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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

Originally posted by: madmaxine

I don't do forehead kisses. When they kiss, they kiss. Bas. No cop outs!

Make them kiss then. Please...

Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Make them kiss then. Please...

OK. Meko kya milega? Do I get 1 week off if I make them kiss in the next update?

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..Anita..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Yay chapter 15

Miss madmaxine...what happened to the emails

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Paarijat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Hey,

I read some of your funny posts and I stalked your profile and found this FF. I'm glad I did! Intelligent and brilliant idea. I've read 12 chapters.

Your story is very funny and witty. I love the characterization of Arnav and Khushi. I am able to see them before my eyes. They are so real. Yet, you have lifted the characters slightly above the ground to make them entertaining. Simply well done! What is refreshing is that throughout the story, a reader would not be able to pass good/ bad value judgements on the characters. They are just who they are.

I could relate to every situation, every emotion, every dialogue, every character. The story is very unique and the writing style is superb. Thank you for this story.

Since I am reading your story in one go, I will definitely do justice to it by following this up with more comments may be chapter by chapter.

I think I've also seen you on Spice Girls Hangout. I really miss the hangout. 😭 Keep writing...Bye for now!

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Vrinda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

luck was on jaypee's side

poor arnav was giving false hopes to himself

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madmaxine

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

Hello!

Chapter 16 is up. Warning: Angst alert. Here is the link.

A few of you have asked me if I didn't send out emails for the last chapter, 'cos you missed it. I surely did send them out. would you please check your spam folders to see if it went there? If not, please pm me your email IDs again...I'll add you in. Sorry for the confusion. I thought I had the mailing list set up.

OK, read and review people.

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MentalExotica

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

wow chapter 16 is up, my timings are just about perfect, we are soul mates i tell ya!

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Vrinda

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

this was such a emotinal update

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

Originally posted by: madmaxine

OK. Meko kya milega? Do I get 1 week off if I make them kiss in the next update?

Aap bohot boori ho... Aisa koi karta hain kya? How can I choose between ArHi kiss and no update from you for a week? It is like asking to choose between Arnav and Khushi/ Barun and Sanaya. I don't believe in camps and I REFUSE to answer your question. Bas!