REMOVED ~Give it back to me~ ArHi OS - Page 9

Awesome os! *sniffs* that was emotional stuff ,you know... Keep on writing ji, never stop giving us such beautiful pieces of writing😊

That was AWESOME...Loved it

You have to continue this please, just re read it and would love to get khushi's POV. It's amazing

This was so so so amazing!

Oh, I don't know if I should be smiling or crying...actually, come to think of it, I'm doing both...this is one of those pieces that makes one feel choked up...its beautiful. Simply beautiful. The pain...oh my God...I felt it through and through...And Arnav- spot on...how do I phrase how moving this OS is?...and kudos to Khushi for actually being able to weather it out! If it had been me, I'd have been sobbing helplessly ages ago, but then, Khushi's always been made of sterner stuff...in fact, both of them are quite stubborn aren't they? I truly loved the angle of the OS...no matter how many times they try to separate, themoments they've shared together can never be reversed, and will always stay with them...so at a point I was practically in tears for Arnav as he reminded Khushi of all the beautiful moments they shared that can't be changed...and (please correct me if I'm wrong :s) I couldn't help but feel a little hopeful by the end of the story...Khushi might have hung up, but she couldn't deny what he said...and the shadows hadn't completely seeped in...but then again, my optimism might just be because if something like this happens in the show, I'll have heart attack on the spot :P

o wow! never thought of it this way.great work:D

loveee ittt.
arnav..and asr...
amazinggg
would love to get another part of this..
:)

Whoa! I feel taken aback after reading this! Kya tha yeh!? Amazing concept! You returned the money, now return the memories. What a way to put forth a demand. Gosh! I felt the pain of the man! And each word he uttered to her, her silence and the emotions that he could perceive even through the silence! Amazing! The dialogues were written superbly! As he demanded every moment of love they had shared I could literally see it playing back in from of my eyes. WOW! Just WOW! This was superlative! Absolutely! And ASR perishes at the hands of Arnav ji! Touche!! Again. WOW!