Arshi FF~Vines With Thorns~ Thread 1

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Hira

@hira_arnie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#921

wow amezing yar i just read ur story in one go
i really like it
wonderfull and unique concept
thankz for the Link...

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603840

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Posted: 12 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
meee

hello there😉

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Addie07

@Addie07

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#923

i liked the start.. the prologue looked integral to ur story even though it left only mystery behind.. the first chappie is no different.. it tells a lot and yet a mystery.. u introduced Khushi here .. her chirpy nature and the way she bonds with her dog-- the affection laced with simplicity is so beautifully shown.. loved it. then you introduced arnav's character but still the mystery stays about khushi's past and why buaji is so determined to hide her from marriage.. i felt a here that aman has a thing for khushi-- couldnt be sure..

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okay so far i thought i'd give u update of each chappie but i go so lost in the story and i didnt know when i reached to the end of this thread..

well loved how arhi relationship blossomed.. loved the sparks of jealousy when aman comes in the picture.. loved raja and also loved madhu devyani khushi relationship...

u have written this story beautifully girl

okay meet u on the next thread

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Shree Nanda

@Mrs_Darcy_Shree

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#924

i'm res-ing

will read soon buddy😉

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603840

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Posted: 12 years ago

#925

Originally posted by: Shree.Nanda
i'm res-ing
will read soon buddy😉

will be waiting😉

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sonu

@dasudisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#926

Lovely and interesting FF so far reach to 8 but can't wait to read the coming parts

you are really a good writer...keep up ur good work

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#927

I've just started reading this FF, done with two chapters and it's got me hooked! It's really nice, you have a very gentle way with words but it also manages to keep your attention..Great work! Will post again in intervals..

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Till ch 4: Oh my. I really didn't understand Khushi was mute all this while...Poor thing..That's why she finds such companionship in Raja..And oh, Arnav seems like a carbon copy of his Dada!

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#928

Wow wow wow.just read d 1st chapter. Loved how u have juggled btwn 2 diff eras so beautifully.u r super descriptive.loved it, khushi n her dear raja..!

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meet.me

@meet.me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#929

read it for the first time...its really awesome..😃

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Anjali

@acklesmanic

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Posted: 12 years ago

#930

Just finished with d 5th chap.loved it so far.d more i read abt muskaan i see a lot of similarities btn her n khushi.n u r so ryt abt d sympathy thing every1 deserves a shot at a happy life. Loads of luv. Anjali. <3

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