ArHi FF: If I were you-link to Ch20 pg 145

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

loved the update awesome la and her friends went over board and arnav paid for it loved the serious khushi thanks for the pm awesome update

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Gayathri

@GayuArnav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

I was stalking ! 😉 At least i got to comment early!

Woohoo! I made it in the first page!

Well coming back to the story, it was AMAZING! Just loved it! 😊

So khushi here is a typical ASR! Poor Jai prakash.

I wanna know what kind of a person arnav is! If this is gonna be a role reversal then will arnav be as crazy as khushi in the show? 😆

The last part was hilarious where you describe the situation of all the characters at night especially about Akaash and payal (At least they do *Ahem*stuffs in your FF)

Waiting to know how the story of Arnava nd khushi progresses!

Just loved it Maxine! :)

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Res

This is setting it up very well

I see the characters making an appearance. And may I say, I like the sound of JayP and for some weird reason Shyam.

Edited by meera30 - 13 years ago

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catalyst

@catalyst

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

i love this strongheaded khusiz...wonderful update!

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NothingLasts

@NothingLasts

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

hahaha!!! i'm liking the older woman-younger man thing!!!! i dont think i've ever read that genre in Arhi fanfic!!! but anyways, it is epic!!!!! aaahhh!!!!

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Gunjan Mukherjee

@gunjanmkj

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Arnav is suffering bcz of his frnds' ovr-enthu..n pretty much evrythn got ruined for him n his family..in d same way khushi's life was ruined on d show..hw d roles hv reserved..m enjoying dis chng a lot!

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

enjoyed the chapter... lavs is.. typical teenage stunts.. i would love to see how it goes..

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Surya.Ravi

@Surya.Ravi

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+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

very nice update..keep it up..very interesting...continue soon..😊

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Shweta1691

@Shweta1691

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

I can just imagine arnav doing 200 push ups!!! Sigh😳

Loving this jayP...he seems to know what he wants and work on it rationally

So lavs n team screwed up and now arnav is bearing the brunt?? 😲

Payal and akash already have a love story??? Wonder how that will affect their siblings relationship

Good update

Keep writing

C ya soon

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sur91

@sur91

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Nice update and a perfect setting stage wala chapter.
U know a breaking chairs and angry arnav is much more believable than a pleading and scared one. Though he is not rich but his basic nature cannot or should not be changed at least in my opinion.
P.S: u made Jay P a.k.a jay Prakash the head. That's freaking awesome yaar

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