
i love this
what a surprise
vese b D3 ajj kal torcher hi kar rha hey
but thanks for this lovely gift ...
megical kriyaansh...
u roke it again
kya baat kya baat kya baat
keep it up
waiting for ur next work ...👏
Edited by aromakriyaansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing OS 👏...
Aww Rey and Kria are together 😃...
Haye Rey's confession was so Sweet 😍...
Thank God Sharon accepted Kria 😳...
Loved it ❤️...
N thanks for the pm 😊.
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thanks for the pm and i really liked the os :D

Nikki <3
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haaahhh... i've already read it on Facebook... 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

naam padhte he mai samajh gayi thi... 😛 🤣

bt kuch b kaho yarrr... i just lllooovvveeeddd this OS... 🤗 it was sooo damn gooddd... no no... not only good... amazinnggg... phenomenal... out of this world... 👏

haayyyeee... 😳

bt i still wonder ismei last mei taani ka aakhir hua kya...????? 🤣

well jo bhi hai... I Love It... 😳 😉 👏


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Posted: 13 years ago
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😉

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

haaahhh... i've already read it on Facebook... 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛


naam padhte he mai samajh gayi thi... 😛 🤣

bt kuch b kaho yarrr... i just lllooovvveeeddd this OS... 🤗 it was sooo damn gooddd... no no... not only good... amazinnggg... phenomenal... out of this world... 👏

haayyyeee... 😳

bt i still wonder ismei last mei taani ka aakhir hua kya...????? 🤣

well jo bhi hai... I Love It... 😳 😉 👏



i must say yaadash bahut acha hai..aur taani..ab samjha karo yaar...rey ne kria ko sabke saamne propose kiya...
bechari sadma bardasht nhi kar paayi..
apna muh chipakar bhaag gyi ! 😛 😉
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Awww loved the OS
Loved kriyansh their love story finally got an end
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Originally posted by: Himaniahir

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glad tht u liked it !!😊
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Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh

yeee me second

muje nahi pta tha ki ja FB pey b hey
but woow
i love this
what a surprise
vese b D3 ajj kal torcher hi kar rha hey
but thanks for this lovely gift ...
megical kriyaansh...
u roke it again
kya baat kya baat kya baat
keep it up
waiting for ur next work ...👏


u noe wat it feels awesome to read ua comments...
it really encourages..and yes we do hv a FB page..wch hit 900 liks 2day..so damn happy
and ya next work on its way😉

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