ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#101

loved this fiery Khushi..

Poor Arnav is paying for the others deed.. but yes... thats how our Arshi will be close to each other!!

loved both the parts n thanks for the PM.

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3serialfan40

@3serialfan40

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#102

Good please continue...
So is Shyam a decent one here or is he a snake still?
Good to know Arnav wont be a wuss, is he a loser or does he do something beyond letting rats out of cages...:-)
Don't stop is having its growing pains, for the moment, but it was interesting until perhaps a week or so...

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fluffyktau

@fluffyktau

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#103

I'm loving this Khushi, miles and miles better than the one in the box!

Intrigued who JayP is...

Liking the way you have described the characters, cant wait to read more

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809768

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#104

I like khushi in this all new different avatar! :)

The part about Anjali being over-anxious and not doing anything except praying was amazing!

So they were only supposed to release a couple of mice?
Lavanya missing Arnav, who is in the lock-up..
Interesting! xD
Can't wait to read more!

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Potatoefreak

@Potatoefreak

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#105

Just loved the update !

I am liking this khushi a lot :)

Really good job :)

Looking forward to the next update!

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#106

I'm loving this so far! Very nice idea of switching and twisting the roles. The first chapter reminded me so much of the first time Arnav and Khushi met on the show.

I see Khushi is used to hiding her emotions quite well. And Arnav seems to be the opposite. Very interesting...

I love the way you've depicted Anjali hahaha. It's perfect! 😆 Poor Shyam... Something tells me he doesn't get any haha.

Akash's halitosis 🤣 🤣 He and Payal are already together? Nice new angle to the story!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

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Manju

@Drwho

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#107

Excellent idea.

You are tackling so many topical issues, animal testing, pharmaceutical research, and i assume it is an older woman and younger man, and Halitosis!! I am running to brush my teeth as I type this.😃

And holding against consent is also against the law, or is it allowed because Arnav walked in voluntarily or rather he broke in and entered?

Edited by Drwho - 13 years ago