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Posted: 13 years ago
plz next part update kar de na...
Mujhe sab ke faces ke reaction jan na hai
specially rey ke..
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb
mindblowing
outstanding
kya bolu yaar
mere ko tere ff se pyaar hoga hu
tune jo nayi characters choose ki woh bohut masat hain
especially karan,he is soo cute
kria aur karan ko rey ke samne couple bana dena,rey ko ithna jala dena ki woh kria saath aise dubra karna se pehle1000 times soche
even if its sad ending i would be happy.
par please hum logo ko long udates dena ok
jaldi update karna

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome story.cont soon n pm me.i sincerely hope d louisans suffer n suffer n suffer n beg 4r forgiveness 2 kria on der knees n even den she shuld take aons to forgive after dey redeem demselves over n over.

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Posted: 13 years ago
ok guys so im back wid d update..hmm u guys were gussa on me cux maine cliff hanger de diya tha...😆...so here u go wid d update..************************************************************************************** PART 3Girl: fine im going..
Girl 2: Kria w8 mai bhi aarahi hu tumhare saath..
Kria: theek hai vishaka ab chal bhi..
Kria and vishaka were muving towards kirti slowly (kirti and louians backs were facing Kria and Vish) Vishakla noticed dat louians are here she poked kria..
Vish: kria aagaye wo log..
Kria turns her head to see dem she went numb..she tried to control her self vishaka patted her back..
Vishaka: kria control k tum un sab ke liya nahi rone wali..
Kria nods her head..karan notices kria and vishaka .. karan kuch kar miss interupter aur vish ko mam se aaj bachana he padega..
Kirti: wo ab tak nahi aayi..dis is it aaj mai unhe principle ke paas leke jaongi..
Karan went towards kria and hugged her tightly..kria was shocked wid dis action of him not only kria evry one ..
Karan: kria mam se bolna dat tum sports day kay preparations me phas gayi thi..!
Kria: mai kaise bolungi..
Karan : shut up and do as i say..
he left kria..Lwariance were shocked dat karan hugged kria as if she is his gf..louians were shocked to see kria der (note vish is hiding behind d pillar cux she dont want to listen kirti mams lecture..)
Kria: sry mam..
Louians dint know how to react it was more shocking den b4 it was totally unexpected..rey's face went pale and body went numb he cant beleive what just happened kria ignored dem she dint even looked at dem once...rey kept on staring her she was changed her hairs were now long,silky and straight she loosly plaited her hairs and was wearing black skinny jeans wid checked aqua and black shirt..taani forgot to blink her eyes she was scared if kria will take rey away from her she turned to look rey's face he was just staring at kria..lawriance peeped to see louians face and chuckled...
Kirti: kria its been 20 min since im here kahan thi tum..
Kria: Mam sry wo..wo..mai..
Kirti: wo .. wo mai kya hai ye kria..? maine tumse e expect nahi kia tha..
Kria was staring at d floor in embaressment..
Vishaka gained courage and came out..
Vishaka: MAM..!

Louians looked whu is der except rey he was still lost in kria..dis was enuf to blow louians head der were shocked + surprised to see Vishaka ..
Kirti: Vishak kahan thi aap..?
Vishaka: Mam mai ..wo actually hum haan mam actually we were busy wid sports day preparations..
B4 Kirti could say anything her cell started ringing..
Kirit: hello ..? yes, sir..yea im cuming..
Kirto: ok..guys meet louians..louians meet Kria and Vishaka hamare dance team ke best dancrs and hamare irresponsible CS,ACS..
Kirti leaves from atruim..
Lwariance started laughing on Kria..
Kria: dat was not funny at all..
Vishaka:dude tu kaise hai..mam mai wo wo mam..haha kuch seekh mujhse..
Geet: chal chodo kria meet st.louis ki dance team se..*chuckle*
Kria: hi... *in a low voice..*
no one replied to her..
Vishaka: hey guys wasup..? hun...
Bharat was really happy to see vishaka and kria ..
Maan: btw karan tune kria ko hug kyu kia..?
Karan: hug koi kaam ka bhi nahi aaya..
rey remebers d hug and gives a dirty look to him..
Khushi: wht do u mean kaam nahi aaya..?
Kria: stop it guys..wo hug sirf isne mujhe bachane ke liya kia tha..
Vishaka: hug se log bach sakte hai not bad dude waise mujhe laga dat i saved u from Kirti mam..
Evry one starts laughing except kria and louians..
Khushi: ok guys come on koi inhe college to dikhaye hamara..!
Vishaka: dude mai dikha deti hu..!
Vishal: Vish mai chal raha hu tere saath..
Karan: ok kool so kria lets practice..
Kria: kya..?
Pia: ur cuming wid us babes sprts day hai yaad hai..and waise bhi kal sunday hai sirf preprations mai tym nikal jayega..
Geet: yea so cum on aaj waise bhi we are free for 2 periods..
Abhay: jao karo practice jeetenge to hum hi..
***************************************************************************************
ok i knw bakwaas tha but mera lappy ka charger is not wrking so bohut mushkil se type kia sab kuch,,.. 😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
res😃
ures
dinka chinka🥳
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the update was just...minddd blowing
finally kria aur louins ka amna samna toh ho gaya
kria cs and vish acs-superb
karan hugging kria was just..kya bolu words bhi nahi mil raha hain,i would say it was just outstanding
karan ka kria ko bachna ka idea was too gud
rey ko aur zyada jalna
karan -kria ko rey ke samne fake couple bano dona please
taani scared of kria,if tani's and rey's was a true lov there would no insecurity,tani is scared of kriya by kria's simple attire,agar kria super hot version mein aa gay toh iska kya hoga
kriti mam is so strict
kria-vish baal baal bach gayi
update chota tha phir bhi rocking tha
jaldi update karna


Edited by unnipgc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Abshu tuijse update puchna paap hai kya.Har tiome cl;iffs mai hi chod deti hai.

See how where did u stop.
koi reaction hi nahi mila.

This was superb one.
Update next part 2morrow itself.

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Posted: 13 years ago
kya abshuu it was an awsomee update i liked vishaka and kriya how dey behaved infront of louanss totaly coll yar am lovng it mannn now update tommrw fast buuut a longer 1 plzzz
aur ha dnt leave cliffhangers am hating deemm
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Posted: 13 years ago
yuppy finally louians met kria n vish...
Kria n vish irresponsibli cs n acs???? 😲
taani is scared of kria... 😆 well she have to 😡
pls update soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Gud 1

atlast gang came 2 no tat vish n kria study in st.lawrence

rey lost in kria

but i wanted 2 c the gang's reaction

update soon
Edited by dildostidance01 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
uwaaan, chota update😭

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