Dil Se Dil Thak on RajeevAamna..Chk pg 150 Imp.. - Page 5

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey fakhra no sorry... 😃 me happy that u liked the part....... 😊 i'll try & continue soon.... 😊 😛 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: beauty_queen

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Continueeeee Soooooon......!!!
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iman dear mujhe khushi hain ki tumhe yeh first part achcha laga...😊😛😃 dear tum bilkul fikhar mat karo raj khushi alag hain tho kya hua.... un dono ko tho milna hi hain...😉 i'll surely continue soon.......😊😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
#43

Hello guys…
Aap sab kaise hain ?? I think aap sab bohat achche honge main bhi bohat achchi hoon aur woh isliye kyunke maine Rajeev aur Aamna ko Deal Ya No Deal mein ek saath dekha.. ab thak main ussi khayalo ki duniyaan mein saathwe asmaan par ud rahi hoon… tho guys aap log mujhe zaroor batayiye ga ki aapko
" JUST FRIEND'S RAJEEV AUR AAMNA KA KHEL KAISE LAGA"……….hehe….. lol…………
guys chaliye ab main apni kahani ke saath aage badthi hoon…


Recap :- raj aur khushi alag rehthe hain.. raj ka pyaar tanya hain … raj ke dadaji I mean bouji hospital mein hothe hain is wajah se raj khushi se kehtha hain ki kuch dino ke liye unhe bouji ke saamne pati patni ka natak karna padega….is baat se veer bohat ghussa hotha hain aur dusari taraf tanya raj ko khushi ke khilaaf karne ki koshish kar rahi hain…..

" DIL SE DIL THAK – PART 2 "……

angad kripa , anjali kavya aur anurag perna hall mein baite hue hain… { guys angad kripa , anurag perna & kavya anjali are already married }
Woh log sab pareshaan baite hue hain jab enter kartha hain woh sab raj ko dekhthe hain.. usse dekhthe hi angad poochtha hain…
Angad :- raj kahaan tha ab thak….
Raj {looks at him & says } :- bas aise hi pub mein tha….
Kavya :- achcha ab yeh bata khushi se baat ki kya tune ???
Raj { gives him a stare & also sees that all eyes are on him & he says } :- haan maine baat ki….
Angad :- tho kya kaha usne ??
raj :- patah nahi dekhna padega….
Kavya :- kya matlab dekhna padega ??
Raj :- matlab yeh ki usne ab thak koi jawaab nahi diya hain….
Angad :- jawaab nahi diya hain tho jawaab mango usse..usse jawaab tho dena hi padega ….
At this point of time kripa & anjali get irritated & anjali says :- kyun de woh jawaab ?? uski kya ghalthi hain ??
Sab anjali ke is baat pe hairani hothi hain… aur kavya kehtha hain :- you stay out of it anjali……
Ab kripa kehthi hain :- anjali sahi hi tho keh rahi hain.. woh kyun jawaab de….
Angad :- kripa……
Anjali :- kyun tum logo ko sach baat kahi tho ghalat lag gayi…. Khushi ke saath joh hua tumhare bhai is raj ke wajah se hua..{she points towards raj } uspe tarah tarah ke ilzaam lagaye gaye…….lekin aaj jab musibat aayi zaroorat aayi tho kiss hakh se yeh umeed karthe hain ki woh aapki madat kare……
Kripa :- ajeeb baat hain na raj… { she says scarcastically }
Kavya :- tum log humara saath dene ke bajay us khushi us ladki ka saath de rahe ho….
Now anurag & perna intervent & say :- bassssss bohat ho gaya…. Chup karo tum log…. tab se aap log joh maan mein aaye woh bake hi jaa rahe ho…..
At this time anjali's cell rings…
Anjali :- hello…
Veer :- hello anjali….
Anjali :- haan veer bol… { all look at anjali when they hear veer's name }
Veer :- anjali tum please kripa ko lekar yahaan aa jao…
Anjali :- veer sab theek tho hain na… khushi….
Veer:- haan anjali bas tum log aa jao.. mujhe tum logo se kuch baat karni hain….
Anjali :- theek hain hum aa rahein hain…….
Anjali puts the phone down & then tells to prerna:- jiji main aur kripa zara khushi se milkar aathe hain….
Prerna :- anjali …. khushi…{ she fumbles } woh theek tho hain na ??
Anjali:- haan jiji.. aap fikar mat kijiye aapko abhi bouji se milne hospital jana hain aap jayiye…. Hum khushi ko sambhal lenge…. Chalo kripa…
Kripa & anjali start walking out when kripa turns & says :- angad , kavya tum log ek baat sahi tarike se samaj lo khushi humare liye humari zindagi hain humari sabse achchi dost hain usse zyada zaroori humari zindagi mein kuch nahi….
Anjali :- yeh baatein tum kabhie mat bhoolna.. hum hamesha ussi ka saath denge chahe iske liye humme humare kissi bhi rishthe ke khilaaf hi kyun na jana pade….
Anjali & kripa leave leaving behind a shocked kavya & angad.. raj leaves the hall & goes to his room…
Anjali ,kripa reach home & they meet veer & they enquire about khushi..veer says that khushi is in her room & not opening the door … anjali & kripa try telling khushi to open the door but all in vain all they could hear is just khushi's cries….. then veer tells anjali & kripa that he would not allow khushi to go & meet bouji & act with raj…. Anjali , kripa wait for some more time to meet khushi but khushi does not open the door finally anjali , kripa go back home ……
Ghar pohanch kar they inform prerna that khushi is fine & just is a bit disturbed ….
Then ab zara nazar khushi ke kamre ke andar jaanke dekhthe hain…. khushi is just sitting by the window looking up to the sky & thinks :- main kal kya karoongi main nahi jaanthi main yeh bhi nahi jaanthi ki kya main kal raj ka saamna kar paugi jisne mujhe duniyaan bhar ke ghum diye hain.. par main itna zaroor chahthi hoon ki joh bhi ho achcha ho main joh karne jaa rahi hoon isse kissi ko takleef na pohanche….…
Wahaan raj apne kamre mein baita hua sochtha hain :- I hope kal khushi mera saath dena aa jaye… kaash…..
then the screen is divided into two…
one side khushi is sitting by the window & thinking about the next day's events…& the other side raj is just hoping that khushi will turn up the next day….. both very sad , angry , frustrated with the way life is taking them & not knowing now where life will take them further...…
agli subah hothi hain… raj ab bhi isi umeed main rehtha hain ki kahiin se khushi aa jaye aur woh khushi ke saath milkar hospital jaye aur bouji se mile.. woh kaafi dher thak khushi ka intezaar kartha hain aur phir hospital ke liye nikal tha hain kyunke ghar ke sabhi log hospital ke liye pehle se hi nikal gaye the..…
raj bouji se milne jaatha hain… bouji raj ko dekhkar bada khush hothe aur kehthe hain:- oye puttar tu aa gaya…aaja aajaa..
phir bouji dekhthe hain ki khushi raj ke saath nahi aayi hain tho woh kehthe hain :- par yeh kya puttar meri dost meri girl friend meri khushi kahaan hain…….usse nahii laya tu…
Raj yeh sawaal sunkar shocked ho jaatha hain aur bas bouji ko dekhtha rehtha hain……..
Bouji { interrupts his thoughts } :- are bolna na.. kahaan hain khushi….
Raj :- { fumbles , hesitates & then says } :- bouji woh woh
darasal khushi……..{he stops }
Bouji :- bol raj kahaan hain khushi….
Before anybody can answer peeche se awaaz aathi
hain :- bouji yahiin tho hoon main…….
{then we see khushi coming inside the room looking very simple but beautiful }
bouji ke chehre par khushi ko dekhthe hi muskaan aa jaathi hain…..
bouji :- khushi puttar tu kahaan thi ab thak.. main kabse tujhse milna chah raha tha…..
khushi walks over near bouji holds his hand & says :- yahiin tho thi bouji…
sab bas khushi ko dekh rahe hothe hain kyunke wahaan moujood kisi bhi shaks ko yeh yakeen nahi tha ki khushi aayegi…. Raj khushi ko hi dekhkhe jaa raha tha woh bhi ghehri nighahon se ghehri soch mein dhoob kar…
ab kuch dher baad wahaan nurse aake kehthi hain ki sab log yahaan nahi rukh sakthe sirf ek shaks rukh saktha hain patient ke saath……tab khushi kehthi hain ki woh wahiin rukhegi….. baki sab chale jaathe hain….
khushi bouji ke saath baat kar rahi hothi hain aur has rahi hothi hain….
tab bouji kehthe hain :- khushi puttar… tu theek hain na ???
khushi :- haan bouji kyun ?? main tho bilkul theek hoon…
bouji :- { points at her face & then says } teri is hasi mein mujhe khushi ki khushi nahi dikh rahi hain.. mujhe meri bachchi khushi tujh mein nahi dikh rahi hain tu kissi soch main jhakdi hui hain… koi problem hain tho bata mujhe ???
khushi :- nahi bouji aisa kuch nahi hain.. aap ab is bare mein sochna band kijiye aur aaram kijiye…..
bouji { looks at her still not convinced } :- achcha chal chod di woh baat lekin bata mujhe agar kissi din tum kisi takleef mein ho tho tum mujhe bataogi….???? {he questions }
khushi :- bouji main aapko nahi bataugi tho phir kissse bataugi after all aap mere bouji ke saath saath mere dost mere boy friend bhi tho ho na……
bouji :- are haan bhai woh tho hain….{he smiles & kashish smiles back…..}
yeh saari baatein raj kamre ke bahar rukhkar sun raha hotha hain aur phir wahaan se chala jaatha hain…
andar bouji aur khushi ki baatein chalthi hi rehthi hain…
raj corridor mein chalthe rehtha hain aur kai baatein uske zehan main athi rehthi hain :- bouji ne yeh kaha ki khushi ke chehre ki khushi aur hasi kahiin kho gayi hain…aisa unhone akhir kyun kaha… kahiin khushi ne tho bouji se aisa kuch nahi keh diya ki bouji ko shak ho gaya ho……. Oh God ab main karoon tho kya karoon…..{ he gets angry on khushi }
issi waqt khushi room se bahar aathi hain woh raj ko dekhthi hain joh usse badi ghusse se dekh raha hotha hain….raj holds khushi's arm tightly & drags her to the hospital terrace…
khushi :- raj kya kar rahe ho ?? mujhe dard ho raha hain raj…….{ she tries to free her arm but raj uska haath tab thak nahi chod tha jab thak woh log terrace par na pohanch jaathe…}
khushi :- raj chodo mujhe kya kar rahe ho ???
finally raj leaves her hand …khushi looks at him with disgust & then says :- yeh kya tarika hain raj ?? aur tum mujhe yahaan kyun le aaye ho…..
raj :- main tumhe yahaan is liye laya hoon kyunke main jaanna chahtha hoon akhir tum chahthi kya ho ???
khushi :- kya matlab hain tumhara ???
raj :- matlab bilkul saaf hain.. tum yahaan kyun aayi ho..kahiin tum mujhe wapas paane ke liye tho nahi aayi ho… { he taunts her } lekin agar tum is khayal se yeh sab kar rahi ho tho tumhara bad luck tum mera pyaar kabhi nahi ban sakthi … samjhi…….{ he catches her shoulder & shakes her }
khushi ko raj ki baato ko sunkar jhatka tho lagtha hain par she maintains her calm & composure & then says :- tho tumhari purani aadat ab thak nahi gayi tum aaj bhi har cheez ka sirf aur sirf ghalat matlab hi nikal the ho…. Tho Mr. Raj Garewal aap ne kya kaha main tumhe paane ke liye wapas aayi hoon.. tum is baat ko tho apne sapne mein bhi bhool jao ki main tumhare pass wapas aana chahugi.. kabhi nahi.. joh takleef tumne mujhe di hain main woh kabhi bula nahi sakthi…. Main maanthi hoon ek waqt tha jab main tumse sabse zyada , apno se zyada , khud se zyada tumse pyaar karne lagi thi beinthahaan pyaar karne lagi thi… lekin meri mati mari gayi thi { she hits her fore head & then continues } ki main tumse pyaar kar baiti… lekin joh tumne mere saath kiya uske baad tho ………{ she wants to say something when raj cuts her in between }
raj :- joh maine tumhare saath kiya.. kya kiya maine tumhare saath tumne mujhe dhoka diya tumne… tum hamare is rishthe ki tootne ki wajah ho…. Sirf tum { he points his finger towards her }
khushi :- dekho raj main tumse hamare rishthe ke bare mein koi baat nahi karna chahthi.. main yahaan sirf bouji ke liye aayi hoon… aur kissi ke liye nahi yeh baat tum hamesha ke liye yaad rakhna….
Raj starts to walk off when khushi calls out his
name & says :- aur haan raj…..
raj turns around & sees her…….
Khushi continues :- raj shayad hum dono ka rishtha toot gaya hain lekin humara beech ek aur rishtha hain &a mp;n bsp; { khushi places her hand on her stomach & then says} :- yeh rishtha… humara bachcha…..
Tab raj khushi ke pass aake kehtha hain :- bachcha.. humara bachcha {he laughs scarcastically} khushi main tumse kitni baar keh chukka hoon tum apne is bachche ko mera naam mat do…. Tum isse iske pita ka naam do….
Khushi :- rajjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj……………….. tumhe kya lagtha hain mujhe mere bachche ke liye tumhare naam ki zaroorat padegi yeh baat tum kabhi soch na bhi mat….samjhe tum……{ she catches his collar }
Raj :-{ he frees his collar & then coolly says } khushi tum ek kaam karo is bachche ko iske pita ka naam do isse tum mere naam se mat jhodo…. Main is bachche ko apna naam doonga is baat ka khayal bhi apne dimaak se nikaal do…..samjhi………Humara bachcha….{laughs again } jab humare beech koi rishtha hi nahi tha tho yeh humara bachcha kahaan se aa gaya khushi…… humara bachcha……
Raj yeh saari baatein keh kar wahaan se chala jaatha hain leaving behind a devastated khushi …. tears roll down from khushi's eyes as she sees raj walking away khushi ko raj ko jaathe hue dekhkar aisa lagtha hain jaise uski zindagi ki sabse keemthi cheez usse durr jaa rahi hain…. finally khushi breaks down she comes on her knees aur woh apne haath ko apne chehre par rakh kar rone lagthi hain….

Song in the background :-

" bheegi bheegi si hain raatein……
bhhegi bheegi yaadein…..
bheegi baaey baatein….
bheegi bheegi…….
aankhon main kaisi nami hain…..
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…..
sapno ka saaya…..
palko pe aaya…….
pal main hasaya……..
pal main rulaya
phir bhi yeah kaisi kami hain……
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…….
na janey koi………
kaisi hai yeah zindagani………
zindagaani…..
humari aadhori kahani………
na janey koi…….
kaisi hai yeah zindagani
humari aadhori kahani……..
aadhi aadhi jagi…….
aadhi aadhi soi………
aankein yeah teri…..
lagta hai roi……..
lekar ke naam hamra…….
aahaan a han aa han aa han…….
rootha rootha rab…….
choota choota sab……
toota toota dil……
terey bina ab…..
kaisey ho jeena gawara……
aahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han…
na janey koi……..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……
zindagaani……
humari aadhori kahani……….
na janey koi………..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani…….
Zindagaani…..
humari aadhori kahani……
bheegi bheegi si hain raatein…..
bhhegi bheegi yaadein……
bheegi bheegi baatein……….
bheegi bheegi……..
aankhon main kaisi nami hai………
ahaan a han aa han aa han ahaan a han aa han aa han….
na janey koi……..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……
zindagani……...
humari aadhori khani………
na janey koi……….
na janey koi………..
humari aadhori khani ………
na janey koi ………..
kaisi hai yeah zindagani……..
zindagaani…..
humari aadhori khani……..
naa naaa naaanaaaaaaaa………
yeah yeah yea yea…………
humari aadhori kahani……."

Khushi wahiin kuch dher rehkar apni zindagi ke guzre pal ke bare mein sochthi hain aur phir wahaan se chali jaathi hain……. when she goes down she sees that perna , anurag , kripa , angad , anjali , kavya & raj are standing….
Kripa , anjali khushi ko dekhthe hi uske pass aathe hain…
Anjali :- khushi tu kahaan thi…….
Kripa :- Hum kabse tujhe dhoond rahe hain…. aur tu tho yahaan se jaise gayab hi ho gayi…..
Khushi :- anjali , kripa main yahiin thi , bas aise hi kuch dher akeli rehna chahthi thi…..
Tab prerna kehthi hain :- anjali ,kripa tum khushi ko pantry leke jao.. main tum logo ko wahaan par milthi hoon……
Khushi :- nahi jiji mujhe bhook nahi hain….
Prerna :- khushi maine abhi abhi veer se baat ki hain usne kaha ki tum bina kuch khaye bina usse bataye ghar se nikli ho…..
Khushi :- nahi jiji.. ab nahi khana.. jab bhook lagegi tab kha loongi…. Abhi tho mujhe ghar jaana hain warna veer mujhe maar dalega patah nahi ki kya woh mujhse ghussa hain.. aur agar woh ghussa hain tho main gayi kaam se…….{ khushi starts to walk off when prerna holds her hand & stops her }
Prerna :- khushi tu din par din bohat zidii hothi jaa rahi hain.. tum ab chup chaap anjali aur kripa ke saath jaa aur kuch kha le phir tu ghar chali jana aur veer se baat kar lena…. Kyunke ab agar tu ghar bina kuch khaye jayegi tho veer mujhe daantega.. hain tho mera chota bhai par mujhe usse daant nahi sunna samjhi mujhe uski daant se darr lagtha hain….. {she says sweetly } kripa , anjali lekar jao isse…..
khushi :- theek hain jiji main jaa rahi hoon……
anjali , kripa & khushi leave to go to the pantry… kuch dher baad raj , angad & kavya also walk – in…. prerna aur anurag upar bouji ke kamre mein hothe hain…
unke aathe hi kripa , angad , kavya aur anjali isharo mein kuch baat karne lagthe hain yeh baat na raj aur na hi khushi observe karthe hain……
phir angad { comes near their table & says } :- girls can we join you ??? yahaan aur koi table khali nahi hain…
kripa :- sure angad…
anjali :- is mein poochne waali kaunsi baat hain..you can join us..
angad :- thanks…
angad peeche mudtha hain aur raj aur kavya ko awaaz detha hain…….
raj sees that angad un logo ko wahaan aane ko keh raha hain par woh jaana nahi chahtha tha kyunke wahaan khushi bhi thi.. par kavya drags raj along with him & takes him to the table……
angad :- guys humme yahhin baithna padega kyunke aur koi jagah khali nahi hain….
kavya agrees & sits while raj thinks for a second & then starts walking……
when angad calls him :- raj kahaan jaa rahe ho , kuch kha lo na……
raj :- nahi angad main baad mein kha loonga……
angad :- are nahi baba agar tu bina khaye upar chala gaya tho bouji humme nahi chod denge….. tho chal kha le…. Raj phir bhi angad ki baat nahi maantha jab kavya kehtha hain :- dekh raj tu nahi khayega tho hum bhi nahi khayenga… aur waise tujhe kya farak padtha hain mujhe aur angad ko bohat bhook lagi hain tho..….
raj :- theek hain… main baiththa hoon……….
then seating kuch aisi hothi hain ki khushi ke ek side par anjali aur dusari side par raj , raj ke dusare side par angad , angad ke pass kripa , kripa ke dusari taraf kavya aur kavya ke pass anjali……
sab kha rahe hothe hain jab anjali khushi ke arm par lage ghaav ko dekhthi hain aur khushi se poochthi
hain :- khushi yeh tujhe kya hua ?? {she asks pointing to the ghaav….}
khushi {looks at where anjali is pointing out & then she stares at raj with a hurt look in her eyes & says} :- woh tho bas aise hi lag gayi.. zyada chot nahi hain … {actually she got hurt when raj caught her arm & dragged her to the terrace }
anjali :- { get's hyper } tu kaise keh sakthi hain ghaav ghehra nahi hain… dekh kaisa nishaan pad gaya hain…
{ anjali touches the wound }
khushi :- ahh…kya kar rahi ho anjali….
Kripa :- dekh tujhe dard ho raha hain aur tu is baat ko itni lightly le rahi hain……
Khushi :- are tum dono ab bas bhi karo , yeh tho mamuli si chot hain… yeh chot tho us ghaav ke saamne kuch bhi nahi hain joh ghaav kuch logo ne hamesha ke liye dil pe lage diye hain…….aur joh kabhi mit nahi sakthe…..
is baat ke kehne par raj khushi ki taraf dekhtha hain aur dono ki aankhein milthi hain dono mein se ek bhi apni nazar nahi hata tha , un dono ki aankhein bina kahe hi hazaro dil ki baatein dil se dil thak pohanch cha rahi thi…
phir khushi apni nazrein hathakar kehthi hain :- achcha ab main chalthi hoon…….
Kripa :- lekin khushi… kuch dher tho hamare saath baito na……
Khushi { stands up from her chair & again says } :- nahi kripa….main ab chalthi hoon…veer ghar par mera intezaar kar raha hoga…..
Anjali :- achcha khushi tu jaa…. Tu apna……{ khushi stops her & says }
Khushi :- haan haan main apna khayal rakhugi , gaadi sambhal kar chalugi , ghar jaathe hi tum logo ko call karoongi…. Aur kuch……{ she says teasingly }
Anjali :- haan yaad rakh teri doctor ke saath appointment hain do din baad…..
Khushi :- haan haan mujhe yaad hain , aur agar main bhool gayi tho tu aur kripa kiss liye hain mujhe baad mein yaad dila dena…….ab main chalthi hoon , bye all of you…..kal milthe hain……..
Angad , kavya , anjali aur kripa khushi ko bye keh dethe hain par raj nahi kehtha… woh bas khushi ko dekhthe hi rehtha hain……khushi bar baar nazar bachakar raj ko phalat kar dekh rahi hothi hain… khushi then leaves… raj is still looking at the door from where khushi left.. uski aankhein yeh baat keh rahi thi ki woh nahi chahtha tha ki khushi jaye par woh usse rokh nahi paa raha tha….khushi kuch samaj na paayi aur chali gayi..… raj is still lost in his thoughts jab angad usse bulatha hain raj does not respond for 2 times & for the third time angad calls out his name a bit loudly :- rajjjjjj….
Raj apne soch se bahar nikal kar hairani se angad ki taraf dekhtha hain wondering why he called him aloud…
Angad :- { understands raj's question from his expression & says } tho main kya kartha tabse main tumhe do baar bhula chukka hoon aur tum ho ki jawaab hi nahi de rahe the isliye..….
Raj :- theek hain , ab batao kya hain ??
Kavya :- are raj tum woh sab chodo yeh angad tho aise hi…. aur humme batao tum kisske khyalo mein khoye hue the…. { he raises his eyebrow at him & asks in a teasing manner }
Raj :- aisa kuch nahi hain… achcha theek hain ab main chaltha hoon… bouji se kal subah aake miluga….
Raj bids good-bye & leaves the place….
Yahaan angad , kripa , anjali kavya baat karthe rehthe hain….
Angad :- tho guys tum sab jaanthe ho na humme kya karna hain ???
Kripa :- haan angad hum jaanthe hain ki humme kissi bhi keemat par raj aur khushi ke beech ki differences khatam karni hain…
Anjali :- aur unhe hamesha ke liye saath karna hain…..
Kavya :- aur aaj joh hum ne kiya usse yeh tho sabit ho gaya ki raj aur khushi ki zindagi ek dusare ke bina adhuri hain……
Anjali :- haan bilkul sahi…….
Kripa :- mujhe bas ek hi baat ki chintha hain ki agar un dono ko patah chal gaya ki hum kya plan kar rahe hain tho woh humme chodenge nahi……..
Angad :- kripa tum us baat ko chod do , jab unhe patah chalna hoga patah chal hi jayega hum chaar ko bas ek hi kaam par dhyaan dena hain ki hum un dono ko wapas kareeb kaise lekar aaye aur unke beech ki ghalat faimiyaan & duriyaan mitaye….
All say done aur phir they leave…
Ab zara dekhtha hain raj kahaan hain….. Raj drives his car & goes to the sunset point bridge… he get's down the car takes his champange & sits at the corner of the bridge near to the water…. He takes stones starts throwi ng them in the water , starts talking aloud :- khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii………… kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa …. Khushi… tum jaanthi ho main tumse kitna pyaar kartha hoon…. Haan main pyaar kartha hoon tumse kabhie keh nahi paya aur tumne mujhe dhoka diya kaash hum aaj bhi saath hothe kaash hum kabhie alag na hue hothe , kaash main tumhe apni dil ki halat pehle hi keh detha tho aaj yeh naubat nahi aathi…..khushiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii……….{ he throws a stone in the water with total force }….

Song in the background :-

" Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare………
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare……..
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
{ he thinks about khushi the time in the pantry jab woh dono sirf ek dusare ko dekh rahe hothe hain..}
Tujhe pata kya ke mere dil mein…….
Hain tere khaatir junoon kitna……….
Main apne baare mein rukh ke sochoon…….
Nahin hai ab to sakoon itna………
Jeeta hoon magar jeeta bhi nahin………
Marta hoon magar marta bhi nahin………
{he thinks about the time when he dragged khushi to the terrace }
Tere gham mein fanaa hone ke liye …….
Peeta hoon main zeher…….
{he opens the champagne bottle & drinks }
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar……
Daba hua tha jo mere seene ne tujhko dekha……….
Tho dard ubhra………
{he thinks when khushi entered in the hospital room }
Kisi bhi marhum se bhar na paaya…….
Teri judaai ka zakhm gehra………
Seene mein pyaar machalta hain……..
Aakhon se dard chalakta hain………
Saahil ki tarah kaate mujhko………
Chaahat ki har leher……….
{he thinks about the time in the pantry jab khushi is leaving & he wanted to stop her but could not & he was helpless…}
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar, ae bakhabar, ae bekhabar…….
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare…….
Ae bekhabar, ae bekhabar……..
Mera dil tere pyaar mein aahe bhare……..
Tujhe yaad kare fariyaad kare………
Kabhi tu bhi pyaar se dekh zara mere dil ko ek nazar…."

raj just has tears rolling down his eyes par raj unhe behne se rokhna chahtha hain woh apna har dard har zakhm apne andar him dhaba dena chahtha tha……….

chalo guys yahiin khatam hotha hain dil se dil thak part 2… ab I think aap sabko ek idea hi aa gaya hoga ki kyun raj aur khushi alag hue hain…. aur shayad aapko yeh bhi patah hoga ki khushi ki zindagi mein aur koi khushi nahi siwai uske aane wale bachche ke….
Ab agar aap jaanna chahthe hain ki angad , kripa , kavya aur anjali kya kamiyaab honge raj aur khushi ko ek karne mein ????? bouji ko jab sachayi ka patah chalega tho unka kya hoga ??? khushi ke bachche ka father kaun hain ?? woh raj hain ya phir koi aur ?? agar woh raj ka bachcha hain tho raj is baat se inkaar kyun kar raha hain ????? kya aaj bhi khushi raj ko chahthi hain ??? kya raj aur khushi kabhi mil payenge ?????? aur kai sawaalo ke jawaab jaanne ke liye padthe rahiye dil se dil thak…………

Plz post ur comments & compliments I'll be waiting for them………

Take care……..
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

love
Surya….
Edited by sun_423 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 a fab part. mein bhi kavya aur angad ki team main hoon kyunki mujhe bhi raj aur kushi ko ek saath dekna hai. love u jaan u r too gud.plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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jyothi dear thanks a ton for ur comments.. me will continue soon......😃 love u too........ 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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tooooo gooooooood Suriiii ... 👏 Yaar itnay achay ideas kahan se aatay hain ..!!! aur in Khushi aur Raj ko to milna ho ga mein bhi dekhti hoon kaisay nahin milte hehehehe 😆 ab jaldi se mil wado na intezaar nahin hota... 😆 😆 😆
Continueee Sooooooooooooon...!!
Iman
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Posted: 19 years ago
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iman dear bohat bohat shukriya...dekho jab aas pass tum jaise zabardast writers ho tho ideas tho aa hi jaathe hain.......... 😃 & u fikhar not chalo hum dono milkar kar dekhthe hain ki woh log kaise nahi milthe... milenge bohat jald hi milenge............ 😉 i'll surely try & continue as soon as possible.............. 😊 😃 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow...another gud part as we expected.
does raj wasin drunken state when he&khushi became one soooooooooooooooo he is suspecting khushi? only a guess. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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yyyy dear thanku soooooo much.........me feeling so happy............ 😳 waise a very good guess ab aage dekhthe hain kya hotha hain may be you are right but i can't say anything right now....??? 😉 me will try & continue soon........ 😃 😛 😊
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Hey!

It's interesting.... Pls... continue soon 👏
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