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Posted: 13 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: saima4744

can u send m pm pls pls.


i sent you buddy request! buddy me to get pm's 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52
Nicee promo.. waiting for the episode I mean ur update.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#53
Wow Priya!!!! It was just too amazing!!!! I loved the prank call a lot!!! Update me soon!!!! Sorry that I cannot write a lot about how I feel this time as I am busy with my school work!!! When I saw it was your PM, I just wanted to read it admist the hectic!!! Thank you so much for the second part...it made my heart feel light!!!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Sumuki

Wow Priya!!!! It was just too amazing!!!! I loved the prank call a lot!!! Update me soon!!!! Sorry that I cannot write a lot about how I feel this time as I am busy with my school work!!! When I saw it was your PM, I just wanted to read it admist the hectic!!! Thank you so much for the second part...it made my heart feel light!!!😃



aww sumuki.. thanks for reading and liking it.. m sure the coming up parts will be more good..
🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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priya u just rock with your words!!1 thats all i got to tell!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
it was awesome and khushi's prank was awesome
caliing arnav uncle
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Posted: 13 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: vrindagupta

it was awesome and khushi's prank was awesome

caliing arnav uncle


😆 haha i actually did this prank before :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
hello!!
here m back with my part 3
i really over-whelmed by all your responses..
i love all of you

firstly i would like to apologise for posting the part lately.
and the reason is the twist i wrote in my ss few days back is used in yesterday's episode and that is "the arnav revealing kushi's truth to anjili"
so i had to write something new again.

and coming to the good news!!

my kushi convering her mouth with dupatta and talking came true 😆
the only difference is kushi spoke with naniji and payal instead of arnav in today's episode scene

i hope you all will understand me..
and i promise the next part will be dhamakedaar twist for all of you.. and yes! i'll post it soon. i already done with half of it.. will post it mostly tommorow before 4. 🤗

here comes my part 3

Love is always patient and kind; it is never jealous; love is never boastful or conceited; it is never rude or selfish; it does not take offense, and is not resentful. Love takes no pleasure in other people's sins but delights in the truth; it is always ready to excuse, to trust, to hope, and to endure whatever comes.

Love does not come to an end.

--I Corinthians 13: 4-8
Jerusalem Bible

The excuse

Part 3

After kushi left RM;

Nani, nk and payalcome back to the living room and sit down..

Silence engulfed between all of them..

Nani sees payal who was totally upset and crying

Nani goes and sits beside payal and consoles her

Nani:payal bitiya! Trust me everything will be okay soon. Don't worry.

Nk:haan payalji! Don't cry.. please don't sob sob..

How can you foget our plan payal di *winking his eyes and shouting on top of his voice in excitement*

At once payal and nani respond to nk response with a "shhh"

Nk:okay okay!! Sorry pathi hogaya..

Payal and nani again together: palthi nahin galthi

Nk:yeah'. Yeah! Sorry.. palthi,kalthi aur galthi.. I get confused you know.. I meant "mistake"

*biting his tongue*

All three laugh together..

Nani:nk bitwa and payal bitiya' both of you come to my room after having dinner tonight!

I have to talk something very important with you..

Nk and payal nod there head in a positive response like small kids

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Here on the side! As soon as kushi leaves rm.. arnav goes inside and lock himself in room.

He recollects each and every moment he spent with kushi. Their first meeting at sheeshmahal and their journey from lucknow to delhi, from delhi to office, from office to rm, from rm to gh back to lucknow now.

He finds hard to digest the truth that kushi left him forever and ever.

He blames himself for everything he did with kushi.. he feels that he is responsible for whatever happened with him today and whatever happened before between him and kushi.

Then suddenly he gets a wrong text *the one I mentioned in my previous part.. kushi texts him from another no.*

He ignores it and gets into deep thoughts of kushi..

After sometime,

Arnav gets call from aman

Arnav:haan! Aman. What's the matter?

Arnan:sir! The UK clients are arriving to the office with an hour.

Arnav:aman! Cancel the meeting *in a low dull firm voice*

Aman: sir but this is a 5000crore deal. You have waited for an year to sing this deal up and you're the one who fixed this day for the meeting. We already took huge amount of advance from them.we can't cancel the meeting now sir. Our company will go in huge loss if we do so.

Arnav: I don't care aman. Do whatever I tell you to do. Jus..tt just cancel the meeting right now.

Aman: sir! B..uu.t

Arnav hangs the phone up before aman could complete his dialogue and throws the cell in some corner of the room..

Arnav goes and stands infront of the mirror in his room. He involuntarily slips into deeps thoughts of kushi and gets into a dream

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Dream:

Arnav finds himself in a white tuxedo.

The room is decorated with red roses and white candels..kushi suddenly opens the door.. she looked adorable and stunning in a white plain saree with a red chamki and stone studded border and loose hair.

Arnav kept staring at the image of kushi in mirror.. he moves closer to the mirror and exceeds his hand to touch her and suddenly the image disappears..

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Arnav looks around the room and pool side.

Goes back to mirror to get a small sight of his lioness image but the reality slaps him hard on his face..

He shouts : kushiii.. ku.ku.. uu.. kushiii' where are you dammit

*till his voice gets soar*

He hits his hand hard against the mirror and the mirror breaks leaving a dark deep scar on his hand.. tears run down his twinkling eyes..

He goes to the pool side and collapses on the same place where kushi cried after the marriage..

He cries till his tears get dried.

The loneliness hugs him tight and the lion forgets his roar.

Payal and nk assemble in naniji's room as decided in the morning.

Nk:hello naniji! We're here.

Naniji:nk bitwa, payal bitwa come inside and sit beside me.

Both of them go and sit beside naniji.

Payal:naniji! What do you think anjili dii decided?

Naniji: even m thinking of the same thing payal bitiya.. this is the reason why I called you both here.

I didn't get any response from anjili bitiya till now.

Nk stares with glued yes at both payal and nani concerntrating on what they are talking.

Payal: naniji! Shall I go and findout from anjili dii?

Naniji: haa.aa

*before naniji could complete her dialogue "haan" nk cuts her in between*

Nk:nooo.. no no naniji.. I'll go to anjili dii.. mein unhe kinchtha hoon

Nani and payal again laugh out loud and correct him "kinctha nahin poonchtha hoon"

Nk bites his tounge..

Nk correcting his dialogue: i mean I'll go and ask

Before nk prepares himself and ready to leave the room. Someone knock at the room.

Nk opens the door and stays stunned on the spot.

Payal and nani stand up and look at nk's weird statue avatar.

Payal:kya hua nanheji?

Suddenly anjili enters the room and stands infront of naniji.

Anjali: *in herfirm voice* naniji! i came to decision about what even you said me.

Nk, payal and naniji stay shocked on the spot with their eyes wide open.

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precap: what happened btw payal,naniji and anjili? to whom did anjili called and what is anjili's decision.

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edited: this is the parallel story! in my previous part we saw what happened with kushi.. so here i wrote about what happened in rm after she left. 😛

Edited by priyalovebarun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
okk curious 2 noe wat is anjali talkin abt...nyc one
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sashhh33

okk curious 2 noe wat is anjali talkin abt...nyc one


sasshHh!!!!!!!!!! thanks alot..
you're first again. and yes. i'll mostly post the next part of anjali;s secret tmrw morning or mostly before 4 😛

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