prem preethi(hum saath saath hain) part 2

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Hey this is shwetha here. liked many of you in the forum i am a great fan of prem and preethi from the movie hum saath saath hain given life by salman khan and sonali bendre respectively.
i stumbled upon an ff written by mahwash17

Hum Saath Saath Hain: "Prem & Preeti" FF | 1729919
she inspired me to write on prem and preethi.. i dedicate my humble effort to her 😊



part 1

Prem sighed as his flight landed at the airport. He had been to London for a business meeting. they had plans of extending their business to other countries . they decided to start up with London as the knew about the business potential that the city possessed. Prem had lot many contacts in London since he had studied there. He had successfully negotiated with Elsar group and the joint venture was underway. They were really happy about the progress that was being made. Vivek had allotted prem this responsibility as he fully trusted his capabilities and Prem being the loving brother din't leave a stone unturned. He worked to the best of his abilities, nowadays he was seen working on his laptop or reading a file' he had bee soo busy the last few weeks that he wasn't able to give much time to preethi. But she never complained as she knew how important this project was to prem. She stood by him and supported him, she was very understanding . prem always considered him to be lucky to get a wife like preethi.

Last few days he was soo busy that he couldn't even speak to her. He called home during day time while she was at the hospital. Once when she called him, he was about to attend a meeting and had to hang up with a quick "miss u" .

He had some peace at the moment as the plan was made and the decisions were taken and the rest of the work will be done by Elsar company. he could monitor the work and discuss the rest of the things online.

He had not informed anyone about his early arrival. He was scheduled to arrive day after but he wanted to come home and spend some time wit preethi so he took earlier tickets . he wanted to surprise her.

he took a taxi. It was 7 when he reached home. He was ushered in by a surprised ramkishen and mamta. They were sitting in the main hall after their evening pooja.

He took their blessings and sat down next to them mamta lovingly ruffled his har. She had missed him soo much. He was her darling. Prem shared a special bond with his mother. ramkishen asked him about the project and prem briefed him about the decisions taken at the meeting. sadhna and sapna came wit tea and snacks. Prem smiled and thanked them. they were soon joined by vivek and vinod. Prem hugged both of them and they sat chatting about the project.

Prems eyes were searching for someone else,, this was noticed by vinod he cleared his throat . ugghm.

VINOD: waise,prem bhaiya somebody is being missed right?

Prem gave a week smile

Sapna joined in'

Prem bhaiyaa you will have to wait until she gets back home. please have patience.

They all laughed. Prem looked embarrassed.

Mamta shushed them and ask them to leave Prem alone. She asked him to freshen up ..

Vinod helped prem in take his bag upstairs. He teased him on the way and prem had to finally chase him out of his room. He took a hot shower and wore his favourite white kurta and pajama. he was thinking about preethi when sadhna came in.

He noticed her only when she called out to him.. she asked him to come down for dinner. He stopped her and asked her about preethi. She told him that she gets back late from the hospital.

He went down for dinner and ate with his family, but his heart was somewhere else.. he yearned to get a glimpse o f her and to hold her close. He went back to his room and started reading a book. But he couldn't concentrate as his mind wandered about..

He patiently sat waiting on the sofa next to the window from where e could see the driveway and the road. After sometime he spotted her blue car. He had gifted it to her on her last birthday. He waited with bated breath in the room.

Preethi was very tired. She was spending more time at the hospital because at home she missed prem a loot. Its been days since they both talked properly. She knew he was busy with the upcoming project and remained silent .

She got out of the car and took small steps towards the house. she looked tired, she dint find anyone in the living room, she was greeted by rama aunty their trusted servant. She told her that her food was kept upstairs in her room. She thanked her and went upstairs. She could hear the tv running in Vinod's room. She quietly went to her room. It was dark but she did not switch on the lights. She closed the door and kept her bag on the side table and went to the window and watched the night sky filed with stars. She was soo lost in the sight that she dint notice two hands wrap around her waist.

She was startled and was about to scream when he kissed her cheeks' preethi's heart skipped beat. She understood his touch. She said "Prem " and turned to face him, prem smiled at her he noticed an unusual glow on her face he said she was beautiful . She was soo happy to see him.. she hugged him like he was her teddy. Silent tears escaped her eyes. Prem cupped her face and kissed her forehead. He felt sorry for leaving her alone, he held her close. They broke the hug after sometime and stood near the window watching the sky. Prem held her waist from behind and she was leaning onto him. Prem kissed her throat and the exposed skin on her shoulders. Preethi closed her eyes at the sudden touch. He lightly kissed her hands.. preethi had her eyes closed. He turned her to face him, he kissed her cheeks, her cheeks turned red at this. Prem couldn't stop admiring her and he pulled her close.. preethi rested her head on his chest. His kurta buttons were undone. She placed a gentle kiss on his chest . a soft moan escaped from prems lips.. he lifted her up and took her to bed. He had missed her like anything and he wanted to give her all the happiness now.



please ignore the mistakes

please post ur comments.. that l help me improve 😊





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Posted: 13 years ago
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I liked prem and preeti a lot in the movie... it was so nice to read an os bout them so many days later :)
A very cute os :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww.. First of all thank you so much for the sweet and kind words! I'm just really happy that I could inspire you.. šŸ˜³šŸ‘šŸ¼
And I absolutely loved the beginning! I so cannot wait to read more! You have to update soon, because I'm sure everyone is waiting eagerly to read! 😊

Oh and I absolutely looove the siggy you have made of them! Totally cute! 😳

Keep up the good work! - oh update soon! šŸ¤—
Edited by mahwash17 - 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahwash17

Awww.. First of all thank you so much for the sweet and kind words! I'm just really happy that I could inspire you.. šŸ˜³šŸ‘šŸ¼
And I absolutely loved the beginning! I so cannot wait to read more! You have to update soon, because I'm sure everyone is waiting eagerly to read! 😊

Oh and I absolutely looove the siggy you have made of them! Totally cute! 😳

Keep up the good work! - oh update soon! šŸ¤—


yeah sure.. i will post it by tmroe😊
thnx for ur support 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: -madhvi-

I liked prem and preeti a lot in the movie... it was so nice to read an os bout them so many days later :)
A very cute os :)


thnx a ton for reading it and commenting😊
keep supporting
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Posted: 13 years ago
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thnku 😊
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Prem and preethi were sleeping snuggled close to each other. Preethi rested her head on his hand and their fingers were entwined together. they looked happy and content. Prem was disturbed by the sunlight seeping into the room . He rubbed his eyes and looked at preethi who was sleeping peacefully next to him. He liked to watch her while she slept. She looked happy and content. Prem carefully took out his hand from under her head. He placed a small kiss on her forehead. Preethi opened her eyes sensing his touch.. he smiled at her.. "good morning".

Preethi: good morning prem.. why are you up so early??

Prem: early?? Its already 7.30

Prethi: what?? She got up in one swift motion . she was always up on time but don't know what happened today. She felt really tired.

Prem : preethi give me a morning kiss na.. I missed it while I was away from you.

Preethi smiled at this and gave him a small peck on his left cheek

Preethi got up from bed.. but sat back as she felt light headed.. prem who was searching for his slipper dint notice this.. preethi got up again and she managed to take few steps when she felt dizzy again.. she held her head and was about to call out ..p..rem but she fainted befor she could complete

Prem rushed towards her and held her in time. He placed her on the bed and immediately sprinkled some water on her face. She opened her eyes slowly

Prem: what happned to u?? are u allright?

Prems face was really tense

Preethi: prem im alright just little tired. Relax

Prem heaved a sigh of relief he was really concerned for her. And felt bad for neglecting her due to his work. She would not have eaten properly and the double shifts at the hospital had taken a toll on her health. He sat next to her and ruffled her hair and held her hands until she slept.

He took a shower and went downstairs for pooja.

Mamta: good morning prem

Prem: good morning mummy

Mamta noticed his tensed face. And asked him what was bothering him

Prem told her that preethi wasn't well and was having weakness.

Mamta comforted him and patted his cheeks.." she will be allrite pem, she's not been eating properly and was doing extra work might be tired due to that.. its ok some rest will do her good. I will send breakfast upstairs for u both..

Prem went upstairs and saw that preethi had woken up. he helped her to the bathroom.. made her sit on the tub and gave her her brush and the toothpaste. He went outside to give her some space and waited outside close to the door incase she needed help.

He also took out her clothes and gave it to her when she asked for it. She came out fresh and looked much better.

Prem helped her put her mangalsutra and sindoor. She told him she felt much better and wanted to go down for breakfast. He agreed and they both went down . he supported her while going down the stairs.

They joined the rest of their family.

All of them were concerned and asked her how she felt. Preethi told them she was feeling a bit weak and light headed and that she if fine now. They had their morning breakfast chatting bout various topics n between. Mamta lovingly forced preethi to eat well. Which she obliged happily.

Vivek asked prem to take rest at home and join office after a few days

Vinod jumped in and said: kaamal hai vivek bhaiya, preethi bhabhi is having weakness and you are asking prem bhaiyaa to rest .

Vivek: vinod tu bhi na.. I asked prem to rest cause he just got back from his trip yesterday

Vinod: I know I know.. I was just joking

The men left for office shortly. Preethi went to the kitchen to help sapna and sadhna but they dint let her touch anything and asked her to take rest.

Preethi: please bhabhi,, maa, sapna,, please let me help you. L wash the dishes, I wont do any heavy work..

Mamta.. nahi beta.. you weak. U should take rest

But preethi dint budge so sapna came up with a plan and asked prem and preethi to look after the kids while they finished their chores.



hope u guys like it.. ignore the mistakes

please keep ur comments coming 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Another update :)... u hv managed to maintain the cuteness they shared :)
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I agree! Loved the update! 😊 Keep up the good work, and I cant wait to read more.. Keep the updates coming.. šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Aww my fav couple in the movie

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