ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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Sanchari

@.hea.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Holy Mother of Jesus 🤣 you seriously need to update this after THAT hell of a chapter 🤣🤣🤣

I mean seriously like DJ??? 🤣🤣 Imagine having banging his desk and howling with laughter☺️

Jeeez, the way he speaks about her, daal mein kuch kaala hain 😈 poori daal abhi kaali huyi hain kya?

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I love the last paragraphs you give, it's sort of a different style of writing. Specially Mamaji's part 🤣

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Aanchal15

@Aanchal15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

A very offbeat and ingenious FF, Maxineji 👏...read all the parts in one go...and , it is impeccable and worthy of innumerable plaudits...I love Arnav's rejoinders...can't wait to read more

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meghnas

@meghnas

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#513

fab chapter!! loved the humor :) n especially loved Arnav defending Khushi n the teasing by his friends abt it 😊

Akaash-Arnav convo - cute!! hehehe n JayPee backed off already 😛

looking forward to the next update 😊

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#514

loved the update loved how arnav was defending khushi so cute and jaypee bowing out of the game even do he never had a chance awesome update thanks for the pm

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

I haven't been reading updates and commenting on them much, of late, because I've an exam... But I couldn't resist myself, for your ff, Maxine ji, is unique and I knew, your update would give me some respite from all the preparation, and I am not disappointed... The Raizadas here have a semblance of normalcy about them, I mean they talk, chat, crack jokes,etc. like a normal family (unlike the one of the show...grrr). And poor Akash, he thought at least his bro will oppose the idea of him dating DJ, but seems like Awnie baby himself s falling for Khwushi-wushie's charms... And I wonder what Devi Maiyya knows about KG's peaceful sieep ;-) Update soon, pretty please? (Not my fault, you yourself promised to do so...)

Edited by Happy-go-lucky - 13 years ago