swaron ff UNPREDICTABLE LIFE part 6 updated - Page 20

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Posted: 12 years ago
himani u forgot about dis!!update na please!! :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
whare iz next update himani 😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow amazing ff:-):-) plz pm me next time dear:-) loved it:-):-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesme update
plz pm me when u update nxt part dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank you so much guys😊...and a biiiggg sorry 😭😭 for updating this ff so late...actually got stuck wid some wrk and now wid exams...i hope you guyz understand my problem...
Thanks to everyone who liked and commented...i so wanted to reply to your comments individually ...but as m short of time ...thanking you all for your love and support...please do continue sending your love nd support ...😊😊

-Himani
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello frens…m sorry for updating this ff so late ….it's been ages I had updated this…hope you all remember this ff…

This update is dedicated to dost Nisha and Nehal…both wants me to update this before going off for exams…nishu nd nehu this is for you guys …I hope you like it

Recap:

Kr: (lost his control over him and yelled loudly at Sharon) what the hell…tumhe hilne ke liye kisne bola…..dont you know your wounds are deep….tumhe kuch chahiye to hume batao….sharon agar tumhe kuch ho jaata to??!!!

For the first time Sharon likes someone yelling at her with a right of being her own, whose anger doesn't made her anger in reaction for the first time, she was listening him very carefully as if she has done something wrong which can never be corrected, after a long lecture in one breathe Karan (Swayum) stops and seeing him that way a cute innocent smile appeared on her face which justified everything..

Nita stood dumbstruck there ...the way Karan reacted she never ever seen him like that...he used to be a stud...an exploit kid...careless creature...he never ever cared for someone...not even about his mom...but today...Nita saw a completely different Karan...who was so concerned for a person whom he hardly know...Nita liked the concern Karan shows for Sharon...

on the other hand Sharon's cool and calm reaction was also tough to digest...Nita couldn't believe...the Sharon Raiprakash tolerating someone tantrums...that too with smiling face...this was something really out of the way...Sharon the volcano herself, quietly listening someone's words...not just listening infect following them...Nita smiled to herself ...and was really amazed to be aware of this unknown side of her two best buddies..


Suddenly her cell start ringing, flashing her mom's caller id...

Ni's mom: nitu..Beta you have to come home right now...there is some paper's, that you have to sign..It's really important...so come soon ok.
Ni: but mom...How can I leave Sharon alone, she need someone here...
Karan signed her to leave, and will take care of Sharon...
...mom ok...Will be there in 20 mins...Bye.

Nita to Karan...

Ni: Karan are you sure you will be staying here..i mean you hate being in hospitals that's why...and moreover that it's a responsibility!!!
Kr: trust me Nita, I will take care of her...and you can ask her itself...ok..now get going...they would be waiting for you.

Nita left for home…Karan sat on the Chair near her bed….Sharon felt the same kind of attraction as she feel for Swayum…don't know why but her heart still believes that he is very close to her…

Sharon in her mind… "kyu aisa lagta hai ki tum yahi ho…bilkul mere pass….jaise haath badha ke chu sakti hu tumhe…kyu mera dil ab bhi tumhare zinda hone k signs deta hai …kyu aisa lagta hai ki tum muje dekh rahe ho….kash me us din tumhe bata paati ki ...ki…how much I love you…wo anger …wo tumhe insult karna…sab fake tha…hamesha se pyaar kiya tumhe …bs kabhi bata nai paayi…." Tear start flowing frm her big green orbs…unknown to her state of mind …

Karan lost in his Thoughts…. "ye kaisi majboori hai…itne paas hokar bhi unknowns ki tarah behave kar raha hu….it's so strange…life is really unpredictable….meri life me aise twists honge kabhi socha nai tha…jab laga ki mai tumhe paa sakunga …life ne muje khud se dur kar diya… ek aisi life ji raha hu, jo meri hai hi nahi…apni identity, family, friends, tum …sabko ko to kho chukka hu mai…. here I have everything but actual happiness is missing… m living a meaningless life…

Tear formed in his deep brown eyes…he closed eyes and try to control his emotions, which upsurge uncontrollably in his hear…its getting tough to get control over them with each passing minute …he was literally shivering and sweating at the same time….suddenly a knock at door brought them to reality…it was Mr. Malik's Asst.

Asst: Mr. Karan Dr. Malik called you.

Kr: hmm…ok...am coming…. (To Sharon) Sharon will be back soon…don't try to get up from bed…if you want anything just call me…ok!!!

In response Sharon just smiled and nodded. Karan went to Dr. Malik's cabin……Dr. going through a file with tensed expression clearly written on his face…he was swapping pages again and again…as if don't want to believe what written in it…

Kr: Hello uncle you called me?? Is everything ok!!

Doc: peeping trough file hemmm…oh Karan…come in boy….I want to talk to you…how's your friend now?

Kr: She's ok uncle…what's the matter why you look so tensed!!

Doc: hmm…look Karan…its good She is recovering…but you have to take extra care of her….she might get high fever at night…all are here to help her but she needs support...use kisi apne ki jarurat hai….aur wo support tum de sakte ho use…agar koi pareshani ki baat ho to call me ok…take care son..ab jao and be with her!!

Karan went back to ward…Soon he enters he Sharon struggling to get the glass of water…and was about to fall, Karan ran and held her before falling…. Karan looked staright into her eyes…

Kr: Sharon kabhi to meri baat maan liya karo….humesha apni man marzi karti ho….!!!

For the first time Sharon saw Swayum in Karan…his touch is so evident for her……his heartbeats were the same, which made her to get lost every time when she danced with him…his deep orbs which conveys thousands of emotion in one go….his concerned voice has the same effect as Swayum's…Karan help her to sit ……Karan looked at her…..she was lost and confused…..he lost in her innocence …. "Jub confuse hoti ho, bohut khubsurat lagti ho..."Sharon was shocked to hear this…

Kr: (Straightening his face) I mean..itni confuse kyu dikh rahi ho? Kuch chahiye!!!

Sharon just staring at him…her eyes filled with tears…she hugged him and cried her heart out…Swayum too hugged her…and try to console her….after some time Sharon stop crying…

Sh: Am sorry…your statement made me remember someone very close to my heart...soi couldn't control my emotion ….am really sorry…. I don't want to make you uncomfortable!!!

Kr: hey please don't be…if you don't mind may I know who is the lucky person?

Sh: lucky person (lost in herself)….kya batau ki lucky kaun tha…still remember the first time I saw him near a bus stop….

Four kids running after a tall, lean, cute guy….the guy holding some chocolates ….running for his life….and the kids were not in mood to leave him…he was jumping …keeping his hand in air and four of them following him, to grab chocolates from him…..he was jumping through benches…..Running around…..Teasing them…..when all four kids tired and stop chasing him…..he came close to them and said flashing his angelic smile….."kyu haar gaye…" and gave chocolates to them. His smile was so simple yet so attractive…a cute face with a perfect smile….so pure and so real…..his smile conveys his heart…so hypnotic one can forget whole world before his smile….suddenly bus came…kids grab chocolates from him…kissed him one by one …and ran into bus…..he smilingly bid bye to them….crossed the road and get lost in the crowd.


thats it guyz...i hope you like it...do tell me hws this...bad...very...or worst!!!

do post your comments...and hit like tab if you like it...will try to update frequently this ff.


regards himani

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Posted: 12 years ago
res for suki
unres!!


Himani yaar, kya mast likka hai tune just out of the world⭐️ Aww swayam loves sharon still, i know he would be having a valid reason for deserting sharon, but still seeing them poles apart is something i dont like, chalo i trust you and your would bring a beautiful milan of swaRon warna Grrr😆. The hospital scene of Swaron made me nostalgic thinking of the sweet moments between swaron after sneha left the show.😳😳 It is a big wow for you👏👏 I am so glad that the doc felt that that karan is close to sharon than anyone else😉 well eagerly waiting for the next update, i love you sooo much for such a charming update.
Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res for sur

Ures 😊

Himani 🤗
Finally you updated this one!! 😃
Poor swayam and sharon..they can't express each other's feelings infront of each other..!
and sharon's hug!!!! awww..!! 😳
i just wished ki wo swayam ko sab kuch bta de!! but..its okayy! 😊
and now she's telling abt the lucky person who is sitting beside her...!!
aweesome!! ⭐️
Update soon!!

Edited by OceanicRockStar - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Swthrt🤗

finally we got an update for this Amazing FF full of twists and turns...WOW...just wow...the way u showed Swayam's (in disguise of Karan) pain...he loves her...the love of his life is in front of him...but he is bound by his promise...awww..poor soul...his pain...his love..his concern...was evident in his eyes...his gestures..his words...

Loved Nita's take on this...karan the stud and sharon the diva...she saw them in different light...they were different people...

Sharon's pain..her love...her reaction...lovelyy..touching...

"kyu aisa lagta hai ki tum yahi ho…bilkul mere pass….jaise haath badha ke chu sakti hu tumhe…kyu mera dil ab bhi tumhare zinda hone k signs deta hai …kyu aisa lagta hai ki tum muje dekh rahe ho….kash me us din tumhe bata paati ki ...ki…how much I love you…wo anger …wo tumhe insult karna…sab fake tha…hamesha se pyaar kiya tumhe …bs kabhi bata nai paayi…."

Awww..m loving these two...she couldn't tell him that time...now he is unable to reciprocate...due to circumstances...

"Jub confuse hoti ho, bohut khubsurat lagti ho..."Wow ...so swayamish line...her reaction..the hug..magical...loved the flashback...

finally she will tell him about her love for swayam...some hope...loved this chapter...looking forward to next chapter eagerly...plz plz dont take 2 months this time😊😳😛...u know i luv u & ur writing ❤️
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
perfect update
waiting to read further

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