ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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aditi07

@aditi07

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#641

superb updates!!
just read the last 3 of them...loved the last esp.!!
loving the names arnav has been calling khushi with...hunterwali, phoolan devi, cruella, chamundeshwari, & what not..😆😆
loving this boyish charming arnav 😳😳
really intrigued about the surgery of khushi...😕
gosh payal is so spoiled... but i feel she is also angry not only coz of akash but also coz of khushi's surgery...felt as if her fear of losing khushi was coming out as her hatred words for her!! i hope i am not wrong!!cant wait to read further!!

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JerryTheMouse

@JerryTheMouse

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#642

Res for reading.

Edited:

Wow! Payal is so spoilt! Everything is about her and her and her! I like how you have shown her, at least she is openly demanding, and not selfishly manipulating like Anjali in the show!

And Khushi, I hope she is ok and the surgery for whatever is going tone ok.

Loved how Arnav answered Payal, tells me that this Arnav will stand by khushi and. It let every Tom, dick, and Harry walk all over her!

Thank you for a very entertaining read!

Edited by JerryTheMouse - 13 years ago

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Abhinaya

@HeyDeviMaiyya

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#643

Loved the update !! Cant wait for the next part !! Thanks for the mail dear 😃

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sunny_sarun

@sunny_sarun

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#644

i just love the names arnav call khushi!! 🤣
and payal was such a B****..how can she shout like this😲
i will be waiting for next update :)

P.S i have sent you a pm with my gmail account..thanx😊😊

Edited by Sana_malik - 13 years ago

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#645

I loved it! What a scene at Yellow Dandellion!

And payal was a bitch there.Totally insensitive.I just loved Arnav when he said that he is gonna drop khushi home in spite of all the drama happening there.Aww!

And the way he teased khushi that she dressed up for him 😳

What surgery? I hope its nothing Major! 😔

Loved it Maxine!

Edited by GayuArnav - 13 years ago

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#646

So I've read till chapter 4, and I am loving it!

The very idea of Khushi being an independent ,successful woman is awesome. I also really like the fact that your Khushi is three years older than Arnav. Interesting to see how that plays out in the future.

I couldn't stop laughing at Pappu can't dance Saala and Tweety birds!

So JayP is a full fledged character, and Shyam is the good, caring brother-in-law..I'm waiting to read about other characters you have not written about yet.

I really like the direction this story is moving in, and I'm only sorry I started reading so late!

Now, back to chapter 5...

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#647

awesome update loved it payal is such a selfish spoiled brat poor khushi loved how arnav was teasing her and she dressed up for the clients yeah right awesome update thanks for the email

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EXPELLIARMUS

@EXPELLIARMUS

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#648

So, finally I'm all caught up.

I have to say I like Arnav here, quirky, wise-ass, yet sensitive and a gentleman. Khushi's breakdown and subsequent need for socialising made so much sense, after the news she just received.

So Payal is insensitive and clingy? I am very curious about where her character is going..

Overall, I am loving this journey!

Waiting for your next update..