I dont care Rajpreet ff Part 8 Oct 16 updated

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So the story starts from the last episode. NA is going to post Ishu's pictures all over Amritsar. She decides to call Preeto to let her know about her sister's destruction. NA phones Preeto- hello

Preeto- hello

NA- tumhe meine kaha tha na key Rajbeer se door raho lekin nahi' nahi tumhari samhaj mein toh kuch nahi aya. Ab tum dekho apni behen ki barbadi ko. Kal subha hote hue hi mein tumhari behen key woh pictures poore Amritsar mein laja dongi.

Preeto- nahi ap aisah kuch nahi karengi

NA- o mein yeh karney wali hon

Preeto- ap jo kaha who meine kiya' Rajbeer ke riste ko reject kardiya' yaha tak key shaadi bhi kardi.

NA- so yeh sab Simran ki khushi key liye karwa rahi thi mein lekin Simran khush nahi hai issi liye tumhe ab tadap na hoga.

Preeto- nahi aunty nahi agar apne Ishu di key pictures kissi ko bhi dekhae toh fir mein Rajbeer se apni jhooti shaadi ka raaz baata dongi aur fir meine saath mein yeh bhi baata dongi key mein unse kitna pyaar karti hon. Ishu di pictures ko expose kiya toh fir mere pas aur kuch nahi hai koh ney key liye. I have nothing else to loose. Aur agar mein Rajbeer ko yeh baata don key mein unse pyaar karti hon toh fir woh Simran ko choudkey mere paas chale aengay.

NA- tumne Sunny se jhooti shaadi ki unbelievable apni behen key liye

Preeto cuts her off- toh kya apne apni betti ki khushi key liye kisi aur ki zindagi dao pey nahi lagae

NA- just shut up

Preeto- takleef ho rahi hai na lekin yeh socho key agar Ishu di aur Dhruv jiju ka divorce hua toh Dhruv jiju ko takleef toh hogi na aur agar unka divorce hue toh fir mein aur Rajbeer ek hojaengay. Aur agar hum ek hu a toh Simran ko bhi bhaut takleef hogi na.

NA- u wouldn't dare

Preeto- o u watch me

NA- thik hai mein aisa nahi karongi.

Preeto- u better not kyunki agar Dhruv jiju ka pehle ek divorce ho chukka hai yeh jaan key koi bhi ladki itni asani se unse shaadi nahi karegi.

NA- u know what tum mujhe abhi Moher place pey milo abhi issi waqt

Preeto- kyun koi kam hai

NA- han ek bhaut important baat hai jo mein tumhe phone pey nahi baata sakti.

Preeto- thik hai a rahi hon

NA- wahi pey milte hai.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh my what a convo between NA and Preeto...grt job...aisi kya baat hai NA phone pe baat nahi karsakti..😉
waiting for next part...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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well done jess NA is funny thumhari picture pure amritsar mein laga du gi ha ah nice convo i agree and keep it up
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simran calls Rajbeer and asks him if he wants to go to Chandigad with her for some work. She needs his opinion in what to buy. Rajbeer says yes since he already knows that Preeto isnt married he doesnt have to worry about her and Sunny anymore. Rajbeer and Simran are out of Amritsar.

Preeto goes to Moher place and its empty and really late. Moher place was basically a cliff. She has her cell phone in her bag. Just then a car comes and stops. It is no other than NA. NA steps out and goes to Preeto. Preeto- so kya thi woh important baat.
NA- tumhe kitne peyse chahiye Rajbeer se door jaane key liye.
Preeto- u know what... jis din galti se bhi Rajbeer ko apki scam key baare mein patta chalega na tab woh sochengay key Simran ka bhi haath tha hum donu ko alag karney mein. Woh sochengay key Simran is nothing but a spoilt rich brat.
NA- enough mujhe tum se koi baat nahi karni.
NA gets angry and goes back in her car. But she doesnt drive away. She looks at Preeto through the side mirror and smiles. NA- Preeto... aj tum humesha key liye Rajbeer se door chali jaogi.
NA puts the car in reverse and drives to where Preeto was standing rapidly. Preeto was screaming- stop it aunty... roko aunty
But NA didnt stop. Before Preeto could move NA drove the car and hit her. She landed on the edge of the cliff. She was screaming- HELP
NA gets out of the car and goes to her. She was hanging on to a rock. NA smiles- so ab yahi sahi hai Preeto. Tumhara anth aur Simran ki khushi ki zorowat.
Preeto- kyun ap aisa kar rahi hai... meri kya galti hai key Rajbeer iss chere ko pasand karte hai.
NA- tumhari galti hai key tumne iss duniya mein janam liye.
Preeto- please aisa maat karna. Please help me.
NA- good bye Preeto.
NA makes her loose her grip on the rock and Preeto falls down the cliff and she is screaming. Finally the screams end and NA smiles. NA leaves.

Simran stops the car at a lonely place. Rajbeer- kya hua Simran
Simran- mujhe tumse bhaut dino se yeh baat kehni thi.
Rajbeer- kya
Simmi- aur mujhe jo mein tumhare liye feel karti hon wahi kuch lojo ney kaha key tum bhi mere liye feel karte ho.
Rajbeer- kya... just tell me Simran
Simmi- that i love u... sirf ek dost ki tarah nahi balkey like my life partner.
Rajbeer- yeh tum kya keh rahi ho Simran.
He gets out of the car. Simmi too gets out of the car. Simmi- what do u mean
Rajbeer- meine tumhe apni behen maana tha Simran... not my life partner.
Simran- what
Rajbeer- tumse yeh kisne kaha key mein tumse pyaar karta hon.
Simran- mom ne
Rajbeer- woh toh obviously kahengi tumhari maa jo hai.
Simmi- lekin preeto ney bhi kaha tha mujse.
Rajbeer- wait what... Preeto ney... usne tumse kaha key mein tumse pyaar karta hon aur issi liye woh mujhe tumhari oor bheej rahi thi.
Simmi- yeh tum kya keh rahe hon.
Rajbeer- Simran mein tumse yeh kehna chahata hon key i love Preeto not u
Simmi- how could u Rajbeer uski shaadi ho chuki hai.
Rajbeer- jhooti shaadi... meine kud usse yeh kehte hua suna key uski aur Sunny ki jhooti shaadi hua hai.
Simmi- u could she do this.
Rajbeer- i know mein bhi yahi soch raha tha.
Simmi- mujhe Amritsar wapas jaana hai.
Rajbeer- okay toh chalo
Simran and Rajbeer go back to Amritsar.

Edited by JessLucus - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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R u guys gonna die if u hit like or comment. If u dont u then u should know this that when viewers actually comment it encourages us writers to write more.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Huh NA is so stupid...
Preeto will be ok na?
Thankgod simi said to rajbeer...in the show was fed up way cvs were dragging it..
Waiting for next part Jess..grt job..

@Sana
i have pm to Jess that i will read today..i didnt read yest so jus liked but didnt comment..:)
and i know likes and comments encourage writers but watever may be writers should continue with writings always...:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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3 am...
Simmi drove to the Dhillon house. She knocked on the door furiously. Rajbeer- Simmi kya kar rahi ho tum itni raat ko
Simmi- chup raho mujhe Preeto se baat karni
Bj opened the door- arrey Simran Rajbeer tum donu yaha
Simmi- Bj mujhe Preeto se baat karni hai
Bj- lekin woh toh soh rahi hai
Simmi- meri neend kharab karke woh soh rahi hai. Jagao usse
Rajbeer- Simran woh soh rahi hai kal subha
Simmi- kal kare woh aaj kar aaj kare toh ab.
Rajbeer- Simran
Simran came in the house and knocked on Preeto's room hard. Sunny opened the door- arrey Simran tum kya hai
Simran- tumhari so called biwi kaha hai
Sunny- woh
Sunny got tensed. Sunny- woh
Simran came in the room and saw that Preeto was missing. Simmi- tumhari biwi kaha hai.
Sunny- woh
Simran- kya woh o let me guess. Woh apne kisi aur asikh se milne gae hai.
Sunny- Simran apni zaban samhal lo
Simran- kyun sach toh hai mujhe toh sirf yeh patta hai ke pehle Rajbeer ko apne Pyaar mein fasaya
Rajbeer- Simran
Simran- aur ab tum... kya patta tum donu se pehle kitne ladke aur gomah chuki hai
Bj turned her and slapped her. Bj- teri himat keysee hue meri bachi keh baare mein yeh kehne ki.
Sunny- aur usne mujhse pyaar kiya hi nahi woh humesha se Rajbeer ki thi. Jaanti ho yeh sab uski life sirf tumhari waja se ho raha hai. Arrey agar tum wapas US se nahi atti na toh aaj Rajbeer ka baccha uski kok mein bhi hota.
Simran- kya
Rajbeer- ek minute iss sab se Simran ka kya connection hai
Sunny tells them everything. Simran- lekin woh abhi hai kaha
Sunny- patta nahi woh yeh baata ke gae thi ke abhi wapas atti hai.



Cliff...

There were some old people: all male who were walking at the bottom of the life and then they see a body covered in blood. One- arrey iss bachi ki halat toh dekho. Oatho isse.
They picked her up. Then one sees a phone and picks it up.

Rajbeer phones Preeto and the person picks it up. R- hello Preeto kaha ho tum
O- Preeto nahi hai mein Dharamveer hon
R- sorry wrong number

Rajbeer tries again but the phone is not reachable.

Rajbeer- phone bhi kyun nahi lag raha



Then at 5 am...

Preeto is in the hospital, the doctors are checking Preeto. The person named Dharamveer was the only one to stay. He takes her phone and then finds the first name in the contact. Simran

Simmi's phone rings. Simmi- Preeto
She picks up the phone- Hello Preeto kaha ho tum.
Dharamveer- o toh iss kudi ka naam Preeto. Dekhiye behenji jaldi se civil hospital ae ye.
Simmi- hospital thik hai mein atti hon

Simran- Bj Preeto ka patta chal gaya hai
Rajbeer- kaha hai woh
Simmi- hospital kisi Dharamveer ne uske phone se phone kiya
Rajbeer- chalo

Rajbeer Simmi Sunny and Bj go to the hospital. Bj goes to where Preeto was being checked. Bj- doctor mein iski maa hon. Yeh meri bachi hai. Kya hua hai isse

Simmi closed her eyes seeing so much blood on Preeto's body. Rajbeer just stood still remembering all the sweet moments that they had spent together.

Doctor- dekhiye halat bhaut poori hai. Donu pair mein major fracture hai, hume toh lagah tha ke spine bhi tout gae hogi lekin rab ka sukar hai ke spink ko bhaut ziyada injury nahi pochonchi. Lekin chinta ki baat yeh hai ke dimaag mein bhi chot lagi hai. Aur zakham itna gehrah hai ke hum yeh nahi keh sakte ke woh operation ke pehle jeyse mentally stable hogi.

Those words killed Bj and Rajbeer. Doctor- well hume abhi operation start karna hoga.
Bj- toh kijia
Doctor- apko yaha pe sign karna hoga. Aur han hum operation ki successful hone ki koi garuntee nahi dey te.
Bj signed the papers. And the operation began.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Good one...will Preeto forget everything? Will wait for next part:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nurse- o han apki betti ka operation kafi behengah hai.
Bj- kitna kharcha hoga.
nurse- biz lakh (20 lakh). Operation toh hum abhi kar rahe hai lekin jab tak fees nahi milti tab tak hum apko patient se nahi milne dengay.
Rajbeer- biz lakh lekin itni baadi rakam
nurse- yeh humara problem nahi hai.
Sunny- ap kuch toh sochiye hum biz lakh rupee kaha se laengay.
nurse- issi liye toh humne kaha hai ke hum operation abhi kar rahe hai.
Bj- thik hai hum biz lakh rupee dey dengay.

11 am...
Bj and Papaji come and give twenty lakh to the reception. Rajbeer- Bj Papaji apke paas biz lakh kaha se ae.
Papaji- puttar jo ghar humari betti ki zindagi bachane ke kam na ae toh woh kisi kam ka nahi hai.
Rajbeer- apne ghar bech diya.
Papaji- na betta na becha nahi girwi rakha hai.
Sunny- kiske paas.
Papaji- mera ek dost hai uska ek betta hai Govind. Meine usse baat ki woh hume biz lakh dey raha hai aur humara ghar uske paas girwi rakha hai.
Rajbeer- accha hai agar girwi rakha toh apni jaan pehchan wale ke paas rakhe.
Bj- chalo uska operation khatam hua.
Sunny- nahi
Simmi had overheard all this conversation. Simmi thought "hmmm. Preeto tumhe tumhari galti ki zazzah ab mile gi. Mere Rajbeer se pyaar kiya usse apne jaal mein fas aya tha na tumne. I hope ke tumhara operation successful nahi ho. Govind... mein mom se kehke tumhare ghar ko kharid leyti hon. Fir toh tumhe ek chin ki moth bhi hasil nahi hogi. Tumhari behene tumhe kushengi ke tumhari waja se unke ghar chala gaya."
Simmi smirks.

Rajbeer sees Simmi and goes to her. Raj- tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.
Simmi- woh mein thodi frest air leyne ja rahi thi
Raj- o toh jao.
Simmi- han
Simmi goes outside and calls her mom. Simmi- hello mom
NA- Simmi betta kaha ho ap
Simmi- mom mein hospital mein hon Preeto ka accident hua tha. Lekin mom mujhe apse ek kam hai.
Na- kya
Simmi- yeh jo Dhillons hai unka ghar kisi Govind ke paas girwi hai.
NA- what kyun
Simmi- Preeto ke operation ke liye
NA smiles- o
Simmi- toh mein chahati hon ke ap woh ghar uss Govind ko peyse deke kharid ley
NA- thik hai peyse ki bhasah hi unhe patta chalti hai.
Simmi- thanks mom
NA- ur welcome
Simmi cuts the phone. Rajbeer heard is entire convo. Rajbeer thinks " kyun Simran kyun itni choti soch kyun hai tumhari. Meri Preeto ki yeh halat ho na ho tumhari waja se hi hai. Mein tumhe choudonga nahi Simran. Lekin kuch kar bhi nahi sakta. Tumhari maa ne Preeto ka ghar kharid liya hai. Agar meine kuch kiya toh kya patta tum Bj Papaji Meeta di Bani Sonu sab ko ghar se bahar nikal do. God yeh keysi situation mein dal diya hai mujhe."

Preeto's operation is over. The doctors come out. Bj- kya hua
Doctor- apki betti ko toh bach liya lekin uski mentally health ka kuch patta nahi.
Papaji- apne humari bachi ko bacha liye thank u so much doctor.
Doctor smiles and goes.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Simi did like that to give it to dhillions later na or is she really stupid..i mean i feel rajbeer must have misunderstood simi...anyways waiting to know whats next...:)

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