ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145 - Page 95

Originally posted by: Paarijat

Chapter 19

I was very happy to see the update. Happy Dushera/ Vijayadashami to you. I hope the festival brings a lot of prosperity and happiness to you.

Khushi's conversation- nicely done...reminds me of Maxine who wrote "Highway to Hell". From some of your posts, I would never have been able to guess you had this side to you. I will tell you more about this on my comment to 'Highway to Hell'.

All that talk about sex was very realistic. I was thinking what Arnav was thinking- "What's stopping them from doing it before the surgery". 😊

What I liked more was Arnav's reaction to all this. He is a masterpiece. 😊😊And after I read the last para where you described his reaction ...I really went "Awww" on my screen. It was that cute. Devi Maiyya as usual is a ROCKSTAR!

Hey...the relationship has suddenly progressed skipping many levels. It is interesting he is calling it a relationship. Can you throw some more light on what Arnav's pull towards Khushi is. Does he understand it himself? I know she does. Overall, I loved it. You beat yourself every time with every chapter.

Please accept my compliments gracefully and write a line or two thanking me, pls? 😉

Bye for now!

Originally posted by: madmaxine

Hey! Thanks for the nice comment. Happy Vijayadashami to you too! To answer your question about what draws Arnav towards Khushi. The most elemental thing that draws any human to another. The knowledge that they are liked by the opposite party:) Arnav found out Khushi liked him. He's always had a soft spot for people in trouble...he tried to make her feel better when she was down. She's a hot chick, he's a young man. Dil toh paagal hai. Bas. Khushi's feelings are more complex...she actually has a concrete reason for liking him. He brings joy into her life. Arnav is yet to experience all that true love business. It will happen!

I'll look forward to your comments on H2H.

Also, I realize I don't engage much with my readers. This is not intentional. I just don't know what to say half the time when you guys write such nice things. I do read and enjoy everyone's comments. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I'll try to answer.