ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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RasgullaSP

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Posted: 13 years ago

#471

Edited my comment on page 73

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Newbiesoapfan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#472

Hai giri nandini ... full devi japam ! Nice update...so the Payash secret is out and Mr.Jaypee is out of the race.

Arnav is defending Khushi already !

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3serialfan40

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Posted: 13 years ago

#473

love it, looking forward to more on this

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daljeet

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Posted: 13 years ago

#474

lovely update dear.i loved it to the core.

esp the last line.u always keep me craving at the end.i love this kushi,n ofcourse arnav too.but i hv a spl liking to kushi.i'm always eager to knw wat wud happen in kushi's life next.so eager.hope ur nxt update wont be too late.

k i unserstand.hope ur thesis work went well.i hv a sister with the same thing,so definitely knws how time consuming it is.

n yea the teasing part n arnav siding kushi was so cute.n all those names he gives her is so funny n interesting.

anjali is so bitchy,im sorry,but i really did feel so.it seems in this story too she is a brainless beauty.

shyam,poor thing stuck up with this woman.lol.n jaypee again a poor thing.somehow i find anjali -jaypee combo much better lol.

i had a bad feeling abt akash till now as he was so unsure abt payal.but then today his private talk with arnav brought a smile to my face n he seemed nice there.

n tht scene wer he said her name 'kushi' tht was a cute scene.i really lved it.

la is bit annoying in this one.she was so nice n mature in the last one of urs but here she seems sticky.

i hope arnav has finished his work for gupta.now how long will i hv to wait to see wat happens at the office n wat DM is planning along with maxine

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SARA

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Posted: 13 years ago

#475

Loved the update...i was dreading how Arnav would react to Akash's feeling for Payal but he took it quite easily...

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nee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#476

chamandai devi..love it...hey,please clear this thing for is khuhsi ill???or somethg...

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citi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#477

I am really enjoying this story. It deals with serious issues, is funny in a smart way, warm and just loads of fun. The characters you are etching are individualistic and real. Love the fact that Khwushi-wushi is older than Awnie 😃

Hail Jaypee the pragmatist...very smart.

Highway to Hell is an all time favourite and this is another.

Edited by citi - 13 years ago