REMOVED ~Give it back to me~ ArHi OS - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -doe-eyes-

Oh, I don't know if I should be smiling or crying...actually, come to think of it, I'm doing both...this is one of those pieces that makes one feel choked up...its beautiful. Simply beautiful. The pain...oh my God...I felt it through and through...And Arnav- spot on...how do I phrase how moving this OS is?...and kudos to Khushi for actually being able to weather it out! If it had been me, I'd have been sobbing helplessly ages ago, but then, Khushi's always been made of sterner stuff...in fact, both of them are quite stubborn aren't they? I truly loved the angle of the OS...no matter how many times they try to separate, themoments they've shared together can never be reversed, and will always stay with them...so at a point I was practically in tears for Arnav as he reminded Khushi of all the beautiful moments they shared that can't be changed...and (please correct me if I'm wrong :s) I couldn't help but feel a little hopeful by the end of the story...Khushi might have hung up, but she couldn't deny what he said...and the shadows hadn't completely seeped in...but then again, my optimism might just be because if something like this happens in the show, I'll have heart attack on the spot :P

Awesome OS :)


Well, honestly, I was in a very funny mood when I wrote this...it was like...this whole thing just spilled out as soon as I remembered the song randomly!

And this hasnt been planned as a TwoShot or anything, so really its an open end. You can feel hopeful about Khushi's possible answer or you can just feel bad for Arnav and think he deserves it or that this was going to happen anyway because, honestly, when I was writing it and even right now, I dont know what I feel of the various options...

Thank You so much for such a wonderful and analytic comment. I wanted both of their stubborness to shine through because I think that is their biggest strength as well as their biggest drawback...so yeah, glad you got it through. :)


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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Loved it! That was awesome!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
God, I could feel my tears gather in the corner of my eye; very intense and it was beautifully written!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Beautiful!

Even in its sadness, it made me wish... I wish they showed the show this way...

There are such beautiful ways to show redemption, and you show it, each time, different situations, different OS, different FF...

Why oh why are you not directing this show!

Thank you!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
Loved the OS... all the things that arnav said to kushi was just so emotional and the ay u described it great job...





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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
WHAT WAS THAT! *SHATTERED WITH THE DEGREE OF FEELINGS YOU'VE POURED OUT INTO WORDS*
KEEP POSTED
ALL LOVE
xoxo
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
tht was one piece of brilliant work...👏
he poured his heart out... nd tht too with so much of pain n emotions... heart touching...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Even though he was wrong my heart went out to Arnav in this I felt his pain through each sentence!!!! Poor Arnav and poor kushi too :'(
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Posted: 13 years ago
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THIS! THIS is why i don't read your fics! You take my heart and smoosh it into little itty-bitty pieces; and expects me to go about my day as if i haven't just read the most heart breaking thing in the world. uggg i wana curl up into a ball and cry now.

Amazing stuff!

I'm sorry for not leaving a more intelligent,in-depth review but my emotions are all over the place currently.

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Posted: 13 years ago
okayy wait i'm confused now.. 😕 i don't really get what happened in the end?! was it happy or sad or just open ended and you left it for us to decide? did ASR conquer arnav or was it the other way around ?? pls tell me some1!

amazing OS, arnav's emotions and how he was narrating to khushi about wanting all the lost moments back had me glued to the lappy screen! and even though khushi was mostly silent there was something about that. pain i guess?

loved it! though i hope you continue it to a TS because i'm confused

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