arhi ss:heaven in middel of hell

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ok my new ss ...
After dark night i have decided to write an ss on the fights and somefunny...

Soo here it is...

Rajasthan the city of royals...
Here there were two villages
dhankoli and bijaria
(i am in india for just 2 years so i dont know abt places...just heard these names in some map for some book...i really dont if they even exixt in rajasthan also)

they were know thre biggest enemy...
The people were not even allowed to talk to eachother
but the fate was diff..
These two villages takurs houses were just opp to eachother
though there were just at the border of the place...

There was hell going on im these places..
No one can say that he is good or other is bad bczz both were same...
Killing was thete second bussiness..
The fight was for tewrror..
Not in there villages but in each others...

This is story of 2 lovers who found
thier heaven in middel of this hell...
But for how long???

how long will they fight for love...

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Sonakshi_Barun thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice 😊
Conti soon
ISensedYou thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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intrestin...nyc concept dear...do pm me wen u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1

In dhankoli
the raizada havelei

aarti raizada
: maaji shud i bring some water for you?

Devyani raizada: no bahu no need...but where is ur devrani ? Has make up session over? I dont know why made my manohar marry her...

Aarti: maamji she is just busy in somework

devyani: stop it aarti stop trying to cover her work...i know she wud be busy with her phone..
Wht will i do of her its her sons age to get married and she is behaving like kid day by day ...

Aarti: maaji

and frm behind comes manormaas voice

manorma: hellow hi bye bhye sasuma wht are u saying .i was busy in finding a girl for my babua..

Aarti: manorma tea

manorma: no thanu jiji

aarti gives her tea

devyani: vase have anyone heard abtchotte?
It has been soo manny days
have u heard abt him???

Manorma: arre my arnav babua is really my gem...when he comes he is the only who loves me in this whole house...

Arti: mmaji he is having exams this year ...
Will come after few weeks during diwali...
..
Manorma: haai he study soo hard still late nights...
He is soo nice so calm...i never heatrd that he had a agrgument also.he never evemn look at any girl...

Devyani: its good me is not doing anything like his father..his temp took him away frm us..
And looked at aarti...

Aarti had atear in her eys..

Manorma: sasuma why u make jiji remeber wht jayteji is nomore...
And arnav he just like jiji only...

Devyani: and i am proud of chotte

In delhi

in party club
nk: asr comeon we have exam tom ...lets go...

Asr: not now abhi toh i have started to enjoy...

Nk: dude plzzz we dont want to fail...

Asr : ohh comeon dont be spoil sport ...

Nk: plxx asr or i will tell her that u are nt studying

asr: u are my frnd or her?

Nk: her jasus...

Asr: ok come on...

Inboys hotel

nk: will u pass?c

asr : dont worry i will manage it dony worry...

Nk: i dont know i mean u dont use any unfair means..and dont even study still manage to pass??????

Asr: i have my good luck...

Nk: ya we know her...
And arnav ph rings

nk: who????

Arnav: guess

nk: ur smile and scared look tells is happiness...ur sunshine

arnav: and i am not scared...

Arnav: hellow hey happiness how is my sunshine...

Girl: dont sunshine me...
Arnavu fought with rahul today do u know he is admitted in hospital

arnav: really i thought he wud be gone now
and gave a smile to nk

girl: stop it arnav ...why cant u controll ur temp...
U know i am soo scared that one day u will be sended to jail for some atempt to mueder..
Then i will come to jail to meet u
and one day i will tell u i am going to be a mother
and u will ask me to marrysomeone else.
And to never tell ur son that he is child of a criminal and years later
after u realease u will return back on our son marriage ..
And when the bride side will come to know abt u that time they breakoff the marriage and then he will elope the girl and become a criminal jusyt like his father...

Nk gave a huge smile on hearing all this...
Arnav: gave a stern lok.

Arnav: khushi baby listen i will not go and will stop staying with anjali and stopwayching these old filks ...

Khushi: plzz arnav stip this fighting , ...
And studied for ur exam?

Arnav: yaa little

nk: firse shutu

arnav: keeps the ph away...
But still he cud hear shouting khushi...

Khushi: wht a little arnav if u fail...
Ohh god u will become my junior
and then i will pass a year before you then i will be forced to go home 1 and u will be still in coll anfd then...my family will force me to marrysomeone else and then i will try to drinl poison but wont be and will be forecully married..

Arnav: baby stop ..u want me to pass so let me study ..

Khushi: sorryy ok all the best...

Anjali: hogyi...now let us study...

Khushi: u know he wont study till i give him the lecture..

Anjali: khushi its time tell him the truth na..

Khushi: i wish i cud.i dont want to lose him...

Anjali: but one day he will come to know

khushi: i know but i am not ready...

Anjali: as u wish...
but dont forgett khuhsi u are playing with fire...

khushi:i know ...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start yaar !! Did they sleep wid each other yaar !! Gud Arnav is listening to Khushi !! But wat is Khushi hiding from him !! Like Anjali said she should tell him before anyone could tell him yaa !!

I am the first to comment !! Cool yaar !! OOHOO
Edited by LaxshaLOVEArshi - 13 years ago
Akorshi thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow! nyc update...

wht is hiding khushi?...

waiting fr next part...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Intresting..Awesome start..
Loved the concept...
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh wow awsuuum update dear n khushi is such a drama queen but what the heck is she hiding from arnav...fab update dear n thnx 4da pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start..👏
Loved the concept...😛
Continue soon..😳

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