Mayur FF - It so happened #2...Part 49 Page 47

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

kiran_rati

@kiran_rati

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#261

vowww amazing update

u r a very beautiful writer

amazing lines

each word containing their feeling

u r the best dear👏

Quote

Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#262

wow it was fabulous updateee
aweeesome

keep it up

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#263

Brilliant part!!

Please continue soon! would love to read the ending and I hope you would continue writing with a new story:)

Quote

sehrish

@sizzysehrish

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#264

amzing updates

loved ur whole ff

cont soon

thnx for pm

Quote

Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#265

awww... dat ws really cute payal!
*tight hugs 2 u 4 writin such beautiful update*🤗

Quote

Passion_17

@Passion_17

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#266

it was such a BEAUTIFUL update😳i luvd every bit of it...nuur's confession...her caring nature...everything was awesum...bt wat makes me sad is dat dis was d second last update i want a new ff soon...😛thanx 4 such a long n beautiful update...continue soon😃

Quote

manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#267

lovely update

jst luved mayur sweet-sweet moment

Quote

Aysha Saxena

@aysha_mayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#268

First of all Sorry Pallu for being soo irregular with my comments😛...All thanks to my exams and studies that have made me eid ka chand here...But Mind It!!...I read all the parts...so no complaints ok!!!

😳😆

So here I m..back with my vishesh tippani...I know I know you like it...😆😆

That was BEAUTIFUL Pallu...really beautiful.👏👏..Actually the last part made me a little senti while reading it...brought soo many memories back...😆😆

Finally they have actually started feeling the feeling of togetherness...of being together in love...showing the tender care to each other which each of them desire to have

The first part where Mayank loves being taken care of by Nupur...I loved it...❤️

and the last part was amazing...silence..closeness...passion...and a feeling called love...you potrayed them soo well...just small gestures and words are enogh to convey everything to each other...I loved it absolutely..besides being romantic...it had such a lovely essence of love in it❤️

and the final lines you wrote-----Today, they had learnt how their feelings could talk so conveniently with each other. And the best part was that everytime it seemed like a start, a new start with the other. A start for a foreseen happy life which was so looked-forward to. They didn't even know exactly when they fell in love…may be from the start, may be just a few days back…may be just now…

No words❤️...just brilliant❤️❤️

Quote

Ritu

@cuteritz

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#269

Hey when are you updating ???

Quote

Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: aysha_mayur
First of all Sorry Pallu for being soo irregular with my comments😛...All thanks to my exams and studies that have made me eid ka chand here...But Mind It!!...I read all the parts...so no complaints ok!!!
😳😆

So here I m..back with my vishesh tippani...I know I know you like it...😆😆

That was BEAUTIFUL Pallu...really beautiful.👏👏..Actually the last part made me a little senti while reading it...brought soo many memories back...😆😆

Finally they have actually started feeling the feeling of togetherness...of being together in love...showing the tender care to each other which each of them desire to have

The first part where Mayank loves being taken care of by Nupur...I loved it...❤️

and the last part was amazing...silence..closeness...passion...and a feeling called love...you potrayed them soo well...just small gestures and words are enogh to convey everything to each other...I loved it absolutely..besides being romantic...it had such a lovely essence of love in it❤️

and the final lines you wrote-----Today, they had learnt how their feelings could talk so conveniently with each other. And the best part was that everytime it seemed like a start, a new start with the other. A start for a foreseen happy life which was so looked-forward to. They didn't even know exactly when they fell in love'may be from the start, may be just a few days back'may be just now'

No words❤️...just brilliant❤️❤️